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@KoukiWelcome to hierarchy, of experienced one.

@pyromanSince we have an odd number if GM's, can I suggest a two person acceptance rule for all future applicants. It helps to have at least that many check it out, as one person might see something that the others don't. Don't have too, of course, but it's a suggestion.
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@RaijinslayerOf course. Having more than one set of eyes helps that everything looks good from all angles.
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We should write trailers.
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Totally down for that
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@KoukiYou, sir, are brilliant. It would be an excellent way to get an idea of your own character and others.
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The only question is....giant mob fight(Ruby Vs Beowolves) or one big enemy(Weiss Vs Giant Armor)?
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@KoukiI'm probably going to go with illegal activity, Blake and Yang Style
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Good choice, good choice.

Me, I'm gonna go mob rush on this.

Last time I did Jimmy's Trailer, he was stopping a White Fang crime; it ended up being him against a Paladin after beating the cannon fodder that are White Fang members. Hey, we both had the idea to do crime stuff, we're idea buddies!

THIS TIME! I'm gonna go with mob fight, show the full range of his dust abilities. Plus, I really love killing cannon fodder. I mean, I love challenges but there's a freedom to fighting the minions ya know?
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@KoukiI know, my character's Trailer moment in a previous RWBY RP was against fodder, and it was pretty epic.
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@RaijinslayerThey're so good.

To take out all of my fodder, Jimmy just blew them sky high into the air with a shot of explosive fire and then used gravity dust to suspend them in a sphere of gravity. Then he jumped into it with a blast of wind and started using the guys as platforms, kicking off of them to dodge bullets when they tried to shoot him and then freezing them solid with a snap of his fingers.

His arm fires dust when he snaps his fingers.

I'm kind of interested in reading yours now though!
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Would we all be doing trailers? And if so, could one possibly obtain assistance doing so?
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@Kouki Here you go



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@greywolf375If you need help, I'd be glad to collab with you once my CS are made an approved.

Edit: I do not think they'll be required though.
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@Raijinslayer That would be great, Thanks a bunch!
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@greywolf375No problem, a GM's here to help and that goes double for CO-GM's
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@KoukiHere's another pretty good scene, a very long collab, but it shows off the personality of Silme and another character I'm thinking of making(Carver) very well. Read if you feel like it, O think it's a pretty good read, all things considered.


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@Kouki Here you go


Good, but it had a few grammatical errors.

Another small thing, you don't need so much detail in action scenes. This is probably pointless cause this was from the past so your style may have changed already but some things are better shown than told.

Like, you don't need to say what Dust you switch to, you just have say that you switched. We'll get the rest when, in the second after switching, your weapon becomes engulfed in flames or you jump in the air with a gust of wind, context will tell us what dust you're on now.
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@KoukiHmmm. . . Good Advice, very good advice. I'll keep it mind. And yeah, grammatical errors happen because I tend to think faster than I type, and thinks get a bit jumbled or switched around, plus I've mostly posted from my phone, making it a pain to proofread.
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So, are we waiting on anyone else to finish their cs? How many people were you looking for in total?
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I and three other guys are making a team together, so don't forget about us.
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