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Worked, but I missed your message as my window had apparently frozen
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Is this still available to join?
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Absolutely, and always. But, I can really only pick up Jedi.

On that note, I'm going to move forward, and if my MIA players rejoin, great, but if not too bad.
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Cool stuff, a few things:

The stat section is just kind of hard to read, if you could just bold the stats, so that it's easier to see the skills that go under them. Maybe put some extra spaces in between for more clear division.

You're two points short in stats(I know you're not finished, but I wanted to make sure you knew this) and one short in skills. When you write the skill, don't write how many points were put into it, write the number of points pluse the stat that controls it. Because that gives you the dice you roll and that's the important number. We can do the math, but you don't need to make us.

Lastly, I want to be clear that I don't want to retcon your character into the Jedi entourage. You'll need to start as non-affiliated with either order, and at this point in the game the best place to start is employed under Dren's archaeology company.
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Ahhh, I see. Thank you for pointing those things out. I'll get right onto the alterations!
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Not a problem.

I've had a thought about where she might work:

She could be Dren's current tech person, but he would hire a new one(Diabolicalrhapsody's character) because one person wasn't enough.

About that titan pad you guys are working on your post at: Is it blanks? I follow the link and there's nothing written but instructions on how to use titan pad.
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no one's posted yet. I'm there, though, if you want to do a collab.
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Alright I think I fixed the skills and stats but can you run by it again to make sure that it's right?
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I may have given you the wrong numbers before. Your stats are fine, but you're one over for skills. There should be seven points, I'm counting eight. I would suggest just taking "lift heavy object" off, because it doesn't really mean anything specific.

I would also suggest changing "quick draw" to "blaster" unless you mean for her to have that skill only at the very beginning of a fight.
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I'm usually pretty late on the pad.

@TheUnknowable you can start without me and I can write my two cents when I'm around, that way would be better than enternally waiting for someone to make a first move.
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@MinimumWe did a collab, but as your character was mentioned, we're waiting to post it to give your character a chance to respond in the collab.
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Alright, the stats and skills are officially good
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I... I think I counted wrong the second time. Twice. You're one short now, I think. How many skill points do you have in? I'm counting six, is that not right? Was eight wrong last time? Why can't I count today?

Anyway, Unknowable, I'm going to assume that the Yit was one of the two ships landing.
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No that was my fault, alright I did get it now. We are good.
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Cool stuff, looking forward to the bio. Do you have any questions or need of guidance?

So I had two thoughts, one serious and one silly.

Serious: The Korriban chapter should end with a duel between Saidor and David. Regardless of the ending, David and the Jedi will have to flee(because even if he wins, he'll have just beaten one member of a hostile faction whose base he's still in). I had in my head this image of Saidor investigating the ship, where David is still in hiding(having sensed him, or just gotten curious), and them dueling there, possibly fighting through the ship and eventually bringing the fight to the landing pad and out into the public view, probably the first time most of these people have seen a lightsaber.

Silly: I had this thought, in writing not in audio, of a conversation between David and Dren which would go

"Saidor, I presume?"

"It's pronounced Saidor, but yes."

"Oh, my apologies."

Because I don't actually know how to say his name.
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@GiskS-eye-door only it's two syllables.
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Its unfortunate my timezone is different...
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anyone mind if I post our collab now? We'll do the battle in the same Titanpad later.
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Works for me
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