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Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Letter Bee
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[@Diggertron], good post.
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@Diggerton, Good post!

Sorry for getting your mention wrong.
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[@XxRedCrossxX], @BreakingMe, your characters are forbidden from going after Cedric; he's reserved for @Mass City's character.
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@RedXCross, sorry for messing up your mention. Anyway, see above.
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@TaliPaendrag, It's a very good post; glad I didn't fully miss it.


Thank you! :D
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A friend whom I haven't seen for three years is coming over today so I will be back on later this evening. ^^
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@XxLyraxX, All right.
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Will post later.

Edit: Or should I wait for more to post?
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Mass City
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Name: Cartwright ( His first name is classified)
Appearance: Late forties man, with greying hair in shape but does not stand out in a crowd.
Age: late forties
Sex: Male
Power: none but he can kick your ass seven ways to Sunday and has a mind for strategy.
Short bio: [Classified: Top Secret Umbra]
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@Mass City, Short, but approved.
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@Mass City, Short, but approved.


that's the point Cartwright is a don of a bitch with a multiple choice background. His actions will make him. If the players are clever they will discover bits of his past.
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that's the point Cartwright is a don of a bitch with a multiple choice background. His actions will make him. If the players are clever they will discover bits of his past.

This may be an unwanted critique, but in my opinion a mystery isn't particularly interesting if there's no reason to be interested in it. All we know about Cartwright is:

  • Name
  • Male
  • Forties
  • Average looking
  • Can 'kick ass' and is strategic

If you want people to be interested in his past there needs to be something that brings players in, a reason to search for that mystery. Players aren't going to be interested in the background of someone they know absolutely nothing about. It would be nice to put out at least a tidbit of information to pique people's interest.
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I agree with @Diggerton. Currently there's only really a stock character to understand. We cannot understand how your character grows and changes unless we get a brief understanding of where they started.

Otherwise he feels faceless. Its hard to form a connection with a faceless character.
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@Diggerton,@RedXCross, ultimately, it is @Mass City's decision.

Anyway, who else has to post?
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One more person needs to post, then I'll move the plot!
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I'm going to be AFK for most of the day; just a warning.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Mass City
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when you are rounded up there will be a more in depth character profile but at the moment none of you have Umbra level clearance.
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Anyway, am at a crap resort with worse Internet than I have, so won't be unable to talk on MeetingWords for the next few days.
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@XxLyraxX, I need you to post!
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I will post soon but I have other things to work out.
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