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Hidden 8 yrs ago Post by dreamingflowers
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Ughhh well I must say writing a post in pieces doesn't really improve the quality, at least not for me.
I'm not really satisfied with it. There was a lot to react to and I couldn't get it quite how I wanted it.
Anyways I'll probably be in a better writing state for the next posts.
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Does anybody else want to go first or should I post again ? (based on the information that Emmett won't let go of Rook unless he's forced to)
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Does anybody else want to go first or should I post again ? (based on the information that Emmett won't let go of Rook unless he's forced to)


You can go ahead. Cillian probably won't interrupt. I'll have the post up tonight probably.
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I'm working on a post now as we speak.
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@Deserted@MacabreFox@dreamingflowers@The New Yorker@Fetzen

Alright and with that I can work on the next post that will totally change everything. Well it is going to bring the roleplay to new heights. Are you guys good with me opening up to the next scene?
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@Deserted@MacabreFox@dreamingflowers@The New Yorker@Fetzen

Alright and with that I can work on the next post that will totally change everything. Well it is going to bring the roleplay to new heights. Are you guys good with me opening up to the next scene?


Sure
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@Deserted@MacabreFox@dreamingflowers@The New Yorker@Fetzen

Alright and with that I can work on the next post that will totally change everything. Well it is going to bring the roleplay to new heights. Are you guys good with me opening up to the next scene?


Yep, go for it.
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So I've started the post hopefully I'll be finished by tomorrow but I've got the feeling this one is going to take me longer. But I've got this plot I'm excited to have played out, it really brings a twist and it will require one person to, in a way, save everyone else though it is quite the risk and sacrifice. I want to know who our true hero in the bunch will be.

EDIT: I did it after all without having to post it up tomorrow!
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I'll post next if nobody else wants it. I know I've been the guy that jumps in right away, so don't let me run you over.
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I'm fine with that.
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No, I don't mind (: I'm normally running errands if I'm not online, so sometimes I can't get to posting right away until the next day.
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I'm a little confused as to what's going on in the story time wise. How long has it been since the initial conflict? Has Emmett been tied up the whole time? How far have they traveled?
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@The New Yorker So time wise, the fight happened right before day break and now it is around nighttime of that same day. Emmett has been tied up the entire time and he still is tied up, but now since he is blind the ropes will serve moreover as a guide. Distance, I'm really not sure other than Rook's goal to make it to the final cache. Oh and another thing, everyone still has their possessions.
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Totally just wrote a whole page of text on my character traveling 10 feet and saying "I'm here." I don't really know if that is good or bad.
Hidden 8 yrs ago Post by dreamingflowers
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It was good trust me :) Everyone has had great posts so far, great job guys!
A really unexpected twist in the story. I'll have time to work an a post this weekend.
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@dreamingflowers I'm glad you think so :)
Yeah, I was hoping that it was nothing too crazy. Well, maybe it is but got to keep things interesting, am I right?
Anyways, it is a set up to something I'm really anticipating.
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Sorry, I've been a bit busy over the past few days, but now it's on.
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Just a question for my next post. I could use some insight of you all.
Floure keeps some of her medicine etc in glass bottles and jars, would they have survived the fall into the abyss?
I mean we all survived due to some miracle but it would make sense for some of those things to break right?
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Just a question for my next post. I could use some insight of you all.
Floure keeps some of her medicine etc in glass bottles and jars, would they have survived the fall into the abyss?
I mean we all survived due to some miracle but it would make sense for some of those things to break right?


I would think so, yes, but it depends on a few factors.

1. Where was her pack when she fell? On her back, in her hand? How did she land? On her back, face down? It would make sense if she fell on her back, and she carried her pack there, that then some bottles would break.

2. Since they landed in sand/ash, the impact could be lessened considerably, when in regards to how she landed. I would suspect that even if she landed on her back, some bottles would be broken.
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Yes it would all depend on where her pack was on her body when she fell. I had the same thoughts about the ass somehow lessening the impact of the fall. It would be fun to have her realize some of them were broken, maybe not right away. Maybe after they get out of there, since her pack isn't really a priority right now.

I don't really know how to get started with my post though. We are in a dark abyss where you can't see your own hand in front of your face. Kind of hard to do anything.
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