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@RainDash He got info, on the Vongolas. He wants to destroy the next heirs, before taking out the rest of the Vongola trash. My character going forward really depends on the characters around. However, for one way or another, he will (obviously), join the Vongola. Whether it be to destroy from within, or he finds certain characters interesting. From then on it's still going to be an unsteady alliance.
Genso's development will be simmering down of his wrath, finding a meaning to his life (aka friends, family, and perhaps lover). He will never be unselfish, but if all goes well, he will fight alongside the Vongolas for a long time.
If Genso cannot find meaning well, then he will go on to try and kill the Vongola from within, and proceed to annihilate the world. Perhaps he will try to use the Vongola to destroy most of the world and then throw them away.

It's totally up to the players how Genso will develop.


Okay. Give me a bit, I'm also gming something else so I have to go through a bunch of sheets and critiquing them as well. At a glance your sheet seems to be a lot better. One comment is about the mind control, that's edging into godmod territory since you could control probably the other characters.
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Okay. Give me a bit, I'm also gming something else so I have to go through a bunch of sheets and critiquing them as well. At a glance your sheet seems to be a lot better. One comment is about the mind control, that's edging into godmod territory since you could control probably the other characters.


I'm not going to say much about mind control because if you read my whole sheet, Genso's right eye's ability is actually not meant for mind control. His left eye was supposed to be, but because he was a failed experiment, he never could perfect mind control. Furthermore, even if Genso was somehow to perfect his "defective" left eye, I won't allow him to use total mind control on other players without the other party agreeing on the action.

For now Genso can barely use his eye power. All he can do at most is alter the memory of a person like he did with the principle. It won't be until way down the line that he can control minds - that is if it even happens.

Oh and take your time~
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@edgeout It's okay now. Just for future reference, your sheets don't have to be that long. ;)
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I'm finishing up my sheet, just discussing some little things with Rain concerning their history!
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Can't wait to see the rest of the sheets!
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My sheet is done, btw! Just double-checking on a few small things before I post it on here. :)
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We just need Lightning, Rain, and Cloud, correct?
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I believe so...
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Username:
tastzico.

Name:
Kevin Sinnet.

Age:
18.

Gender:
Male.

Country of Origin:
England (Native of London).

Role:
Senior in high-school.

Flame:
Dying Will Flame of the Sun.

Weapon/Fighting Style:
His body, which had been hardened through many years of street-fighting, through various styles of self-taught martial arts and through his adaptability in dangerous, urban settings.

Appearance:

Olive skin, light-brown eyes, sandy-blonde hair.

Ten-Year Bazooka


Personality:
Kevin is a young man of unparalleled confidence and recklessness. As if he's the physical embodiment of the word "carefree", the boy can be seen walking around the town of Goldcrest with an infectious grin on his face, each step powered with an energetic bounce while he's out there doing whatever he pleases. He's very outgoing and friendly as his bright attitude can be quite charming. However, he's quite direct and blunt with his words which could be overwhelming to some people. Because of his competitive nature, he rarely backs down from a challenge - even if he knows it's inevitable for him to win. Kevin is intuitive enough to know that he'll gain valuable knowledge on how to succeed the next time around just by going out there and tackling the problem head on. Because of his tenacity, he is also very prideful. The only time he gets angry is when his dignity is on the line.

History:
As a kid, Kevin was basically a delinquent who relished in the thrill of fighting. Over the years, he had adapted and honed his brawling skills so that he remained at the top of local neighborhood gangs that were ran by middle-schoolers. But Kevin had something that most unruly children do not have - loving and caring parents. Scared of their son's future, they decided to send him away to his grandparents who lived in a little, quaint town named Goldcrest. Of course, he was disgruntled when heard of the news. But he respected his parents and sought out to reform himself for their sake. Ultimately, he spent the next few years remedying his bad habits and eventually became a decent student. In fact, he had grown up to be quite a healthy and charming young man.

But damn was he bored. His hunger for fighting had never sated over the years, having only small bites of brawling whenever the local bullies had acted up within his school and neighborhood. However, Goldcrest was quite peaceful and the thugs never bothered to instigate any further when they felt the blows of Kevin's fist. So things remained quiet, and Kevin became increasingly agitated and restless.

Then one day, when he was walking home from school, he noticed a fellow student being attacked by a group of men armed with various melee weapons. To Kevin's surprise and before he could react, the student had already gone and initiated a counter-strike against the ambush. It looked like the had some sort of training, but he seemed so...reluctant to defend himself. His stance was great, but his he seemed unwilling to actually fight back. So Kevin threw himself into the scuffle, aiding the other boy in battle. It only took a few minutes for them to fend of the attackers after a quick exchange of blows.

Both were breathing quite heavily as they slumped to the ground and sat so that could catch their breaths. Though the mysterious boy said nothing, Kevin himself was grinning as he dusted off his hands. There was a moment of silence between them as they recuperated. Finally, Kevin turned to his fellow schoolmate and gave a soft but genuine smile.

"I'm Kevin," he introduced himself. "And you are?"

Little did he know that the boy he had just introduced himself to was the next heir to an infamous mafia organization.

Who knew that this little moment of fun for Kevin turned out to be the moment that would forever change the course of his future. Things may not be so boring anymore than it originally was.

Quirk:
He's a very picky eater, not liking most vegetables (bean sprouts being his least favorite). He also grew fond of reading and oddly enough, his favorite genre are romance novels. He owns a pair of reading glasses that he keeps safe in his backpack.

Overview:
Kevin Sinnet is a young man born as an average individual but forged himself into a force to be reckoned with due to his positively explosive and sometimes overbearing personality. A former delinquent trying to make his parent's proud. He's a natural-born fighter, having physical capabilities beyond the standards of boys his age. Despite growing up as a ruthless street-brawler, he has a high sense of sportsmanship and would never abuse his strength to bully.
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The form looks great, but guys, not everyone can start out knowing what the Vongola is or being in the Vongola itself. Peeps should be recruited via RP to keep things interesting. :)
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Yeah? I'll change it, because that was my plan originally. I think there was some miscommunication and I ended up changing my CS to have it so he was newly recruited at the start of the RP, but I would rather have it that Kevin gets initiated through the progression of the RP!
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Yeah that's the point! :)
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Okay! Finished the last part of my history a bit to foreshadow Kevin's recruitment to the Vongola rather than having him be in it from the start. Anything else, just let me know. :)
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For some reason it still looks like he's currently part of the Vongola. D:
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Which part makes it seem like he's part of the Vongola? The only thing thats established is the little history between Kevin and Aiden, whom he just met at the time. Otherwise, he's just a senior in high school trying his hardest to stay on the path of the straight and narrow, though he's itching for some sort of excitement in his life.

So am I not suppose to have a pic for the 10 year bazooka section or something? Or should I remove the "Sun Guardian" part from his roles? Let me know what I need to change!
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@tatszico Well it says he's the Sun Guardian under one of the headers. :)
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@Ambrawill change it. currently at work so it'll be tonight :) and how about the 10 year bazooka picture? should I take that down for now as well? if you need anything else changed just let me know!
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No, it's fine.

I hope we still have the Lightning Guardian around here... if not, Ult, mind if you take Lightning as well?
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How about your sheet, Ambra? I'm excited what kind of character you have made. :)
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I am as well. I know very little about this character. whitey red
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