@Shoryu And thus Undyne finds out that anime is real. Accepted. XD

I'll GM post either tonight or early tomorrow.

BWAAAHAHAHAHAHAH!! Thanks :D

And now.... Her entrance!!

There's a chance I might think of some things to tweak or add in, like the claws and teeth I forgot about last night XD But it shouldn't be anything 'huge' I think.

Do you think her 'energy spears' should be explodeable? or would over-charging them just make them bigger?

Probably bigger I guess.

Woop! I forgot to add mentions D: Hopefully a bunch of glowing spears won't be easily missed XD

Less 'the spears aren't obvious' and more 'there's two groups in Mahora and no clues'.

Jeez this is turning into the biggest cluster fuck I have ever seen in all of the RPs I've been in. And I was in a RP where someone put two halo MAC cannons on a forklift.

Um... how so exactly?

It's... lots of people attacking lots of insects. Most of the posts are pretty independent just because it's a target-rich environment, aside from recognising what other people are doing. Some posts might be a bit on the long side for that, but it's not a clusterfuck. No contradicting actions piling up like mad.

Um... how so exactly?

To the part about being a cluster fuck or the mac cannons on a forklift?

@Raineh Daze

It's not as bad I what my post might let it on to be and I didn't mean it as a bunch of contradictions piling up. Sometimes after a long day at work my brain shuts down a bit. If that makes any sense at all.

Better to go do something else in favour of attempting to wade through walls of text when that happens, from my experience. XD

@Raineh Daze

I'm playing some league of legends right now to relax. If anyone wants to join feel free.

I read everything. It's not the clustered, well aside from everyone fighting bugs. We should probably group together or somethin. I was planning on having Forneus finding his way to 7th Street and possibly meeting Dio and Juri.

seems fine to me XD none of our characters really 'know' eachother much, there wouldn't really be any team dynamics so early... A clusterfuck of people randomly assaulting the bugs and possibly, at best, just trying to stay out of eachother's way, or getting 'in' eachother's ways in some cases like all those explosions that nearly knocked someone else out of the sky, just kinda seems like what would happen naturally XD

I read everything. It's not the clustered, well aside from everyone fighting bugs. We should probably group together or somethin. I was planning on having Forneus finding his way to 7th Street and possibly meeting Dio and Juri.

If you want to meet up with Kl'rt on the way over there, that'd be fine by me.

@Shoryu...is the swearing really necessary? The closest Undyne comes to swearing in game is during that whole grass/grooty phone call.

@Shoryu...is the swearing really necessary? The closest Undyne comes to swearing in game is during that whole grass/grooty phone call.

grass/grooty? Aaaand, I dunno actually >3> Considering the content of most animes, and her history of all but 'injecting' anime directly into her blood-stream, It seemed viable. Granted, I could probably have replaced a couple of those... come to think of it, I don't even remember if there was swearing in Undertale...

Of course, I'm also someone who doesn't look at this 'set of words commonly labeled as swears/curses' as most people look at them... They're just words, They have normal meanings, and slang meanings, and Where I grew up such words generally had a slang meaning of 'completely standard expression of either insult, anger, shock, praise, or excitement, or any number of other things depending on the tone of voice.'

Don't get me wrong, I have no intention of turning her into a swear obsessed lunatic that'll say 'fuckin' 3-5 times in one sentence... I 'know' one of those and grates my nerves.

It just struck me that the 'last' thing on her mind while fighting something, or... at all really, save for moments where control is expected, would be 'is my language clean enough for a situation where I'm stabbing pointy objects into things?'. XD

I mean the closestthing she says to "fuck physics" is this
Couldn't really find an imageset of it, but here's a comic illustrating the grooty call.
And no, Undertale did not have swearing.
And I realize I'm maybe getting on your case about this, but I love Undertale and it is important that this is done right.

I mean the closestthing she says to "fuck physics" is this
Couldn't really find an imageset of it, but here's a comic illustrating the grooty call.
And no, Undertale did not have swearing.
And I realize I'm maybe getting on your case about this, but I love Undertale and it is important that this is done right.

Hmmm, I see... Though that seems to me like she intended to watch her language around certain other people... sure, I could definitely tone it down some, but she still always struck me as the type to be completely indiscriminate about something as trivial as language.

On a side note, 'done right' is always in the eyes of the beholder =D

but it's fine, I'm accepting of critique >3>

Oh boy, that is a lot of cursing for Undyne to be doing. I have the same opinion as Screwloose on this.

To be perfectly honest, I do hate seeing characters that don't cuss, y'know, actually cuss. I noticed you did the same for some of Twilight's narration and its just kind of jarring?

Oh boy, that is a lot of cursing for Undyne to be doing. I have the same opinion as Screwloose on this.

To be perfectly honest, I do hate seeing characters that don't cuss, y'know, actually cuss. I noticed you did the same for some of Twilight's narration and its just kind of jarring?

Wait, I did? o.o I don't even remember that >3> though, we all can be a little more vulgar in our own heads than we're willing to show verbally... I suppose I should check on that >3> I wouldn't have thought I'd've done it with 'her'.

It wasn't as obvious or frequent as Undyne. Just the occasional 'damns' here or there.