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Ah. Will we be getting started soon?


Funny you mentioned that because I'm working on the opening post right now.
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Funny you mentioned that because I'm working on the opening post right now.


Neat... It just occurred to me, should I have put down what Adam's Novacain does? His method and the effects of the drug, I mean. I could go over them in pms with you if you like.
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@ReaptheMusic You can if you want.

If it's something that would likely be a well kept secret, you should keep it that way.

Up to you, though ^-^
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@Vocab You do have a good point. I could just keep it between myself and anyone he may be interested in attacking via pms. ....Okay ^.^ It suits his stealth element. Thank you for that.
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The first post is up
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Glad I didn't decide to be a first-year student.

Wait did I misread it? I thought it said the first-years had to go first.
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And I, of course, decided to be one. This is going to be a great year...
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Hey Guys listen it's just a show what you know test really, nothing else really, she just wants to see if the students are confident and skilled enough to kill dummies that won't move, that's just it, but there will come a time where the training will be harder than just stab a dummy several times.

Also talking to the dummies doesn't count as taking care of the dummies, where here to attack the dummies, not talk to them.

Also there is an army of dummies, Sayaka didn't burn all of them to the ground, there are still many that can be cut shot or blown up.
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@Spriggs27 Not sure if directed at me, but I only have her holding back because of the fact some crazy girl just blazed, what sounded like, all the dummies. She'll do her bit, but I figure I'l let others post before she goes and gives it a stab.
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@FantasyChic Oh okay, it's just your and Matt's post seemed like Sayaka burned all of them, she just burned a straight line of them to the ground, not all of them I even added it to the bottom of the first post so it doesn't seem like it.
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@KitzTheFawn Uh Kitz I haven't said if your character was accepted yet.
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So...Colette really didn't "go up" per se and not do anything. She more or less just stayed in the crowd of students and watched. I'll go along with it though because she is, more or less, a lost lamb at this moment.
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@KitzTheFawn Your character is fine except for one thing.

In the weapons section, you have two weapons. You've got one, with multiple of the same type, that's fine. However, her equipment can just be another space to have weapons. If you look at the other characters, pretty much all (minus maybe two) carry things that do not serve a combat purpose.

You can have the kusarigama (sickle and chain) or the katana, but you will need to choose one or the other and place it in the weapons section - discarding the other. It'd also be nice if you could include and image or description, but you don't have too.

And, if you would, please elaborate more on her skill sets. Not just her combat skills, though those need to be fleshed out more too, but also her non-combat skills - such as cooking, painting, what languages she can speak etcetera.



And, for future reference, please check the OP to see whether you can just place your character in the character tab. Some roleplays allow you to just make a character and start playing it without being reviewed, but the large majority require review from the GMs before being accepted.

@Spriggs27 You need to add anything else?
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So...Colette really didn't "go up" per se and not do anything. She more or less just stayed in the crowd of students and watched. I'll go along with it though because she is, more or less, a lost lamb at this moment.


Oh, sorry. I assumed she put herself in a prominent position cause she's melee oriented
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Oh, sorry. I assumed she put herself in a prominent position cause she's melee oriented


It's all good. Keep it, because she is still acting like a lost lamb by not going up and doing anything right away. That'll change in a few posts though :)
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@KitzTheFawn Hey, put some heart in your weapons and equipment. "Handguns" could be one of hundreds of guns. Do some research. Find a company and model you like. Pick a caliber, and attachments (suppressors, lasers, flashlights, whatever) if you like. Try describing your melee/blade weapons too. Color, sheath, engravings...special features that make it yours.

Put some work into your weapons. After all, you'll be spending plenty of time using them.
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@KitzTheFawn Your character is fine except for one thing.

In the weapons section, you have two weapons. You've got one, with multiple of the same type, that's fine. However, her equipment can just be another space to have weapons. If you look at the other characters, pretty much all (minus maybe two) carry things that do not serve a combat purpose.

You can have the kusarigama (sickle and chain) or the katana, but you will need to choose one or the other and place it in the weapons section - discarding the other. It'd also be nice if you could include and image or description, but you don't have too.

And, if you would, please elaborate more on her skill sets. Not just her combat skills, though those need to be fleshed out more too, but also her non-combat skills - such as cooking, painting, what languages she can speak etcetera.



And, for future reference, please check the OP to see whether you can just place your character in the character tab. Some roleplays allow you to just make a character and start playing it without being reviewed, but the large majority require review from the GMs before being accepted.

@Spriggs27 You need to add anything else?


Well I was gonna say have the skills be a little more descriptive with the skills and more descriptive with the weapons, but everyone else seemed to have just said most of what I would've said. Also might want to use the basic terms Kitz is a rookie rper.

But yeah @KitzTheFawn Listen to what everyone else have said, we are here to help you. Also remember, don't be afraid to ask any questions.
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@MatthiasAngel This is a good point.

And with that I'd like to say that the Student Body President lives and breathes!
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Thank you ^~^ I'm a bit of a noob sorry sorry I've never used one of the websites before. I mostly just used to roleplay with friends on social media's. But thanks for the feedback
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