I thought yours was an interesting character, and I didn't really have an opinion on the writing, even as a native English speaker. The things that confused me were what Halvtand pointed out with your brief description of the family split (which'd be super cool if expanded upon, I feel), and her nickname being "Evil". Like, was that gonna be something her family called her? Gobi nin? The last I heard (aside from never reaching Chuunin) was five years before, when she was just a kid trying to find a new home and way of life with the younger gen of her clan. Anyway, I'm eager to hear about Hisokawa mk.II

General Info

Name:
Katashi 堅 "hard, firm", Nobu 信 "trust"

Nickname/Alias:
None at the moment.

Gender:
Male

Age:
Sixteen years of age.

Age Appearance:
Nobu has a massive amount of muscle for a child his age so he appears a little older than he is.

Sexuality:
Heterosexual.

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Loyalty

Village:
Gobigakure no Sato – The Village Hidden at the End

Birthplace:
Sunagakure no Sato - The Village Hidden in the Sand

Organization:
Gobigakure no Sato - The Village Hidden at the End

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Ninja Information

Clan/Bloodline:
Nobu knows little of the Katashi clan. They are a clan that primarily resides in Suna but due to a recent issue the clan has been spread out. The Katashi clan has a Kekkei Genkai similar to the Scorch Style.

Rank:
Chuunin.

Chakra Nature:
Fire (Katon).

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Appearance



Body Type and Shape:
Nobu is constantly training his body. When he has free time he will most likely be somewhere working out. He is peak physical form for someone his age and is very lean. He has a barrel shaped torso and longish legs.

Height:
5'9" - 175cm (I'm not good at judging height and weight. Plz help :)

Weight:
193lbs - 87kg (I'm not good at judging height and weight. Plz help :)

Hair Color:
Red

Hair Style:
Short and spiky.

Eye Color:
Nobu's eyes are actually redder than his hair. A common occurrence among Katashi's

Clothing:
Nobu wears a dark red tight long sleeved shirt with protection on the wrist, hand, and upper shoulder. He wears loose fitting black pants and shoes that cover his feet. He has a scarf that he wears as a memory of his mother and a mask covering the bottom half of his face.

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Biography

Background:
In the process of fleshing it out.

Today:
He has been a chunnin for about a year and a half now. Ever since his mother was murdered by their clan and his father left for revenge Nobu has been training so that he could leave the village as well. He thinks he might be strong enough to leave soon. If only he could get Genjutsu down.

Personality:
Nobu has a deep love for Gobi and all the people living there. He will often go out of his way to help anyone who is in danger or just needs help. He considers everyone in Gobi his friend and despite having the desire for revenge set deep within his heart, he can be a knucklehead sometimes and be the butt of many jokes. When training and fighting is concerned he is one of the best in Gobi for his age. Anything else and he is a major goofball. He focuses so much on training that he doesn't notice or even comprehend most of the things someone his age would be use to.

He will protect anyone he deems a friend and will stand by them at all times. Unfortunately though he has trouble trusting people. If someone does something suspicious he will watch them without caring if they notice his mistrust. He hates clans that have a system set up like his and the Hyuuga clan are set up. He believes hard work can overcome any odds, but he hates it when he needs others help.

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Special Traits

• Burning Flames
  
  Like most in the Katashi clan, Nobu has a spirit likening to a fire. The longer he fights the larger the fire gets. Each second that passes in battle the fiercer he gets. Once he gets going it is almost impossible for him to stop himself.
• Inept at Genjutsu
  
  No matter how hard he tries, Nobu will never be able to do advanced Genjutsu. It is an issue with his bloodline. The Katashi clan for some reason or another can't perform advanced Genjutsu.
• Loads of Chakra
  
  Nobu has a little over the average amounts of chakra. However, due to his style of fighting he either doesn't really use much of it or he uses a lot of it quickly.

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Equipment

• A Ninjato which he has sheathed on his back.
• A ninja pouch on his right side which carries basic first aid equipment and a few nutrient bars he makes himself.
• A standard weapon holster on his upper right thigh with ten kunai and six shuriken.
• Three explosive tags and two 25 meter tripwire to activate the tags.

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Jutsu:

General Info

Name:
Renedo Aroshima

Nickname/Alias:
Aro

Gender:
Male

Age:
Born 40 or 50 or so years ago, records are not too clear.

Age Appearance:
21.

Sexuality:
Heterosexual.

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Loyalty

Village:
Village By The End - Hidden Village Of Endings.

Birthplace:
Land Of Fire, The Uchiha owned Areas.

Organization:
The Hidden Village Of End.
He's also a fan of the local library.

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Ninja Information

Clan/Bloodline:
Uchiha, he is the proud owner of imperfect non matching Sharingans with one Tomo in the left eye, and two in the right eye.

Rank:
Chunnin.

Chakra Nature:
Fire.

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Appearance

Body Type and Shape:
A slender frame, like most other young men of his profession. However, unlike his peers in the village, he sports a lot more scars. He's athletic, but not really bulky.

Height:
5'9, 177 CM.

Weight:
132 LB, 60 Kilograms.

Hair Color:
Black, just like his peers.

Hair Style:
Short, dark, spikey.

Eye Color:
Golden hue of brown - obviously red while using his Sharingan.

Clothing:
Aro's seen wearing pretty style-less clothes. Coats and long pants over fishnetted shirt and a T-shirt. He wears ordinary ninja tabi on his feet, pouched for his gear on his legs. He usually wears beanies as the cold bothers him, usually seen somewhat overdressed in most ocassions.

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Biography

Background:

Aroshima was born to the powerful clan of Uchiha - today known for their firebreathing skills and their hand in founding the Hidden Village Of Fire. However, this young man is not born in modern times, but in a time before anyone had ever heard about a Hidden Village. When the world was savage, hard. When all you had to count on was your brothers - his fellow Uchiha. When everyday was a fight for survival, 360 degrees combat at every turn, something that would wear out a young heart at every turn.

But, one Uchiha, Aro's second cousin, almost a decade older than himself - Madara, would lead the wave in changing this. He would, with the help of his brother, and other very powerful members of their clan carve out a path in the Land Of Fire, putting them on the top, right next to their rivals, the Senju. Aro, ever since he was old enough to hold a kunai has been pitted into battle.

Soon, the hidden villages would be formed, Aro was present at the original founding of the Hidden Leaf, a day of of happiness, a happiness shortly lived as soon they would be sent into war, once again. When Aro was 17, the first Shinobi World War started, and Aro was deployed to protect his village, along with his fellow brethren, Uchiha, Senju fighting side by side.

His story met it's apparent tragic end during a battle with a group of chunnin from the Hidden Mist Village. They had the unique advantage of the Ice-Release on their side, as their leader was a member of the Yuki Clan. During this fight, Aro lost many teammates, an anger found it's way into his heart, and he activated his sharingan, putting him on a Bloodline versus Bloodline battle - the kind that would go down in history.

Their battle would take place in the mountains near the Cloud Village, near a civilian settlement. Their final blows were clashed inside of a dark cave.
When he had the Yuki on the ropes, the Mist Shinobi unleashed his ace in the whole - a freezing technique like nothing else. Freezing the Uchiha solid, he was declared dead by the Yuki, and left in the cave, encased in ice.

And that is where Uchiha Aroshima's story would end. At least as far as anyone would know. Truth was that Aro was not dead - merely unconcious and in cryostasis. Where he remained for a quarter of a century, before being thawed out by explorers - whom were much too surprised when they found a boy falling out of the ice they were digging in, even more so when they found out his heart was, albeit barely, still beating.

Assuming ninjutsu was at work, they took him to the Ninja Village, the Village of The End. Where he would be nursed back to health, using what medical jutsu they had. As well as several months of rehabilitation, his body coming back from the brink of death. During his rehabilitation, he met a young woman, Mitsuko, one year younger than him - she was a doctor and she had lead the medical work that had saved Aroshimas life. Aro fell in live with her, and after a couple of months of him trying to get her attention, Mitsuko finally gave him his shot - which he completely wasted, their first date was notoriously terrible.

Yet, she gave him a second chance, and this time, they would get it right. The two fell deeply in love, Mitsuko had a sense of wonder, a sheltered way of living that Aro could not even fathom, they bonded over Aro's trauma, his terrible past and the things he had been through. Yet, they spent equal amounts of time talking about Mitsuko's childhood, one of safety and love, true love. Things the Uchiha had never felt, and in that way, he too, was sheltered.

He would thank the doctors for saving him, traumatized by the fact that he had been frozen for so long. Bidding Mitsuko farewell with a heavy heart. He would head to Konoha, lurking from the shadows, all of his friends, family and loved ones had either moved on, or passed away. In the end, Uchiha Aroshima had died in that cave.

He would return to the village of the end and reunite with Mitsuko, taking on a civilian life as a carpenter for a time, building signs and everyday things on the outskirts of the village. He was a carpenter for over a year, but his career changed when he heard someone shouting for help out in the woods - a civilian man and his wife getting attacked by bandits. Aro sprung into action, but two years of civilian life had taken it's toll - not to mention the backlash from his cryostasis. It took everything the once powerful ninja had to defeat the three bandits. A realization that reignited a flame in the young man's soul.

In the following weeks, he would approach the Jounin of the village and he would become a shinobi of The End, which compared to his old ways was essentially still a civilian lifestyle. But it did involve more training and honing his reflexes and abilities again.

Today:
Thanks to his skills and experience - one of the few battle hardened shinobi in the village, it did not take him long to become a Chunnin of prime quality in this very small village. He and Mitsuko are still in love, and Aro is comfortable, happy and safe in Gobigakure. Yet, he still wishes to explore this new world - to catch up on the things he missed, to try and make a better life for himself. He wants to get out there and build a better world. A better world than the one he left.

Personality:
While somewhat easy going, he's a lot more serious than his peers, he thinks one should always work as hard as possible, that goofing of is for losers and that hardships builds character. He is dreaming back to the life he left, the one that was stolen from him, yet, he is still hopeful for the future.

He's got a strong will, yet not one to quickly rush into combat, he is a fan of picking his fights and is not above using dirty tricks to win a fight. He's a ninja at heart, all that matters is winning, not how or why. He is fiercely loyal and is not one to question orders, and will disapprove of anyone who does not respect the hierarchy of the shinobi world.

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Special Traits

• Over a Decade of combat Experience
• Skilled in the trinity of Ninjutsu, Taijutsu and Kenjutsu.
• Sharingan and a wider understanding of the world - albeit an aged one.
• Frostbite scars on 80% of his body, that he's getting regular treatment for.
• Prone to shivers due to his body still, after two years not being used to being out of cryostasis.
• He could eat his own weight in food, coming from an age where a piece of bread a day was a miracle, two meals a day is paradise to him.
• He freaking loves beds.
• Severe Post Traumatic stress, he has regular panic attacks as a result.
• His body has yet to fully return to it's regular muscular strength it had before he was frozen, making him a bit physically weaker than his peers.
• He has low chakra reserves and below average chakra control. He burns out quickly in a fight because of it.

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Equipment

• Kunai, Shuriken, Smoke bombs.
• His old, broken Samurai-esque armor that he was found frozen in.
• Tanto he keeps on his back.

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Jutsu:
He is able to use the tree climbing and water running techniques - techniques he learned after being thawed out.

Ninjutsu:
C-Rank
Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
B-Rank:
Fire Release: Great Fire Destruction
Fire Release: Great Fire Annihilation

Genjutsu:
C-Rank:
Genjutsu; Sharingan - By Aro's skill and maturity of his Sharingan it can only dispel genjutsu of D or weaker rank, and he has been known to use it to calm an angry bandit with deep eye contact, even so far as to use hypnosis on him to make him fall asleep.

Name: Fire Release: Smokescreen
Classification Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Effect: Kneeding the chakra in your stomach to super-heating, like other fire release techniques, the user expels smoke - thickness depends on strength of the user, and purpose - from his mouth. A stream of Smoke is released in a similar fashion to that of the Great Fireball's continuous stream.
Drawback: Most people can't breath in too much smoke. This includes the user, and his allies.