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Added face claims, I'm ready for the movie now
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Alright gang, rough draft is here. I'll keep working on it. If I can, I'd take the bottom left section near the big island.

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Realized I spammed you all with updates, my bad.
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I got a nerdgasm just by reading the first few paragraphs. ASOIAF-style intrigue, world-building and "advaaanced" focus? Yes please! There is still a spot left, right?

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I got a nerdgasm just by reading the first few paragraphs. ASOIAF-style intrigue, world-building and "advaaanced" focus? Yes please! There is still a spot left, right?


Yep!
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Awesome! I'll get working on a sheet ASAP. It's been a while since I've done a nation RP (couple of years in fact), so I'll need some time to get in gear. Will have something up by tomorrow.
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With five of seven accepted nations and two more applications, will we be seeing a polished map in the near future? Ideally one without borders at 90° angles—this is a quasi-medieval period, we probably shouldn't have national boundaries delineated by longitude and latitude.
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Current claims!
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Ugh sorry guys, was an extremely busy day at work, had to stay overtime. Didn't have as much time as I would have liked to work on the sheet, so here is a very, very rough draft. Obviously I'm claiming the north-western region.



Thankfully I'm free tomorrow, so once I get some sleep (almost 2 am my time), I'll expand on this and get a proper coat of arms up.

Once again, sorry for the tardiness!

EDIT: Updated parts of the sheet, now with more history, notes on culture, as well as imports/exports. Might change the coat of arms, because the black is too similar to the forum background.
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Did a chunk more work on my guys and would love to hear any feedback you guys might have! Thanks!
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Did a chunk more work on my guys and would love to hear any feedback you guys might have! Thanks!


A couple spelling and grammar mistakes scattered about that are a little distracting. There's also a few contentions between the lore you have written for your house and your nation and the lore we've written in the group pad. Can't really spite you for that, though, since you can't see the pad.
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A couple spelling and grammar mistakes scattered about that are a little distracting. There's also a few contentions between the lore you have written for your house and your nation and the lore we've written in the group pad. Can't really spite you for that, though, since you can't see the pad.


Just read the whole thing out loud to the missus, which helped me spot the errors I think you noticed. She of course called me a giant nerd so your notes are much appreciated.

And you're right about that pad! I'll correct the lore when I get access to it.
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Greatly expanded on the sheet, it looks about right now. Still got a lot of stuff left to add though, will continue working on it. Pardon any spelling mistakes or wonky grammar, will sort them out.

Also, a quick question - what's the scale of the map? I'm trying to get a sense of how big the continent is.
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If theres still open seats here is my sheet
any suggestions would be gladly accepted

Culture


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King Oliver XI [-]


Queen Helen [-]


Prince Oliver XII [-]


Prince Howard [-]


Lady Cordelia [-]


Sir Alfred

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@JuliusCaesar Sorry to say, but it seems that Vor and Risen beat you by a few hours for claims to the north and south. If a space opens up in the future, you'll be the first on the preference list.

The rest of you, I'll be away for most of the day, expect further worldbuilding stuff when I get back.
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Well thanks anyway if I slot opens up id definitely jump in
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IC will be up Friday, so get any last-minute details to your sheets like marriage pacts done.
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@McHaggis@Macro Still around? Both of you have been largely absent from the lore pad.
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Finally posted my sheet in the proper section, sorry for taking forever. It's still subject to minor changes and additions (I keep thinking of things to add...can't help it :D), but the important stuff is all there.
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@DeadBeatWalking Is there still room in this RP?
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