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@Dynamo Frokane

changed the gear picture
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Added better picture and for style points, added another theme for when things get cereal.

That is all.....

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Noticed I was lacking a rank for my guy. Decided on Corporal, as even though he spent three years undercover in two different departments he no doubt got busted down a few ranks more than once on account of his attitude and actions.
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Barebones, just haven't done the backstory. Had it done yesterday but got busy before I could do backstory

Planning on him being a recruit who delegated from a Japanese security force
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Would it be acceptable to have the Experienced Greg as a Sergeant? I'll let my rank be decided based upon what is seen right by the GM...
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@XandryaI love the Theme Song, mate...I am completely obsessed with the band.


Yeah, one season it was the opening song for my team and from then on I fell in love with it. It's rather catchy.
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Yeah, one season it was the opening song for my team and from then on I fell in love with it. It's rather catchy.


Well...I've seen the band and song live quite recently in London...Don't regret it at all.
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Well...I've seen the band and song live quite recently in London...Don't regret it at all.


That's more or less the same reaction my friend had when she saw them live somewhere in France.
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@LetMeDoStuff okay thanks for sorting the date and age,

and I was thinking maybe if greg and mack just know of each other mutually but have never actually met that would make for a more interesting encounter when they finally do meet.

Edit: and yes saergent sounds about right as a rank
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@PURRfect93 looks interesting so far, but I'm dying to see that meaty backstory
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@Dynamo Frokane just finished edit actually lol
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Barrett Oh, the year was 1778...

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New submission for street sweeper.

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Double post derp.
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New submission for street sweeper.



Why'd you post it twice?
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@LetMeDoStuff
Sorry about that, the site was misbehaving and I resubmitted a form by accident. Think of it as a sign of my extreme enthusiasm.
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Okay I'm waiting on a couple more submissions via PM, and then I will be deciding the final line up Sometime Tommorow Evening. So make any changes you need to before then.

If your character doesn't make the final cut, you will still be kept around as a reserve if someone else drops out.

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So I'll give you all some late feedback so you know what to change (if anything) on your profile

@Xandrya Very strong profile, I cant see any changes that need to be made.

@sassy1085 Backstory should be a little more detailed, significant grammar issues need to be adressed

@Savage Strong Profile, but the weapons category wasnt needed, youll get the weapons assigned when the IC starts

@Roosan The Wire references were done tastefully, and I like the backstory, but I wish it was made with a bit more mention to the cyberpunk world and references to the timeline. But overall, strong profile.

@LetMeDoStuff Very strong profile, be sure to add in the parts of Greg's knowledge of Mack to establish that mutual acknowledgement between the two.

@Skepic Very Strong Profile, would have been even stronger if you didn't take out that awesome humming theme tune.

@Kurai Assassin
Good profile, still would like a little bit more of a fleshed out backstory, and very minor spelling and grammar to be addressed.

@LokiLeo789
Very strong profile. No changes need to be made.

@PURRfect93
Good character concept, but many grammatical errors need to be addressed. Backstory could use a bit more detail and fleshing out.

Let me know if you have any more specific questions, feel free to ask me here in the OOC.

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@Dynamo Frokane

The main idea for there being a barebones back story is I'm going to fill in the gaps through the rp
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Barrett Oh, the year was 1778...

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We've got until tomorrow evening, roughly 36 hours, to modify our profiles before the final cut, right?
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@Roosan something like that, yes. I'm open to be a little flexible as well, with newer submissions just coming in, but thats roughly the time window yes.
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