Titles should not be what you are addressed as, but only labels like Lord of House Ralei or Ser; it should not be Lady -name here-. Also, italics pls.
Arthur Ralei (
@smarty0114)
Title would be 'Heir Apparent'
With the completion of the royal family from House Ralei, the Family tab should be updated accordingly. Don't forget to include Viktor Summers as half-brother, at the bottom because of his bastard status.
Other than that, good to go.
Cassiopeia Ralei (
@Kaalee)
Title would be 'Princess'
Like previous character, family tab should be edited accordingly. Don't forget to include Viktor Summers as half-brother, at the bottom because of his bastard status.
Other than that, good to go.
Euric Ralei (
@Wernher)
Re-arrange the family so that the oldest/seniors are at the top, going down to the youngest. So in this case, Jaelyn is his eldest child, so she would be at the top. Viktor Summers would be at the bottom because of his bastard status.
Good to go.
Made some adjustments to my own charrie.
Viktor Summers (
@Wernher)
Title would be 'Honorable Representative of the Caerleon Merchant Guild' (just some capitals)
Allegiance is "House Ralei (nominally)" (just adding House)
Good to go.
Veronika Tolstoi (
@Wernher)
The title is something more formal, so she would have no official ones
Good to go.
Porthos Condotierri (
@Wernher)
Title should be in italics.
Good to go.
Your charries are really good, by the way,
@Wernher.
Viridiana Ralei (
@Ellion)
Titles should be in italics.
In the family tab, her parents and brother should be at the top, as they are her immediate family. Also, if her father and/or mother are deceased, then italicize them. Viktor Summers should also be listed at the bottom as a bastard step-son.
Good to go.
Alexander Rathmore (
@Hippocamp)
Please use the labels for each section, as it would make it less confusing to deduce what is what when it comes to the personality / background sections.
Type out the age.
The titles would simply be 'Ser, and Spymaster of House Rathmore'
Allegiance would be House Rathmore.
Good to go.
House Ralei is now closed off from noble characters (children of the Lord), and only normal ones (Knights, etc) are available for House Ralei.
House Lear / the North in general needs some characters.
@Solace's will be done tomorrow.