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Someone is sar in front of it, barring it from opening. I think it was dusk that collapsed in front of it.
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POsted. Trying to get things moving and hopefully Andrew can get in the basement after nick wanders off.

@Cohors (and anyone here really)

I do have a plot written out actually. Im giving freedom to characters though.

@Vocab No sweat, you got it right.
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I'll post tomorrow.

@VulkanFor the sakes of my next post, how many should we say died in the incident?
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Hmmm...its a big place, so im gonna say...300 or so?

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Sorry if my post is a bit...like...boring or unnecessary. There's not a lot I can really get him to do that relates to his captivity before he gets rescued.
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Rather good post I think @LetMeDoStuff
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This is a wip. I'm not happy with it right now and I need to do more reading and work on it. So that being said. Tell me what you think.

Name: Elijah Craigh

Age: 28
Faction: Freelance

Gender: male

Appearance:
Elijah is a simple man, preferring jeans and boots over suits although he does own one. He does however tend to favor somewhat nice button up shirts with the sleeves rolled just below the elbows. His style of dress matches well with ruggedly handsome face. Adorned with dark hair and even darker eyes.

His 5’11 frame is covered by a lean 200 pounds worth of muscle and organs. While heavy you would never expect it. Even upon close close inspection one would think he’d he was closer to 180 pounds. A lean athletic frame that is built more on running and endurance than it is through brute power.

Nationality: American.

Personality: Justin has pretty much two modes. Nonchalant or I'll kill you serious. There is a very goofy and fun loving side to him that comes out when it probably shouldn't. There no telling when he might break out into song and might throw in a dance as well. The other side of him isn't one that anyone wants to see. He can be a danger to anyone without thought of who that person might be.

Elijah has thing he does. Where he does what is right to him, morality and to certain extent orders. He has gone against a few of them in his time, but he always felt he did was right.

Even with all the danger that this life brings. To him it's a lot easier than his life before. He still struggles with some of the technology that's around him.

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Skills: Elijah excels in combat and demolition. Long rage, close quarters combat and demolitions are his specialty. If it can be killed he'll kill it, if it can be destroyed he'll destroy it. There is no mistaking his abilities in combat and demolitions.

There is an innate gift for stalking. Making him very good at infiltration and tracking.

Elijah also always trusts his gut. Even when intelligence says others wise. Most of the time it works it out for the better bit when it doesn't it goes south really badly.

History: Elijah was born in a poor side town. His parents died not long after his 13th birthday. Till the day they were killed in an accident, they taught him to survive. When he found out what happened, he did the only thing he knew to do. He took off into the night and learned the hard way to survive.

The moment he came of age. He enlisted in the army. He figured it was only way out of living on a mountain top . There were... Certain issues that he had overcome. Being alone for so long he wasn't used to being around people. Because of his life style most things didn't make sense to him. Except for combat. He excelled in that in an almost horrific manner.

It wasn't long before he found himself in an elite ground unit. The Spartan Unit. Over the years he has cross trained to a great many different skill sets. As a result he is almost a one man wrecking crew. Part of that is training and part of that is experience. He has a high mission success rate. There are more than couple of rumors about his accomplishments.

After having some issues with some high ranking officials. Elijah left the New Order Army. It caused a little more than stir for such a decorated solder to leave the military the way he did. Rumors float around about what happened that range from him sleeping with someone's wife to him killing someone important.

Other: He likes pie.
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I have a query after skimming through it. New Order isn't the kind of government to just let you go, especially with all the rumours floating around with him. Best chance is he'd be taken away and killed just to get everything over with. I'm saying this because (and spoilers for Nicks backstory) with Nick, he killed a pretty high up military officer and, despite being the most valuable citizen New Order has, they debated killing him rather than using him as a Processor.

That reminds me, I should really get writing that backstory, huh...
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I have a query after skimming through it. New Order isn't the kind of government to just let you go, especially with all the rumours floating around with him. Best chance is he'd be taken away and killed just to get everything over with. I'm saying this because (and spoilers for Nicks backstory) with Nick, he killed a pretty high up military officer and, despite being the most valuable citizen New Order has, they debated killing him rather than using him as a Processor.

That reminds me, I should really get writing that backstory, huh...


Fair point, I'll change it if I need too. My counter to that would be you killed someone, I just had some issues. There is a huge difference in that.
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Ex_miliary man huh? I wonder if Juno or Nick might have known him from before.

@AcerRo Vocab is correct, i dont think he could just get up and leave. Of course, you can just write him going AWOL.

Anyhoo...once Vocab posts, ill stick Andrew in that basement somehow. Ill also write up a bio for my newest, and arguably most important character.
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I'd be fair to say they would.

I'll make that edit. Any other questions or am I good to go?
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@VulkanIll take that master cheif armour for him then!
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Nick is going to take the piss out of him so hard. First for his gun having 7 bullet mags and secondly that he was discharged. Prepare to have a psychopathic lunatic who lives his days in a new order state of the art containment facility spout nonsense about guns and warfare ^_^
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Hmmm...seems alright, although you are taking a few more liberties with the lore than i would like.

Honorable discharges are a thing, although they only happen to REALLY good personnel that have proven themselves loyal enough not to defect, and even then, they are expected to aid in another new order section. Just getting that across.

Directorate of public safety sounds EXACTLY like something ive already established. i was gonna put a faction bio up for them on my next post. (Ill PM the details to you if you want) This is a mistake on my part however. My bad.

If he was privy to sensitive information, there is no way in hell they would just let him leave and go indepedent. Sorry. He could have been MOVED to the military as a consultant however.

Not sure if i want a conspiracy that goes all the way up to the high council. PM me it if you can please. Something that involves a single member might be alright though. (like bribery or something) But of course, it might be fine as it is, i just need to see it first.

And what do you mean by the "Reign of the new order"? In the weapons section. The new order is reigning right now. It sounds like you are referring to the old world civilizations. Otherwise, its fine.

So yeah. Im happy to fill in any information you need.

@AcerRo

Yep. Just edit it in and you are good.

@Error

Come again?

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@VulkanI just came back to this thread, for what you said my brute could have as armour.
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Well you know what we said earlier.

Juggernaut armor like in all of duty, that can stop small arms but is very slow, is a large target, and is weak at the joints. Thats kind of the maximum im willing to allow.
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@VulkanI made another post, sorry. I just wanted to get this scene out there....
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As a head's up, this is a little bit of some information that I would might as well give to introduce Major James, if that is okay, seeing as he is an important character in the terms of Marcus' side of the story but not a Roleplay Character? I'll add more because this seems a bit pointless.

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Hmmm...seems alright, although you are taking a few more liberties with the lore than i would like.

Honorable discharges are a thing, although they only happen to REALLY good personnel that have proven themselves loyal enough not to defect, and even then, they are expected to aid in another new order section. Just getting that across.

Directorate of public safety sounds EXACTLY like something ive already established. i was gonna put a faction bio up for them on my next post. (Ill PM the details to you if you want) This is a mistake on my part however. My bad.

If he was privy to sensitive information, there is no way in hell they would just let him leave and go indepedent. Sorry. He could have been MOVED to the military as a consultant however.

Not sure if i want a conspiracy that goes all the way up to the high council. PM me it if you can please. Something that involves a single member might be alright though. (like bribery or something) But of course, it might be fine as it is, i just need to see it first.

And what do you mean by the "Reign of the new order"? In the weapons section. The new order is reigning right now. It sounds like you are referring to the old world civilizations. Otherwise, its fine.

So yeah. Im happy to fill in any information you need.


1. Kasperov left the Military in order to join the DPS, but now that I've read what I had written again, I see that this was not made clear. Sorry.

2. If It's based on the CIA/KGB, then sign me in.

3. I have to keep this, sorry. Notice how I began calling him Kasper only after he goes independent, that is the point when he cuts his ties to the New Order. This is the point where he becomes a new man. This is the point when his strings are cut.

He is contracted by the military.

He goes back to the MPS after a request. Not an order.

He leads his own unit.

Even his code name - Kozak is a spelling of Cossack. Cossacks are a group of predominantly East Slavic people who originally were members of democratic, semi-military communities in Ukraine and Southern Russia.

I believe you misunderstood how it happened too. I am making a much more detailed biography and I am planning to release it as flashbacks in my IC posts, ofcourse if you will accept my character.

4. I will explain it to you in PM.

5. A honest mistake I made. I am very sorry. :)
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