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[OOC] All-Star Marvel: Audax Mundus Novus - Season 1 (Completed) Page 106

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No, not going savage yet.
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I've been swamped this week with school work so apologies for not posting. I'm halfway through a post now so i'll try and get that done for tomorrow!
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:D Can't wait to be accepted. :D
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:D Can't wait to be accepted. :D


Depends if you impressed @Dedonus or not.
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I can't wait for Hulk to get savage, even though he's not savage yet. I'm prepared to watch him get angry.
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Player Name: ChildHoodRuined
Character You Wish To Play: Miles Morales
Moral Alignment (Hero, Villain, Walking the Line): Hero
Affiliation (what group/team/organization, if any, is your character affiliated with?):(In 1610 universe.) S.H.I.L.E.D, Young Ultimate's.


A few things that bother me.

1) While I understand that it is difficult to write the origin of an established character, but the first two or so paragraphs are plagiarized straight from Marvel Wikia, with a few words or phrases substituted.

2) Ultimate Doctor Octopus died in the Death of Spider-Man story arc.

3) Not much explanation was given for how Miles gets to our universe (I do believe we have already established this Earth as Earth-76031 from the thread number :D) One moment, Miles is fighting Doc Ock, and then he all of the sudden is in our universe.

Fix these issues and then I will accept your application.
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I don't know if misspelling SHIELD helps either...
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I can't wait for Hulk to get savage, even though he's not savage yet. I'm prepared to watch him get angry.


He's been savage once in the actual RP, beforehand if he ever came out he was savage.

No twice actually I think now I think about it.
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I think I'm done. [@Dednonus]
If I didn't show what you ordered, it is probably because I cleared all my notes because it's kind of spammed.
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Alright me and @angel vicky are finished and posting up the big scene with the Fantastic Four. It probably sucks but hopefully it doesn't.
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Within seconds, the page fills up with RP members just scrutinizing the post that @DrewVonAwesome posted and beginning to type in their response and also post in the IC, while I wait, narrating.
Big shock.
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Within seconds, the page fills up with RP members just scrutinizing the post that @DrewVonAwesome posted and beginning to type in their response and also post in the IC, while I wait, narrating.
Big shock.


What?

I'm playing FO4 so I may miss the meaning of this but... what?

@DrewVonAwesome That header image is so god-damn large do you need it on both your posts?
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Sometimes it may just shock you when your just browsing all of the posts, and someone posts something and you think everyone is busy, and your browsing other RPs, I just got off from working and it really shocked me.
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<Snipped quote by ChildHoodRuined>
@DrewVonAwesome That header image is so god-damn large do you need it on both your posts?


True enough, I really like it but I should get something different. It shows the costumes me and angel liked the most.

Also @childhoodruined I don't think being snippy like this is going to get you in any quicker.
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Sorry if I was looking like I was looking down on you, I just put random stuff in the OOC. Which I should stop, because it offends some people. @DrewVonAwesome
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@ChildHoodRuined

I still feel that the first paragraph of your character sheet remains too plagiarized.

Here is your first paragraph and the first paragraph on Marvel Wikia that correspond to yours. The bold highlight identical phrases. I do have to say that after looking over the application, the other paragraphs are much better.





While you did fix the whole situation dealing with using a dead character (Cletus Kasday was only mentioned in the Ultimate Spider-Man run), it still leaves many questions unanswered. How did Cletus Kasday get a symbiote (Venom already absorbed the 1610 Carnage into itself) and how did he get that device? Why would he have it? If you wanted these answered to be left as a "mystery" that will be revealed as the roleplay advances, then I would like you to PM me the answers to these questions so that I, as the GM, can know what is going on.

Also, you still mention Doc Ock in your sample post.

And what does the following mean?

because he believes Peter won't always be Spider-Man, and he will need to be the NEXT to continue the whole era of Spider-Man.
Miles Morales Applicaton
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@Facepunch Cap needs to visit Valkyrie first soooooooo.... when you make your choice can you chose someone else. I believe @Gowi might be waiting specifically for Avengers ( I can visit him after Valkyrie if you had someone in mind ).


@Gowi@Dedonus@Bright_Ops@Natty@Drewvonawesome Which one of you is open to an Avengers visit from Hyperion instead of Captain America?
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I think we both agree Iron Man and Captain America need to meet face to face... it'd be wrong not too.
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<Snipped quote by Sep>

@Gowi@Dedonus@Bright_Ops@Natty@Drewvonawesome Which one of you is open to an Avengers visit from Hyperion instead of Captain America?


Hawkeye is technically still on a mission (I'll try to get a post up for him as soon as possible).
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Also, good posts, @DrewVonAwesome and @Angel Vicky.
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