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@ColouredCyan Have at it!
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If your still looking I wouldn't mind getting in on this.
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As long as the 'Apply' function is marked as such anybody can feel free to apply!
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Okay, here are a couple questions of mine: I think so, but to clarify, is New Anchorage located in modern day Alaska? Also, are all the neo-metropolises in the world already determined and set in stone, or would I be able to make one up for my character's backstory? (Currently thinking either Vancouver or Calgary if New Anchorage is indeed in Alaska, but now that I'm thinking about it some more, the already established Seattle would probably work just as well)
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No, the megacities are not all set in stone. I mean yes, we’ve developed some in-canon: Atlanta, Moscow, Seattle, Tokyo, and New York City for example. Generally if the population in the 22nd century was large enough where it could profit off the construction (such as the aforementioned) it could be funded and done with. I imagine Vancouver or Calgary would be likely prospects.

New Anchorage is in Alaska, yes.
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Still working on it but its getting late here, so this is what I done so far which includes the bit I thought most objectionable. Hope its ok though.

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It'd be spectacular if all apps use the CS template I've provided! =)

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Hai, I'll just throw this in and hope for the best.

Alright, I’ll get started on the review process here so hold on to your hat.

Starting off, I’d like to say that the callsign of daimyo doesn’t really fit for a mech that is of Volkov origin I feel like. It’d possibly work with a Red Star origin. A minor inconsistency, but one that probably should looked at. I’m also looking at the name (nickname?) of Nanashi and see no mention to explain where she got this name to begin with? If she’s from the heartlands of the Volkov Corporation especially so.

The no formal training and carrying around a sword confuses me and it will need clarification.

Her backstory seems palpable, but it does come to mind of various concerns. Her entire family thought doing relatively well in aspirations to become NC pilots? I suppose if she wasn’t well off and from a frontier town this would make some degree of sense but you state specifically they were “well to do”. It is far more successful to be behind a desk than a cockpit in the corporation’s eyes— even if NC compatibility is not commonplace.

Which brings me to the mention of her second NC that was built for shows. NC’s are not basic bipedal tanks, they specifically have extraordinary technology that requires synthesis between those who have the ability to synchronize with the technology to become fluid machines of war that were above all other developments. The neural plug is technology implanted and surged with your spine and nervous system— no NC that was built with this in mind would ever be used for “show” and due to the state of affairs in the 22nd century where NC’s originate from in their earliest incarnations was a time of war and suffering. There would be no time to waste resources for a “show” NC or even normal mech. I am quite sorry but this just would not work and I am not sure how it is feasible.

As for the mech section detailing armaments and description… the above override whatever I have to think here.

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Everything about her was supposed to be not Volkov, considering she has a bounty and stuff on her head. Sword is a sword she picked up, and the no formal training means exactly that. She has a sword but she's not trained explicitly in the use of swords. Also I don't have a hat unfortunately. ;w;

I'll see what I can do.
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Here we go, CS ready for a first look-at!

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Here we go, CS ready for a first look-at!



A NC pilot with absolutely zero combat experience and was tested for the ability to become a pilot at New Anchorage? That is compelling indeed. He would’ve gotten the appropriate (and insufferably painful) surgeries and went through his first VR simulations relatively recently. Man. What a terrible February it would’ve been for Orry.

The only question I got is this— what do you mean by “nuclear family”?

But yeah this is excellent approved presuming we don't have to fix anything about the nuclear mention.
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Haha, yeah, that's the idea I was going for -- a kid that's never dealt with anything truly difficult in his life, who suddenly goes through a special kind of hell and comes out on the other side a little more grown up (among other, less desirable side-effects, like having a couple mental illnesses cropping up).

Nuclear family just means the part of a family that includes the father, the mother, and their kids, so I was just saying that's who he grew up with. Though I may have used it wrong, now that I'm looking at it. Huh. I'll go look it up and probably change it for clarity's sake.
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He would’ve been really up shit creek if he tested negative for NC compatibility, huh?
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Probably would've gone catatonic for a few months, but I have faith he would've persevered and built an okay life for himself, provided, you know, he could still move his limbs after everything.

Oh, by the way, should I wait for another GM to review the sheet before posting it in the Character tab? I noticed that's what seemed to happen with DruSM157's character, which I think is the only other new character that's been accepted so far.
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Probably would've gone catatonic for a few months, but I have faith he would've persevered and built an okay life for himself, provided, you know, he could still move his limbs after everything.

Oh, by the way, should I wait for another GM to review the sheet before posting it in the Character tab? I noticed that's what seemed to happen with DruSM157's character, which I think is the only other new character that's been accepted so far.


it also helped that I had nepotism on my side!
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Probably would've gone catatonic for a few months, but I have faith he would've persevered and built an okay life for himself, provided, you know, he could still move his limbs after everything.

Oh, by the way, should I wait for another GM to review the sheet before posting it in the Character tab? I noticed that's what seemed to happen with DruSM157's character, which I think is the only other new character that's been accepted so far.

I think you're good to go, and well nepotism.
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>Probably would've gone catatonic for a few months

Well, back in my day, his brain would've exploded.

I'm the original creator of the setting lmao
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>Probably would've gone catatonic for a few months

Well, back in my day, his brain would've exploded.

I'm the original creator of the setting lmao


papa lhg layin' down the dangers of plugging your brain into a robot thingy
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That's Papa Emprah LHG The Most Dankest to you, bruh
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Just to clarify, no problems with CS so far beside formatting?
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