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This is essentially a repost of this RP. I didn't make the original RP, but got permission to repost it so I would be the GM.

Hello, everyone. I decided to throw together a role play I've been wanting to try out for a while. It's going to be a character driven RP first and foremost where everyone can essentially do anything, pursue any path they want. However, I am aware that purely character driven role plays can easily die out as there is no overarching story, so I added a quest which encompasses the world if one decides to follow it.

There are no limits to players and anyone can join at anytime. I hope I have managed to make things somewhat clear in the descriptions below, but if anything is unclear I am more than willing to listen, edit and make adjustments if needed.

The World:
Astrovia, a world both beautiful and savage. Villages, towns and cities dot many a location within the world though between each reside an abundance of monstrous beings roaming the wilderness. From the icy wastes of Rak to the green and forest covered land of Nethora, Astrovia offers an enchanting world filled with magic and dangers. Seven different species fill the more civilized roles and live within the cities they call home. Of course, Astrovia is a world filled to the brink with dangers outside the borders of every city, however this has not stopped the many different species from raging war on each other throughout history. Such mistakes have granted knowledge of course, though many races still shun one another due to past conflicts.

Today, one can quite easily spot every species in every city upon the map due to the wonders of trading. One could say that Astrovia has managed a long deserved peace between the many people of the world.

A marvelous reality where everyone is born with magical powers, Astrovia is colorful to say the least. Magical properties are stretched out among all the civilized races and is considered just another part of one's body. Of course, despite the cultural view on magic, those born into the darker paths are often shunned for something they cannot control, a choice they never made. Hexes and Necromancy usually leads those blessed, or cursed, with their powers down rather shady paths due to society's view on them. Some inhabitants choose to not even pursue their magical affinity and rather focus on more material aspects of life.

Towns, cities and villages in Astrovia are usually built close to one another due to protection. Since the majority of Astrovia is filled with monsters, people tend to stick together. Each city is governed by its own ruler who also governs the towns and villages surrounding it.

People lead relatively simple lives, but the local taverns have started to be filled with a tall tale about disaster and chaos. Vague descriptions of a Necromancer are offered along with fears of an undead army. Due to many sightings, a certain worry has washed over people in Astrovia but most simply disregard the tale as a madman's cry for attention. Everyone does after all have their own matters to settle and responsibilities to attend. It is not often a person has time for imaginary tales such as this.

There are however those who do not want to take the chance and put a lot of effort and coin into solving this mystery. By hiring adventurers from across the world, many nobles are now concerned that the tale might indeed contain fractions of truth. Due to the coin involved, it is common for those unused to an adventurous life to also pick them up on the offer and investigate this assumption.

Technology:
Medieval with various cultured weaponry spread out through Astrovia.

Playable Races:
Each species include every race within that gene pool. Every race has the possibility of being anything, however an Orius will be physically stronger than a Neth and a Lah'na will be more graceful than a Rakonai. One simply has to be reasonable.









Non-Playable Races:




Geographical Locations:

Lahria - Land of the Felines

Nethora - Land of the Rodents

Sha'varen - Land of the Aves

Orensus - Land of the Rhinos

Rak - Land of the Ursine

Nin'Thassias - Land of the Canines

Toth - Land of the Bovines

*The Sak'all were nomads, and therefore, don't really have a 'land' to call their own. During the RP, however, they live basically anywhere that isn't cold.

Magic:
The magic of Astrovia is widely used within the daily lives of its inhabitants. Even darker magic on a lighter level is considered naught but means of resolving an issue. However, deeper knowledge of Hexes, Necromancy and even Illusionism can be considered taboo and are shunned by the people of Astrovia. Waking the dead from their slumber with Necromancy, causing illness and sickness with Hexes and deceiving others with Illusionism is highly illegal actions. More straight forward magic like Elementalism has its obvious restrictions and is never truly shunned as long as it is used responsibly.

The following descriptions are rather loose and players who decide to use magic are free to be creative with each individual school of magic as long as it is done within the limits of reason. If a player wants to be able to weave spells in a way I have not described within any specific school, discuss it with me and I am sure we can come to an understanding.










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Here is the sheet. You'll notice that I've left out the Biography section and that has been done on purpose. The reason behind this is because the original GM would rather people use the personality section to them using the bio section... and I've never had an RP where all of the characters' backstories were developed in the actual RP, so I might as well try that here.


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Can i make lizard instead of my Ursine?
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You sure can.
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So, should I start now, or later?
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I think he's good i've just taken Kern and modified CS a little
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Wait for Hans, Evanist and Haru
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I hear my name and I have been summoned.
Mornin' guys, well what accounts for morning there.
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In My country it is 11 PM so good Evening
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I can see that English isn't your first language now that I'm actually, you know, looking at your app. I hope you don't mind me nitpicking, but...

"Firstly he becomed a Monk because" should be "Firstly, he became a monk because", as became is the past-tense version of become.

"He's eating the plants he collect when walking in the Woods. That's weird because he is a Crocodile and crocodiles should eat meat but" I think what you mean is... "He eats the plants he gathers while walking in the woods, which is weird because he's a crocodile, and crocodiles usually eat meat, but" messing up tenses and or changing them mid-sentence is really confusing for English-speakers.

"Low as to his race, and" might mean... "He's a bit short for his race, and" English is weird, we use 'low' as a position, as in, that shelf is low on the wall, and while it technically COULD mean short, we never use it like that.

"Appears in patns, on the feet long Travelling boots ." probably means... "He wears pants, and also wears tall traveling boots on his feet." Again, long refers not to height, but to length... I'm probably still confused just from the wording, also, you misspelled pants. Just a note... we only capitalize the first letter in a word if it's someone's name, or the first word in a sentence.

"Fight is last resort, but" might be better worded as... "He only fights as a last resort, but"

Again, sorry for all the nitpicking, but... it's a little confusing to read, especially since you seem to have erased some 'enters' which makes a few categories on the CS sort of blend into each other.
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Sorry, but English isn't my primary language for some text i'm using translator. I don't mind some nitpicking i must learn.
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And i will edit it, thank you.
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It's alright. Heck, you're not even remotely the first person I've RP'd with whose first language isn't English.
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Thanks but already edited it, can i add him now?
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Well, it's like 6:16 AM where I live so I'm still a little bit groggy.
But anyway, here's to hoping we can move more quickly and reach farther than before.
Also, Stardew Valley is amazing.
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I'll let you through. I did miss some grammatical errors, but it'll do for now.
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Stardew Valley is indeed amazing, reminds me a lot of Harvest moon
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And now we wait.
Still don't know which bachelor to pick though, I asked my sister and said she preferred Sam or Elliott.
Maru is nice too, she a qt.
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Im here Im here...
So... what I miss lol

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@Evanist
Not much really, we are starting over so that's good.
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