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Well actually...

Nobody taught me how to write a damn poem. The standard of English taught at my school was laughable. I actually learned the language on my own armed with a frigging dictionary when I was in primary (or elementary for Americans) school.

Back in secondary (middle in US) and high school I was so tempted to "insult" my teacher by trying to write a "poem" using Math formula.
Suffice to say, of course that didn't work, because it's a stupid idea. XD
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Armed with the Dictionary that's a scary thought all teachers should run from you. I am a huge story writer I started when I was 8 and kept writing so much wrote a 60 page book when i was 10. Course I had no concept of you know paragraphs and such so it was a massive Paragraph. My teacher put an FF on it, I cried for a day.
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I admit that I can come off as a really intense person - because I'm a hopeless perfectionist. Sometimes I may be unconsciously rude, so if I am too harsh on you, I apologize in advance.

Whoa, FF. We don't have that kind of grading system here, but it does sound really bad. o__o

Hmm...like you English isn't my native tongue. For me besides the dictionary (mostly I use it to check spelling and the meaning of words to make sure I don't use them wrongly), you can try reading books. Not just a few personal favorite books, but from as many different genres as you can. Study and take down notes on how the different writers write their stories and learn from there. Of course, keep practicing. :)
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Yeah FF was pretty bad because I was ten and had no concept of how to write good so last year I rewrote it and got a B I was so happy I hugged my teacher so tightly.

I have studied so many books and why people write like that and the emotion you get from it as well. I also watch Movies and get tips from Movies as well learning how the screen writers write out the lines and how things are positioned as well. Movies are fun to look at a lot of times.

No I don't mind do not worry you where not harsh to me and o understand people get stressed and such so do not mind that stuff.
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That's cool - better than me, where my teacher would not expect me to go below an A. It's pretty stressful, but at least it came with the privilege that I could skip English class because there's nothing left for my language teacher to teach me, lol.
Yeah, I'm always under constant stress - whether I like it or not, for no apparent reason. Always in search for a way to pull myself out of this hell, always...

Ah, movies. The only time when I felt the movie did some justice to the books it adapted from was Lord of the Rings trilogy - well, because I couldn't even get past the mundanely long descriptive paragraphs (like, who describes a freaking gate over two pages in extreme detail?).
I've pretty much stopped watching any newly released movies - or reading any upcoming books. I dunno, I'm losing interest and most of them fail to amuse me like the older ones. It felt like the success of Twilight made me finally realize how much the quality of storytelling had degraded in our current era.

I'm trying to control myself and not be an ass to quote your messages and edit out your typos, so thank my high fever for stopping my proofreading tendency. Heh. >:)

I think for the rest of the poem we can work on them after the IC has developed a bit - since for now we don't know if it's going in that direction. Won't be uploading my IC post anytime soon, still not quite recovered from my fever yet.
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Oh you sick? I hate being sick it sucks. I had strep all last weekend.
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Sorry that I haven't been responsive. If you saw my status I'm trying to get up all the posts I'm owing all my partners. Please be patient with me - thank you! :)
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Okay that's ikay
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I shall await your posting
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(Been high on Final Fantasy the past few days while forced to stay indoors to avoid the haze.)

Anyway, now the haze is gone at the mo', so back to do some catch-ups! Should be getting up my (long-awaited) first post before the end of this week. Thanks for the patient wait - appreciated :'D
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Its all good , can't wait
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XD Anyway post's up!

Oh yeah, I keep forgetting to tell you that the title is not spelled "Hero's" but "Heroes". :P
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@tsukune

This is what she looks like when she goes slightly into a outraged form a blast of soul power flies from her body. it creates a forcefield around a wounded friend or herself so she can morph to her half dragon from

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@tsukune um....hello ?
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@Dragon princess

Sorry for the epic delay! Right now I'm in Hong Kong until Christmas so my presence on RPG will be very scarce.
(HK has even lesser public wifi access than Singapore.)
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@tsukune Alright, I shall await your return
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God Christmas you are rather warm this year
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