@Unhinged
Yeah.. I'm working on a picture right now. I just didn't want to snag one of Rin Okumura, even though they look so similar.

I'll take a look at his abilities. Thanks. ^_^

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If you're wondering why nobody's said anything to you, I'm assuming we're waiting on updated abilities. After that's done, then we can work on getting you started in the IC.

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There's just nothing to say.

So, did you guys enjoy my most recent post?

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Do you want what we like or constructive criticism?

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If you're wondering why nobody's said anything to you, I'm assuming we're waiting on updated abilities. After that's done, then we can work on getting you started in the IC.

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Etcetera said I was okay, so I assumed it was fine. If his speed being what it is is unacceptable, I will change it.
You'll have to forgive me, I've never made an op character before, and its been a difficult process. I'm hesitant to add anything else. >.<

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Both.

Hello everyone. You've probably seen me lurking about, and I am happy to say that I am excited to hang with you all.

*coughs*
Anyway, I wasn't sure where to put my character, so I will just leave him here.

Kest Pierce [+]

Name: Kest Pierce

Age: 28

Gender: male

Appearance: Kest has short black hair and bright blue eyes. He stands at a lofty 6'3" and wears a white long sleeve button up shirt with a dark blue tie and loose black jeans.

Abilities: Kest has no semblance of magical ability, instead relying on his physical strengths. He has high strength and speed and far more stamina than most, able to jog great distances without breaking a sweat. He is skilled in hand to hand combat and favors the katar, or push dagger.
Unknown to him is the ability to "camouflage" himself. He gained this ability due to the effect of the time warp and mysterious tonics he was forced to consume. It most often is used when something triggers one of his fears.

Weapons:
Subsume and Devour
These two weapons fit Kest's grasp perfectly, as if they had been made for him. In reality, one night he found them in his mistresses room and used them to take revenge on the woman who treated him and his fellows as nothing more than toys for so long. Once the blades had ran her through, they formed to his hands. One absorbs energy, the other, life force.

Personality: Due to his imprisonment and forced labor at the Sinclair Manor, Kest has become mentally unstable. On one hand, he is a kind and gentle man, on the other, a raving lunatic unable to tell friend from foe.
He is generally very amiable, having worked so long as the Mistresses head butler. Hospitality is his middle name.

History: To be revealed

Other: Triggers:
Crazy- blood, women touching him, pain from being pierced(maybe).
Fear- sensual touching; deep, womanly laughter; liquid of unknown origin; women dressed in dark clothing; gardens(green house); pet name(Little Wolf), water, rope.

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Etcetera said I was okay, so I assumed it was fine. If his speed being what it is is unacceptable, I will change it.
You'll have to forgive me, I've never made an op character before, and its been a difficult process. I'm hesitant to add anything else. >.<

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I like the Codex plot twist, but you abused action symbols to make it too third person.

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Hmm. How would one go about avoiding this next time?

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Keep it down to words and actions, with as few adjectives as necessary. It's not a movie scene; it's more like security camera footage.

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Keep it down to words and actions, with as few adjectives as necessary. It's not a movie scene; it's more like security camera footage.

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Etcetera said I was okay, so I assumed it was fine. If his speed being what it is is unacceptable, I will change it.
You'll have to forgive me, I've never made an op character before, and its been a difficult process. I'm hesitant to add anything else. >.<

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Grim: happiness.

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lol I used that one too