@Whimsley In this case it's fine, but in the future, try to be a little more reserved about creating new areas in the setting, such as the HOLDING ROOM/Second story which were not mentioned prior.

Oh right, it's also fine to autohit step-soldiers like krunklets, but I'm sure you're already aware that more elite enemies shouldn't suffer the same fate.

@tex Mostly what I try to look out for is auto-hitting against important characters and players' characters. It's a complete buzzkill to the act and react I enjoy. If someone can't react why the hell are they even writing with other people? Eh, this is just kind of carrying on a rant, heh.

Anyways I didn't post a CS mostly because I couldn't think of anything right now. Which is why I'm still here. Nothing wrong with you guys. It's entertaining and will definitely get better. I'm just biding time and doing other things.

Plus I love criticism on an almost masochistic level. It's how I get better.

Accidentally posted this in the Characters Tab!

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Name: Alexander Sky

Age: 24

Sex: Male

Appearance:


Personality: Alexander is someone who, though a kind person, is also bitter, cynical, and only outwardly optimistic - he puts on a happy face in front of everyone, is brave enough to fight for his friends and what he wants, but at the same time, also highly disappointed at himself for past failures and mistakes.

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Abilities:
- Alexander is a Stunt Pilot for a Gyrocopter (Steampunk Airplane/Helicopter equivalent), but said Gyrocopter got destroyed in the beginning of the game, making this irrelevant unless a new Gyrocopter is found.
- Sunny Day: Alexander can make sunlight appear out of nowhere, even in dark places.
- Shield of the Sun: Alexander can create a Magical Shield.
- Fireball: Exactly what it says on the tin; a fireball that explodes with the same force as a grenade.

Weapons and Equipment:
- Jian
- Pistols
- First Aid Kit
- Money
- Food and Water

She finally stopped, calming her tone entirely despite the fact that she was shaking worse than an epileptic caterpillar.

@tex

Once again, forgot to mention me at all.... Im guessing I am in sight of the Krunks?

Waiting for @Whimsley and @Lady Athena.