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Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by ButtsnBalls
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@Frizan Interesting concept and well-written sheet, nice work. The only issue I see is 500 Septims. It is neither practical to carry nor fitting for your character's economic status. You should cut it by half, at least. Make this change and you have our approval.

@Haeo Utu-ja's from The Plague of Markarth, right? Good to see you pick him up again. Sounds like he toughed through a lot of things, and it'll be neat to see him drawing on his past as strength. As for the sheet, it is fairly polished, no major errors I can find. A minor error is that you still call him Tss in the last paragraph of history and relations. If you want to keep Tss as a nickname, just add a note beside his real name.

Lovin' all those fine sheets. I'll try to get everything settled and IC launched this weekend.

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That means I was the 200th post. BOW TO ME!
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@gcold Thank you for spotting those. I've been thinking of him as Tss for long enough that switching to a more correct name is challenging my habits. I hope I don't make that mistake again.

@Leidenschaft, Thanks for the correction. If I recall correctly I used silverborn as a stand in because I was writing the CS with a migraine and couldn't remember the precise name at the time. I forgot completely that I hadn't gone back and corrected it. Lidl'embarrassin.

And all fixed I think.

I do indeed bow to thee Leidenschaft. Jarl of the 200!
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@Frizan Interesting concept and well-written sheet, nice work. The only issue I see is 500 Septims. It is neither practical to carry nor fitting for your character's economic status. You should cut it by half, at least. Make this change and you have our approval.


....what? 500?

*looks again* ....DERP. I could have sworn I said 100! Alright, fixing that now! That's what I get for working on the CS at three in the morning.
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I noticed you accidentally said your glass scimitar was an ebony one in the combat style section. In addition to that, you aren't disintegrating anyone with an adept skill in Destruction. I'm also all for the brooding badass character type, but lighten your character up a bit. This is a group RP, so make him more receptive to people, at least a little bit. His time as a soldier would've probably made him understand the importance of trust and relationships when you're fighting alongside others. As well as all of these, hop on the titanpad and hash out something with the other players so that your character knows some people in the camp.
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@Leidenschaft Right I'll rectify the weapon, originally I was going to go with Ebony but after re-reading the equipment rule glass made more sense. As for disintegrating the Altmer, a one off thing from the rage over losing his mother. It's not something he's typically capable of, I'll be sure to reign in the power of his spells in future though.

I'll look at lightening him up a bit, maybe I'll add a section about working with other soldiers? That seems a bit more like his style, I mean he's not foolhardy and stupid he knows teamwork is essential in war. Kind of like how he defeated the Thalmor commander with the help of his comrades, he's not a lone wolf type but he's not exactly a people person either. Somewhere in between.

Err what is the titanpad may I ask? I'm rather new here so I've yet to get all of the language nailed down.
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@Leidenschaft@gcold Sorry to be a bother, but is there anything else I need to do to get my character approved?
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@Leidenschaft@gcold Sorry to be a bother, but is there anything else I need to do to get my character approved?


I'm sure gcold will tell you how.
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@gcold I saw you said that you were going to try for an IC post this weekend, I was curious about the character roster. Are we going to start whether or not we have 12 players?
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@gcold I saw you said that you were going to try for an IC post this weekend, I was curious about the character roster. Are we going to start whether or not we have 12 players?


I'm assuming so. We're close enough, anyways.
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I'm assuming so. We're close enough, anyways.


Splendid. I was just curious.

Btw, I saw you said Hello to me in TitanPad, I'm not ignoring you, I just can't write in TP from my phone, only if I get on a computer/laptop! So I won't be active in there much, unless I get the rare chance as I mainly write from my phone.
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Splendid. I was just curious.

Btw, I saw you said Hello to me in TitanPad, I'm not ignoring you, I just can't write in TP from my phone, only if I get on a computer/laptop! So I won't be active in there much, unless I get the rare chance as I mainly write from my phone.


I'm sorry about that. Hopefully that changes. I had to write from my phone for a couple days and I was ready to drown myself.
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I'm sorry about that. Hopefully that changes. I had to write from my phone for a couple days and I was ready to drown myself.


Hey no worries (:. I don't mind writing from my phone, I just thought I ought to clarify in case of the future.
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@Haeo @Frizan



@Karos Still reading, hold on.
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Hi, could I borrow a moment of your time, well I suppose STEAL a moment of your time to pitch an idea on the Titan Pad?
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Hi, could I borrow a moment of your time, well I suppose STEAL a moment of your time to pitch an idea on the Titan Pad?


I'll be there.
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Seems like Titanpad crashed for me :I
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