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@KuramaaaZ: I figured, but it's just that I'm surprised he'd join the Iron Rose Knights when it's a big part of what they are, defending the weak.
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@VitaVitaAR He has mostly other motives to join. Or are there some requirements to join besides being a knight?
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Well, I mean, generally speaking they have to be knights who will carry out justice, desire to defend the weak, defend Thaln, that kind of stuff. There's an oath involved and all, after all.

You have an excuse for him defending the weak, yes, and it's not like you have to edit, I was just kind of wondering.
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I have completed my sheet. Hopefully nothing objectionable to be found.

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@Tarquin: Accepted.
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@Raineh DazeIf I may ask, what kind of undead is she?
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Ah... Well, why not?

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It's a bit late but we already talked it over in PM's, so accepted.
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You didn't mention that in the backstory section. ^^; I guess I'm just wondering how he go from the tropics to Thaln and how he heard about the Iron Rose Knights.


By boat/horse, and by word of mouth, unless nobody knows who the knights are, in which case he saw the job in the newspaper.

You didn't ask anyone else how their character heard of the knights, and I checked the other apps; none have that detail. Am I a special snowflake?
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... Okay, um... this is a former holy order of knights dedicated to the defense of Thaln and its people.

Your character is a former cannibal and mercenary.

He needs a VERY good reason to be allowed into the knights. Also, he would only have heard of them after arriving on the continent where Thaln is located on... and probably getting relatively close to Thaln as well.

He's not a Knight Errant like a couple of the other characters are, he's not someone who was taken in by someone who could shuttle them towards the Iron Rose Knights. And he's not nobility or a knight of Thaln who wanted to join them.

He needs a really good reason to be part of them, especially given his history.
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And henceforth upon the coming of Zande, our noble savage woneth ye olde tournament of champions and used the prize money to benefit ye olde local orphanage. Two days later he saved a friar falling from a foundry by wayeth of catching him with both arms.
HENCEFORTH did Zande then seeketh audience with the Rose Knights and made clear his aspirations, at the sameth time neatly inventing a believably heroic past for himself, in such a way that he was accepted.
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@Tarquin Katrina is awesome dude XD just read her CS I think she and Garrett will get along
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So...

Merlin linked me here, and it looks pretty interesting.

Thoughts on a cynical mercenary who accidentally killed some innocents and joined the order to "atone"?
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@Doc Doctor: That still doesn't really explain how he managed to get from the other side of the world to what's basically fantasy Europe.

@Monochromatic Rainbow: I would like to remind everyone that characters do have to have somehow attained knighthood. So far everyone I've accepted has in some way. There's an oath of fealty and everything involved in being part of the Iron Rose Knights, and knight is right in the name. ^^;
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And henceforth upon the coming of Zande, our noble savage woneth ye olde tournament of champions and used the prize money to benefit ye olde local orphanage. Two days later he saved a friar falling from a foundry by wayeth of catching him with both arms.
HENCEFORTH did Zande then seeketh audience with the Rose Knights and made clear his aspirations, at the sameth time neatly inventing a believably heroic past for himself, in such a way that he was accepted.


*takes a mop and bucket to sop up the dripping sarcasm*

Looking at the history, I see some small blips:
He was exiled from his village for exceptional reasons (Are these reasons because he is a canibal?) and became a freelance mercenary and bandit leader, feared across the land. He lived a cannibal and a headhunter, who seeks to further his reputation by collecting the skulls of formidable opponents. (reputations work both ways)
Before too long, he grew tired of playing the bad guy and changed professions.(tired? bored? This is perhaps in need of a better reasoning, a diametric shift in core behavior should not be so flippant. Even if something like 'he wiped out a rival group and the villages mistook him for a hero and thanked him for saving them. He was touched by the appreciation for good deeds and the first nights rest in years without bad dreams that he went in search of other good deeds to do." A vision quest from a shaman is also a common reason to change his ways or go seeking the "flower of steel" if not 'a woman born on the full moon, born of a woman on a full moon' ) He joined with the Blades of Iron Roses to fight the good fight, leaving his dark past behind. He still keeps skulls though. Some habits die hard.

As for how he got there, a tournament of arms is a valid reason to travel to test his powers and met a knight of the iron rose.

Just for me, my twinge is the skillset. He seems to be a master of many skills on top of his own weaknesses being hidden strengths. Swinging twin six and a half pound axes are telegraphed but he is cunning enough to make false telegraphs. He can bite through a coconut, A coconut can be pretty tough to crack open. It takes about 1,400 pounds per square inch to break one open. A human can only generate 200-300 PSI, so he has a jaw strength 5 times stronger than any other human.
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@knighthawk Vita did point out this has some anime influences and is not strictly down to earth. I'm not disagreeing with you btw just the coconut think caught my attention is all since generally speaking feats of superhuman strength and skill are not uncommon in anime that is more slice of life let along anime that is more fantasy in nature. In addition such things also tend to occur if fairytales/stories about knights etc. This is litterally just my commentary on the coconut thing. I agree with the rest of what you said XD sorry the last couple lines just gave me the urge to point out the obvious. I'm a bit of a talker so you can usually safely ignore my random tangents
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@VitaVitaAR

By boat and horse, I've already said. How else, magic?

@knighthawk

I do believe I'm familiar enough with my own character to decide how "flippant" he is. His motivations are for me and me alone to decide, and should have no bearing on the application. As for the coconut...



I rest my case. As for the weaknesses, I don't recall a weakness section of the application being required. It's not like he's superhuman, be creative.

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@Doc Doctor It's not a literal 'how', it's more a 'why is someone from south of the Sahara in the Low Countries', given the distance between them.

And... it's a highly renowned order of knights. Wouldn't they ask why you want to join? O_o
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That pretty much hits the nail on the head there.
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