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Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by GreivousKhan
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Also, just for a quick shout out here.

@Pepperm1nts@gorgenmast@BlackBishop@Abefroeman and @DeadBeatWalking I hope we have not lost you to vilespawn machinations! ^^

Just checking in to see what's up.
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So, good news is I am alive, bad news is that I am TDY for the next few weeks. As such, and I know, this really bites, I am super busy, and probably more than likely will not have the time that this RP deserves. Work is hectic and I am the lucky one who gets to be in charge of a handful of fresh peons who need training.

For now, consider me unable to partake, and my nation is now an NPC/controlled by GM/Player. Sorry for the delay, but work is having a wonderful backlog of things for all of us to do. Hope to see you all around. Rock on.
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Alright, @Abefroeman, sorry to hear that. That really sucks. Thanks for letting us know and hope you don't get to buried in work. ^^

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I've started work on an area. This is the family template. If anyone cares to look over it that would be great. If any of you think that it won't work in this RP world then I can adjust accordingly. I'll start work on the actual region now!

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Bad things have happened.
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There are now two Isa's .. I approve this being a popular name. MAMA @ISOTOPE
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So, good news is I am alive, bad news is that I am TDY for the next few weeks. As such, and I know, this really bites, I am super busy, and probably more than likely will not have the time that this RP deserves. Work is hectic and I am the lucky one who gets to be in charge of a handful of fresh peons who need training.

For now, consider me unable to partake, and my nation is now an NPC/controlled by GM/Player. Sorry for the delay, but work is having a wonderful backlog of things for all of us to do. Hope to see you all around. Rock on.


PM us with any vital information you'd like to be NPC'd (such as voting, etc), thanks for the notice.
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I've started work on an area. This is the family template. If anyone cares to look over it that would be great. If any of you think that it won't work in this RP world then I can adjust accordingly. I'll start work on the actual region now!



Just to comment on this thus far. I. Absolutely. Adore these characters. Easily see many possible plots arcs that could develop here. I'm also quite happy that we have a notable dedicated breadbasket in the south. ^^

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-sniped-


A few details I'd like to clear up. The area you have is not really a continent any more than Spain, Italy or Sweden is. it's on a peninsula, and I mention it so people who read your sheet don't get confused so please change that. Another note is your capital population is insane for a city in the middle ages.

For reference.

Huge/Big Cities of this era range from 12,000-100,000 people, with some exceptional cities exceeding this scale. Some historical examples include London (25,000-40,000), Paris (50,000-80,000), Genoa (75,000-100,000), and Venice (100,000+). Moscow in the 15th century had a population in excess of 200,000 but these are as stated the very rare exception, not the rule. That current level of urbanization would cause mass starvation throughout your province-- given possible arable land available.

So adjust the capital population, aside from that the overall province population level is fine along with the rest of the sheet. Though note no realm on its own really has the funds for a standing army.

Edit: Which is not to say your province does not have some imperial forces funded by the Empire in the region.

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Fixs

- Replace "Continent" with country
- Toned down populations to medieval standards
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I've been bored in the week or so since I left, the story hasn't progressed much pertaining to the area I was involved in, and a GM privately contacted me about rejoining. So, I figured I'd rejoin (or at least start loitering in the chat again).
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Fixs

- Replace "Continent" with country
- Toned down populations to medieval standards


Excellent, btw I did mention it but it was probably missed. Your overall population was fine in the rural regions. You should easily be in the same league as places like Xandria and Ignis in terms of overall province population. No glaring issues beyond that.

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Am I cleared to move the NS to the Character tab and begin work on my intro post?
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@Sovi3t The sheet and house are both clear for posting in the NS/CS thread. I've pointed out all the large discrepancies that I could see.

Accepted.

Also, feel free to join the chatzy.
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@TheMoatedGrange So looked over your NS, this is one of those moments my job is made easy given how well you constructed everything.

Gwethydd approved.
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I've been bored in the week or so since I left, the story hasn't progressed much pertaining to the area I was involved in, and a GM privately contacted me about rejoining. So, I figured I'd rejoin (or at least start loitering in the chat again).


I assume no one has an issue with this. :) @GreivousKhan

Khan, could you also pm me everything I missed? I'll be on in four hours or three.
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Boom, post!
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The Ignesians, like the Gwethyn, had traditionally been linked by their historical allegiance to the Empire; they had been the first and second kingdoms to 'bend the knee' to the Empress.


BTW Xandria was right after Ignis in joining The Empire. Otherwise excellent starting post, welcome to the RP.
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