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So I really like the character but a lot of the stuff in the parent's tab doesn't make sense to me.

Firstly, I don't really understand why Mia's parents raised her as a normal human child when everything in the tab goes out of the way to say how scornful they are of humans and the Syndicate. Not that the scorn is a problem, the Syndicate should be full of individuals that dislike each other intensely (though still trust each other enough to work together otherwise what's the point of having them as villains when it's easier to wait for them to self destruct?) and aliens with magical powers probably would feel superior to humans, but why raise your only child according to the cultural norms of a species you consider inferior? And why hide her powers from her? I may have missed something that explains this.

Secondly, I think this sentence is missing some words? It feels like a non sequitur.

It depends on dear old George decides to offer her and her husband, because there’s no-way she’ll let a goddamn human boss around superior beings like herself

I guess it's supposed to be 'what George decides to offer' but then I still don't fully understand what's being said here. Is it that when someone in the Syndicate makes a mistake, she'll hold them hostage to it in some way?

Thirdly, why did they join the Syndicate at all? They seem to have no vested interest in their end goal and speak unflatteringly of all the members mentioned. I get the 'powerful friends are useful' logic but why would they need powerful friends when they have no agenda other than to live peacefully? They seem to have enough power that they wouldn't really need to fear anyone anyway (which I'm cool with, super-duper powerful aliens are par the course, looking at you Martian Manhunter and Superman) and they apparently have interstellar travel as well so they could outrun any enemies anyway.

I really like Mia, I just feel like her parent's (and therefore her) connection to the Syndicate side of the RP is a bit shaky.

I'm actually going to sleep now so I won't be able to respond for 8ish hours.
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okay she's done and a bit messy cause i was stupidly distracted. s orry in adv anced

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AHH THANKYOUU

I was kinda on the fence about the whole parents bit -as in, had no idea what to write for them - so I figured I'd just put up what I had so someone without an outside perspective could help me out.

I can answer a few of those though:
1. They want Mia to feel as normal as possible growing up, and one can't really do that as a child knowing that they're an Alien. Also, it would be impossible for her to control her powers out in the open - there'd be a slip up somewhere along the line, and it'd be one they wouldn't be able to cover up. So, rather than tell her everything - or alternatively, tell her about her true heritage, and then have to explain why she wasn't allowed to use said powers - they've hidden everything and stopped her powers coming forth until she's an adult and can be eased into it all with more control.

2. I was thinking along the lines of; If she doesn't like what she's being made to do, she won't do it. And with such control over the lawyers in the state, that'll make it harder for the Syndicate to deal with said issues. Honestly, I was grasping at straws a bit here - I didn't want them to be controlled in the job, because as mentioned above, they consider their Avalian race to be superior to the human one. But then I was like: How can a Lawyer and Doctor call some shots in a big ol' crime group?

3. I'VE GOT NOTHING. I couldn't think of an idea - I was going to ask for advice, but I figured it was about time I just got the finished product up. I don't want to make them inherently evil - because they do actually love their family and whatnot, and the two do not go together for me - and I can't think of any reason why they may want to join a crime group. Shit n' giggles? Probably not.
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I'm gonna send you a pm soon about ideas we can bounce off each other! Other then the parents I think the cs is perfect!

@Liriia accepted!!
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Thanks bud - I'm heading to bed now too, so I'll probably catch you tomorrow. In the meantime, you guys can be kind and not throw up at the awful work that went into the parent's bit. Oh, if Liam Neeson was aware of the mockery I'd put his face to...

*whispers*he's going to find me. and he's going to kill me.
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Liriia inspired me, when we have all the characters I'll do a version that doesn't look rubbish.

I used the same filter for all the pictures, ignore the way all the scratches and colour spills are identical.



Love the picture you chose for Tish! The whole thing is cute too.

Also, I will be out of state for an anime convention this weekend, So you won't be hearing from me until monday night or so! Sorry about the timing, but I'm super excited for this little mini vacation. :3
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I thought I should mention that I adore this/you for this.

Squee.
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Aww, thanks. I cut a lot of corners with that picture though, it could've looked better. I'll do a better one when everyone has claimed a face, which means I'm just waiting on @Undine, right?
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GAAH I'm just so excited for when this ball gets rolling! The way the characters were made somehow makes their relationships so complex and interesting! It's going to be a thrill and I'm psyched for it.
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Can't wait! And yes that's correct (no worries though)!

Yeah I basically am way too excited.
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I hope your week get's better soon! GM's are descending upon this delectable nourishment CS!
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A character with Thomas Brodie-Sangster's face?

Move over Jay/@McHaggis, I contractually obliged to at least look into shipping with him.

I really like the sheet though Undine, the abilities section and family section are both so perfect. He should also get along well with Malcolm, they can sit in awkward silence together. I see couple emerging in my ship headcannon

I also can't stop seeing the group carrying him around in a bucket when he loses control.
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I hope you hated having an excuse not to make the big group picture!

I'm also working on an IC draft, adding songs to my relationship sheet and finishing it finally!
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I was just joking, pls don't abandon Andy

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I totally haven't already looked into a way to make the polaroid outlines look less crappy. Nope. Nor have I tried to find a less generic filter.
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