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@RomanAria Awesome!
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I'm still here, just you know, busy as hell. Should clear up within a the next week or so though so that's good.
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Titles should not be what you are addressed as, but only labels like Lord of House Ralei or Ser; it should not be Lady -name here-. Also, italics pls.

Arthur Ralei (@smarty0114)
Title would be 'Heir Apparent'
With the completion of the royal family from House Ralei, the Family tab should be updated accordingly. Don't forget to include Viktor Summers as half-brother, at the bottom because of his bastard status.
Other than that, good to go.

Cassiopeia Ralei (@Kaalee)
Title would be 'Princess'
Like previous character, family tab should be edited accordingly. Don't forget to include Viktor Summers as half-brother, at the bottom because of his bastard status.
Other than that, good to go.

Euric Ralei (@Wernher)
Re-arrange the family so that the oldest/seniors are at the top, going down to the youngest. So in this case, Jaelyn is his eldest child, so she would be at the top. Viktor Summers would be at the bottom because of his bastard status.
Good to go.

Made some adjustments to my own charrie.

Viktor Summers (@Wernher)
Title would be 'Honorable Representative of the Caerleon Merchant Guild' (just some capitals)
Allegiance is "House Ralei (nominally)" (just adding House)
Good to go.

Veronika Tolstoi (@Wernher)
The title is something more formal, so she would have no official ones
Good to go.

Porthos Condotierri (@Wernher)
Title should be in italics.
Good to go.

Your charries are really good, by the way, @Wernher.

Viridiana Ralei (@Ellion)
Titles should be in italics.
In the family tab, her parents and brother should be at the top, as they are her immediate family. Also, if her father and/or mother are deceased, then italicize them. Viktor Summers should also be listed at the bottom as a bastard step-son.
Good to go.

Alexander Rathmore (@Hippocamp)
Please use the labels for each section, as it would make it less confusing to deduce what is what when it comes to the personality / background sections.
Type out the age.
The titles would simply be 'Ser, and Spymaster of House Rathmore'
Allegiance would be House Rathmore.
Good to go.

House Ralei is now closed off from noble characters (children of the Lord), and only normal ones (Knights, etc) are available for House Ralei.

House Lear / the North in general needs some characters. @Solace's will be done tomorrow.
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@Ambra
Still here! :)

Just been busy with work and I should have my characters up tomorrow.
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@Ambra I'm pretty sure I edited everything correctly in Arthur's sheet if you wanna check it out :)
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@smarty0114 Accepted then! Put him in the character tab.
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Still here! Just wondering where I can put an introverted master swordsman bastard son.
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@POOHEAD189 This master swordsman character sounds interesting, mostly because he'd have to be an older character (30+ years). :P He can be part of the Kingsguard, or a knight that's looking for a lord to serve.
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@AmbraI wouldn't mind making him in his 30's, but why would he need to be? :0
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@POOHEAD189 If he's a master swordsman, then he'd have to have a lot of years of experience. Jaime Lannister is also a master swordsman, and he's in his 30s-40s. :P

If you wanna make him younger, then just don't make him extremely proficient at the blade. ^^
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@AmbraOk good, that's what I was hoping for with your reasoning. I was afraid I missed something huge in the world history
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Still interested @Ambra, just working on my character.
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Hello @Ambra I have edited "Ar"'s sheet, I hope it's up to expectation. Tell me if there's anything else.
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Still alive! Well slightly - Maths exams have a tendency to tear a part of your soul out! Dx Anyways, I was thinking about a few characters but I would need some information for them. Mainly, what is the geography like and would a fleet/navy have any considerable power?
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@Hippocamp Accepted!

@Nightwing95 Alrightie~

@NarcissisticPotato The geography of all three areas is on the front page of the RP. Fleets would be good, but remember, we really need charries for House Lear.
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Okay, since the person who wanted the Lord of House Lear hasn't been around for a day and a half, then I'm going to reopen that spot. Once we have the lord and lady of House Lear, then we can start the RP.
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Okay, since the person who wanted the Lord of House Lear hasn't been around for a day and a half, then I'm going to reopen that spot. Once we have the lord and lady of House Lear, then we can start the RP.
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@Ambra
Did you get my PM? o.o
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Out of curiosity for now I wouldn't be able to play the Lord of Lear? I have a Rathmore semi-noble character. If I were to make another charrie where would be the best spot?
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@Hippocamp You can make a charrie that doesn't have noble power or influence. For example, kingsguard, squires, knights, etc; they're all available to you. ^^

EDIT: Charries with noble power/influence include characters such as children of lords, lords themselves, etc.
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