Whoops I betcha his age got bumped up possibly cause of me, my bad lmao. And alrighty thanks, I'll just discuss the special characteristic with you through pm.
That aside, shhhhh just don't think about it too much. Esp the near nude scenes. The same goes for you tho, Xanxus-kun :P
lol fine, point taken. Wait till he asks Rei to get him sirloin stea-- //SHOT Anyway, I'm not giving her the same personality as her so no prob, hopefully you'll forget about it XD
Even though I supplied at least one of those images
two of the images! And I wanted him to look more like ricardo and xanxus was the next best thing when I was searching lol It made much more sense then what I had before given his lineage.
Hey guys! I'm bumping Yoshiaki up to age 16. So anyone else who is 15 that wants to can do the same. If you do not want to it is fine we can manage to work it all out regardless. I'm just trying to keep things around the same age. So try and keep it one year above or below the boss's age. If you need to see or know more, he is in the Character Tab on the first post.
NOW!
@ChronoBovino - You made edits and now fall into the range of acceptance. You can add your CS to the character tab.
@Amaterasu - You too can place your character in the character tab, but lol I'm not sure I can take Satsuki seriously. I keep thinking of Kill La Kill and what I've seen of her and what I know of her, and it doesn't help lol XD
@Sho Minazuki - First off, given that Chrono was already asked in an earlier version of his CS not to be a master of his fighting style, it is only right to ask you the same. Logically, you shouldn't be a master either. Furthermore, your hand-to-hand skills should not be on par with your sword skills. Yes, you don't want to be useless without a sword, but you also can't be just as good without it.
You're a swordsman and your background doesn't allude to any projectile use learning. So, your knife throwing shouldn't really be a thing. You aren't a marksman either. Also, when you say he is good with knives, do you mean kitchen specifically? Cause, keep in mind, being good with a kitchen knife and a combat not is not really the same thing.
It is also important to note that skills such as these, throwing knife and combat knife usage, would be subject to the same limitation as the hand-to-hand skills. Furthermore, please try to understand that I'm not being needlessly anal about all this. The more skills you have, which typically take a multitude of practice and specialization, the less likely you are to be good at them. More moving parts doesn't make a machine better.
He's not a master, he's simply mastered the first form of his fighting style, which is well, the basic form. There are still about three other sword forms, and two hand to hand forms, not to mention his own original form which he is still developing. Each of the moves he has, actually have a stronger version in mind when things really get going.
The throwing weapon thing is not something he'll be using yet. That's something I'm planning him to learn later, it's just he has the aptitude to strike things to make them fly accurately at a target, something he's arbitrarily done with something like cans, or a ball at school.
And by good with knives, I do mean mostly kitchen in that entry, but if he learns it can extend to any. More accurately he has a good aptitude for knives.
Again, I do plan on having him use throwing knives as a secondary weapon or variety later. His TYL already uses it.
He has basic hand to hand skills, but no actual hand to hand techniques yet.
So I've been going over and over in my head with my char and now that I see the boss I have better idea than what I originally had. What do you guys think a completely unassociated delinquent char like who's yoshiaki's rival. they're the two always going at it, the majority of their injuries being caused by each other. Basically a rivalry of the two strongest delinquents in school. And it's this rivalry that eventually gets him roped in to the events and ends up fighting alongside the Yoshiaki and his guardians.
So I've been going over and over in my head with my char and now that I see the boss I have better idea than what I originally had. What do you guys think a completely unassociated delinquent char like who's yoshiaki's rival. they're the two always going at it, the majority of their injuries being caused by each other. Basically a rivalry of the two strongest delinquents in school. And it's this rivalry that eventually gets him roped in to the events and ends up fighting alongside the Yoshiaki and his guardians.
@ChronoBovino I was thinking he'd be the guy who kicks yoshiaki's ass into shape whenever he needs some sense knocked into him.
Um... I don't think Rei would take to kindly to him being called the second strongest delinquent. Idek if yoshi is the first strongest XD lol Don't get me wrong I like the concept, just, yoshi already has one or two people to beat his ass into shape. Like Rei and Fon. You know??
That reminds me... Didn't you spread have a cedef agent made??
Asteion is the cloud tiger cub belonging to Sachiko it's main focus on abilities is to provide support. It does so by carrying four extra daggers for Sachiko's use. It can also multiply the amount of daggers to a unknown amount through the use of the cloud flame.
Fighting Style: Satsuki uses a mix of fighting with twin daggers. She weave in bewteen the enemies attacks to confuse the enemy and strike them at certain intervals. When needed she uses her flames to multiply her daggers and making it fall upon the enemy or summoning her box animal a tiger cub to distract them.
Techniniques:
Hyakuretsu okazan ("Hundred-Strike Cherry Blossom Slash") Like its name suggests it is literally many strikes upon the enemy. Using the basis of propagation she uses it to multiply her daggers before having them rain upon the enemy.
Hyakka Ryoran ("Many Flowers Blooming in Profusion") Is a simple a technique in theory with use of her cloud flames she extends the blades of her daggers making it more like swords before releasing a cross slash at high speeds upon the enemy.
Notable Abilities: Flexible Body Assassin Mindset - Though she hates doing so her training has granted her a unique mindset in which when needed she can forgo any and near all emotions and focus completely on the target. Though constant use can push her beyond the brink in which she can enter a reverse state a mindset in which all she cares about is the killing of others. The use of the Assassin Mindset gives her a boost in combat ability as well this is done due to the removal of self placed mental barriers to make sure she no longer kills anyone.
Personal Data Background: Sachiko was born into a family of assassins it was also due to this that her life was largely decided for her. Her early childhood was devoted to the knowledge she would need in order to make sure she was able to carry out the failies goals and her missions. From a young age she was taught in her families art. With her choice of twin daggers they capitalized on her speed and flexibility. With that in mind she was raised and given personal tutors in those fields. She was going to be their perfect weapon against their enemies.
Though sadly after a few mission Sachiko had enough and got tired of the endless missions of assassinations she was being sent on. This however was overlooked and since she was refusing missions they quickly put her under another tutor. One that was going to hopefully teach her how to use and access her flames but also teach her how to fight against other flame users. Said tutor did as he was told and taught her how to use and access her flames.
Sachiko had few things she cared for which in hindsight only helped in her families goal of being their pet child assassin. Though unlucky for them they seemed to have garnered some bad reputation and her family was wiped out beyond her sister and her. Seeing as she was "free" Sachiko travelled from city to city before she stopped at Namimori due to her sisters mysterious illness she came under. It was also there Sachiko made a vow while she tried to stay away from the "dark side" of things it was clear she needed contact in the underground to really help her sister. So she entered and enrolled in Namimori and vowed to gain the attention of the Vongola family in hopes to come to a agreeement she would be their assassin if they were to help her sister.
Personality: Sachiko is a person who is often called "cool and collected." Her speech is also very careful and formal. Although she tries to hide it, she is easily embarrassed by displays of affection towards her. She does not do well with showing her emotions making it hard for her to express what she really means. Though she is a fierce protector to anyone who does manage to gain her loyalty going out of her way to make sure that they are all right. She has a strong drive and determination to get her goals completed no matter what though her main focus will always be towards her sister who she seeks to help at all costs.
Relationships Ayumu Tomoe: Sachiko's Relation with Ayumu is a bit complicated despite being friendly to her and the first one she knew due said person being the one to get acclimated to the school. Sachiko tends to stay away from him most of the time due to lack of understanding on what he "gains" from interacting with her more than what is required. So she tends to stay away from from Ayumu when possible.
Miscellaneous Data Nationality: Japanese Birthdate: April 8 Blood Type: B Height: 5"1 Weight: 115 Likes: Cherry Blossoms, Music, family Dislikes: Killing, overly loud noises. Hobbies: drawing, watching cherry blossoms, computers Talents: working with computers Family: Sakuya Kanno (Sister) Character Theme:
@Demon Shinobi I didn't notice that Rei was a delinquent. Yes I had the other char but then this popped into my head and I liked the idea of a char completely with no ties to the mafia and is not chosen to be a guardian being caught up in the insanity and deciding to devote himself to it. I was also thinking that maybe CEDEF would train him but because he'd rather be completely involved in the Vongola's struggles whether it's an emergency or not he wouldn't be considered to join CEDEF. Now that I think about it he could maybe end up as the next leader of the Varia. I just think their's more potential with this char idea than my other one. And when I said the two strongest delinquents maybe that'd be like their own self proclaimed thing trying to be better than the other thus the rivalry. And hey maybe this could be kind of a theme with this generation, a chunk of it's members being delinquents given a chance to be more. Just tossing around ideas at this point though.
EDIT: Ooooh, it could be like a whole trifecta. Rei knocks both my char and Yoshi around whenever they get out of hand. The Erza to Natsu and Gray lol
Known simply as 'The Serpent', or 'Il Serpente' in Italy, Hisaki has become a powerful assassin under the Vongola as their Rain Guardian. He wields Rain Flames, with Mist Flame abilities to compliment it. His main style is trickery. He hides his snake katana with Mist Flames, disguising it as a cane shortsword. His trickery around his weapon alone is as a result two-fold. He employs the use of Rain flames to augment his strikes and slow the opponent down, while using Mist flames to outpace them. To make up for his lower mastery of Mist flames, he uses small-scale illusions at an incredibly fast pace. He carries hidden throwing knives as an alternative combat option, known for striking them with his blade to throw them in unexpected ways and directions.
Name: Hisaki Kawaguchi Aliases: Namimori Serpent Age: 17 Gender: Male
Training Bokken with Sheath: A training sword with a specially made sheath.
Fighting Style: Hisaki's fighting style is deceptively passive, moves slowly, then suddenly lashes out explosively at the right moments in a counter-attack. The way Hisaki personally fights is using deception, and baiting his opponents into making the wrong move. He employs an Iaido style of swordsmanship, as well as hand to hand to compliment it. He’ll often try to provoke his opponent though, which matches with his style. His rudimentary skill and precision is best shown in his ability to strike knives towards targets accurately as ranged weapons.
Techniques:
Shinsuiryuu Original Techniques
Ryuubi (Dragon Tail) - Backhanded strike with the sheathed weapon, before bringing himself into a draw stance. A standard pro-active move where the user strikes first. Ryuusou (Dragon Claw) - A sideswipe attack using the blade handle as the contact point that simultaneously brings the blade into a draw stance. Used to parry. When he enters a draw stance with any of these two moves he can simply do normal slash and draw moves, or the special techniques below. Totsukawa (Crashing River) - A simple dashing draw slash that if blocked can be appended into a Battou attack, converting it from an Iai move. Niseiryu (Twin Crossing Dragons) - Two slashes in rapid succession before sheathing. Senkou Shinryuuken (Flashing True Dragon Sword) - From any draw, a wide range slash that slashes everything around him. It’s not a simple horizontal cut, but a single slash that changes direction, intensity, and angle to strike multiple targets in key spots in a single swing. This is a draw technique and ends with a sheathing of the sword, and is the first advanced technique learned in this style.
Hisaki’s Original Techniques
Jakatsu (Snake Slide) - Enters stance while dashing to the side. What makes this unique is that the footwork is so quiet and subtle that most of the time the attacker doesn’t know where he is based on sound and direction he moved out of their sight alone. This move will end with him entering a draw stance, where he can use the following, or any of his Shinsuiryuu techniques. Jadoku (Snake Venom) - A slash that’s aimed at vitals or muscles, it requires the least amount of effort, and is often the best way to disable opponents, or defeat them without causing greivous harm. At the same time it can cause the most harm by striking more painful places instead. Zanrouga (Slashing Prison Fang) - While in draw stance right before being struck he’ll execute Jakatsu backwards, then forwards past them in quick succession while slashing them once.
Special Characteristics:
Multiple Flames (Mist, not yet awakened).
Personal Data Background: Hisaki was born to a poor and neglective family, father and mother eventually were imprisoned, and he was sent off to his uncle in Namimori. He was a problem child, but his uncle’s dojo allowed him to better focus his emotions. He was an excellent student in the Shinsuiryuu Itto-ryu, or “True Water Dragon” style, a single blade style, but maybe a little zealous or rebellious, as he very quickly started developing his own techniques and style based around trickery, something his uncle isn’t happy about. The fact it was before he was even recognized a master of the style too added to this.
Him being a problem child didn’t really stop though, it just was far less. He gained a reputation for being fairly provocative, and this didn’t sit well with the other juveniles and the gangs they formed, so he beat them up when they came looking for him. Because of the way he moved he was likened to the fast and sudden strike of a snake. This brought him to the attention of the Vongola in the area as well, partly due to his lineage, he was then recruited and it leads to now the present day. He knows little of the Vongola, but he sees joining them here as a chance to make use of his skills, something he’s painfully aware that won’t land him any jobs were he to choose to live a normal life.
His uncle was actually once part of the Vongola, but fell ill, leaving him with some permanent damage to his body’s functions, preventing him from ever using his dying will flames, or exerting himself physically. Hisaki’s mother and father were actually traitors, and are currently imprisoned by the Vindice. His uncle is uneasy about his current involvement with the Vongola, as he wanted to lead his nephew on a more righteous path without involving himself with the world of Mafia. He is unaware of this so far.
Personality: Hisaki is a rather callous person, he would taunt his enemies snidely and sometimes if provoked, rather angrily and without relent. He has a softer spot for small animals, his favourite being lizards, and despite that attitude does have honor towards those who earn his respect, and not actually very easy to provoke, if anything most of the time it’s his opponents who are provoked. Those were the result of his discipline under his style of swordsmanship. Had he not gone under training and discipline he would have become a much less cooperative person.
Relationships:
Reina Saotome [Friendly Rivalry]: She attacked him believing the gang members he was brutally beating up were being bullied by him, that was not the case and they clashed. They are slightly at odds due to Hisaki's seeming disregard for others, though Reina was one of the few who earned his respect. It won't stop him from taunting her if they fight though.
Nationality: Japanese, small quarter Italian. Birthdate: 16th of July Blood Type: No clue. Height: 5’7 Weight: 52kg Likes: Fried seafood and egg dishes. Dislikes: Arrogance. Hobbies: Fighting games at arcade. Talents: He’s talented with a knife, he hasn’t learned to, but he can learn to make high class sashimi if he put time into it. Family: His uncle, Touya Kawaguchi, and his parents, Sako and Jiro Kawaguchi. Character Theme: Gluttony Fang TYL: Gluttony Fang II Other:
He's not a master, he's simply mastered the first form of his fighting style, which is well, the basic form. There are still about three other sword forms, and two hand to hand forms, not to mention his own original form which he is still developing. Each of the moves he has, actually have a stronger version in mind when things really get going.
The throwing weapon thing is not something he'll be using yet. That's something I'm planning him to learn later, it's just he has the aptitude to strike things to make them fly accurately at a target, something he's arbitrarily done with something like cans, or a ball at school.
And by good with knives, I do mean mostly kitchen in that entry, but if he learns it can extend to any. More accurately he has a good aptitude for knives.
Again, I do plan on having him use throwing knives as a secondary weapon or variety later. His TYL already uses it.
He has basic hand to hand skills, but no actual hand to hand techniques yet.
Just bumping this up. Is it fine or nah?
Former post quoted for reference.
Yeah, looks fine.
Just remember that in terms of skill, your H2H is going to be less effective than the specialized H2H people. Same with projectile throwing, but you're not using that right now anyway so you shouldn't worry about it.
As an aside, man we have lots of people who can brawl. Last round had me expecting swordsmanship everywhere it's why fighting style is in the sheet.
Also @Demon Shinobi, I'll repost him once I get all the relationships written out with the people I organized them with, but I've revised my sheet like I told you I would so basically I turned him 17 so he could be into senpai squad like I originally wanted
