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I am interested.
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Cool :)

As well, given that they're basically the Antovan Bosnia, my plan was for them to be overrun by Timluks and mostly vassalized and converted to their religion (whatever the not-Islam is called) due to being more or less crippled from it's division, as well as it's rebels converting as a political statement and for support. I'm curious if that would be okay in the later game?


The Guild is so uncooperative today; it gave you a like while I've been trying to refresh the error page to reply!
But that's definitely within the realm of possibility for the RP. The Timluks will be an NPC story element that I'll periodically throw at the west. How you handle them and what your plans are for your nation will decide how they do in their offense. I have a rough idea of their progression, but I'll need more western powers on the table to decide for sure.
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If it's not too late, I'd like to show my interest in this role-play. I should however note that I have never posted in the Advanced section. I was told it might be a good idea however to try and head to the Advanced section to see if I can uncover flaws in my writing and improve. I'm more than open to advice and criticism. If you'll have me that is, and after I've put in an application, that being approved/denied, etc.
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Hey @Aristo, it seems pretty obvious that the Ambrusian Church is sort of a Catholic Church expy but are we going to get a more detailed explanation of what exactly their religious beliefs are?


They're very comparable; there's one god who's responsible for creation and all the things we usually associate with the Judeo-Christian god. But there's no 'son of god,' figure; instead, Fiorentino is God's earthly representative and first saint, much more comparable to a figure like Moses or even Muhammed. There's a clear expectation of reaching heaven upon death - less so of a hell or Satan; dammned souls are simply lost to time and forgotten.

I can write up more in the OOC, if you wish. In general, the nuance of the religion isn't as important as the consequence of the Church's activity on earth, and how your characters/nation deal with it. For now, know that its core tenets are comparable to Judeo-Christian beliefs; most worldly religions promise heavenly deliverance for the devout and good souls, in any case.
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If it's not too late, I'd like to show my interest in this role-play. I should however note that I have never posted in the Advanced section. I was told it might be a good idea however to try and head to the Advanced section to see if I can uncover flaws in my writing and improve. I'm more than open to advice and criticism. If you'll have me that is, and after I've put in an application, that being approved/denied, etc.


I say go for it, if you're feeling confident! I don't think the jump to advanced is as huge as it seems to be. In reality, this Nation section is distinct from the Casual/Advanced sections, but tends to follow the guidelines of the latter. It's true that the posts tend to be 'fuller' and lengthier, but everyone has their own style and is comfortable with different levels of writing. In short, don't feel pressured to match veterans or burn yourself out; just give it your best shot! I'm glad you're interested; stick around if this is something you'd like to be a part of and see through.
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Thank you. I'll get right on the application.
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I'm placing the location of Aldmeria on the map (right click, open in new window and zoom in) - the province of the Ambrusian Church. It's capital is Chambrion, where the High Pontiff would reside and the prelates of the Fiorentinan kingdoms convene to discuss matters of the church. It is, put simply, the holiest place in the west.



I think we have a good interest base so far, so I will have the OOC up soon, before the weekend. I'm sure more interest will come in due time.
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So, now that we have the placement of the Pontificate States are we allowed to put land claims in our sheets?
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So, now that we have the placement of the Pontificate States are we allowed to put land claims in our sheets?


Sure, go right ahead!
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I will finish it soon.

Kingdom of Vohemia



Nation Overview
Though not a backwater, Vohemia is certainly a seldom thought corner of the Fiorentian world. More concerned with petty conflicts between mountain clans than the political apparatus of the continent. It is more of a nation kept on it's toes and with an opportunistic mindset, away from legal or religious prying eyes on the edge of the world.
Even though Vohemia is an absolute monarchy, the titles of the King not only include the Obsidian Crown of Vohemia, but also Lord of the Kretz Valley, Lord-Patron of the Damolong Marches and Paramount of the Southern Snow.

King Zikmund III is a cruel young man. Having lost his right eye in an assassination attempt, he hung all his father's bastards from the bridge to his keep in Radobyl. The Queen-Consort Sabina is a headstong woman prone to arguing with the king on a regular basis. Though they have produced an heir, Stepan, and a princess, Noemi, the two spend as much time apart as possible.

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@Aristo Is my location and scale appropriate for a France-esque nation? I added in the multi-ethnic background as well.
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So, would there be an equivalent to the Roman Empire in the distant past?
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@Aristo Is my location and scale appropriate for a France-esque nation? I added in the multi-ethnic background as well.


I would just tone down your "220,000-300,000" estimation. That's awfully high for a European field army of the 16th ce. Renaissance period; most field armies reached 50,000 at most. Only in the following 18th century did 100k+ armies really come into being. The 16th century Italian Wars, being roughly comparable to the era in the RP, rarely saw armies of more than 20,000 go against each other.

But other than that, I like the concept a lot!
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I would just tone down your "220,000-300,000" estimation. That's awfully high for a European field army of the 16th ce. Renaissance period; most field armies reached 50,000 at most. Only in the following 18th century did 100k+ armies really come into being. The 16th century Italian Wars, being roughly comparable to the era in the RP, rarely saw armies of more than 20,000 go against each other.

But other than that, I like the concept a lot!


Sure!
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I'm starting to feel like I may be a bit small; I'm so much smaller than a lot of the other players and I was more going for an average sized kingdom. I may change my map claim, to be honest.
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@ZB1996 Given that the Kingdom of Idorica and Mille-Sessau border each other on the Great Lake, what say we have some mutual history?

@Aristo Any chance we can get an updated map?
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@Theodorable
That sounds good to me. Where should we begin?
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@ZB1996 Given the history, I figure they would be mutual friends. The Sessauans would have sent aid to help the Idoricans retake their lands from the Timluks to help create a buffer state.

Also, perhaps a mutual dynasty or sorts?
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@Aristo Any chance we can get an updated map?

I'll have one done before the OOC goes up; I'll be home later tonight though, so don't hold your breath.
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