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@dragonmancer @ShyDot Should I post a CS here or directly in the CS tab ?
Ashevelen The Lucky
Goddess Of Luck , Thieves and Shadows
Domains
Shadows , Markets , Inns ( and thing alike. )
Powers
Ashvelen's greatest power is the power of Luck. An arrow that should hit a critical spot in the body ? Missed. Probably it was just luck. A fall that should've kill you but when you hit , you didn't even get hurt ? Probably it was just luck.
Her power can influence luck in anything there is.
Also she can make shadow tendrils that come out from either her body or the shadows around the place where she is using her Shadow powers.
Appearance
Ashevelen is usually the kind of God that is not seen by others. Like luck it self , she is mysterious and only appears when the time is right but when seen...she looks nothing more than a woman ( looks 20 y/o ) with blond hair and a black dress , most people fooling themselves.
Creations :
Shadows :
Creatures born in the shadows that protect those that seek to harm those under their Goddess protection. Not having a physical form , nobody believes they exist until it is too late.
Artifacts :
Golden Coin Of Mar'Dulak :
The Golden Coin of Mar'Dulak is one of Ashevelen's prized possessions. The Golden Coin grants the power of Luck to anyone who has it. Making difficult situations easy in mere seconds just because the user is very lucky.
Shadow Ring :
The Ring creates shadows around the wearer and gives the ability to turn invisible when he/she is in the shadows. Also The Shadow Ring can spawn Shadows to defend the wearer.
Worshipers, Religion, and Culture
Ashevelen is worshiped by every thief , gambler , man or woman in a way or the other. Everyone makes use of her power and requests her services every now and them. For if Luck is on your side , life gets easier.
Thieves usually carry with them a small amulet in the shape of a Gold Coin to remind them that if Luck is not on their side , they will never see gold again.
Ashevelen doesn't accept material tribute from those that cannot give it but instead she accepts a prayers for Luck. Thieves usually pay tributes in gold as to thank her for the Luck she has given them.
Region or Location
Ashevelen’s influence is spread about to all corners of the world. Every man , woman , creature needs a little luck in their life now and then. So...she is known by all.
For if Luck leaves you , your life will end quicker than normal.
Personality
Ashevelen is benevolent to those that pray to her and to those that don't believe in such things as Luck , she makes sure they see what happens if Luck is not on their side.
She likes most of the other Gods. She likes to talk much but only when the opportunity arises.
Opinions
Iuppiter
Ashevelen is thankful of Iuppiter because if she was not there , she wouldn't have any power. Mortals need the Sun to live and Ashevelen needs mortal to do so. That's the reason she likes Iuppiter the most of all Gods. She is the reason everyone is alive.
Kilgarrah
Ashevelen's relationship with Kilgarrah is strange. Her thieves always manage to irritate Kilgarrah's dragons somehow. Either they manage to steal something from Kilgarrah's dragon or they end up feeding them , 'thus when they meet , Ashevelen is always quick to apologize for what the thieves have done.
Nahash
Ashevelen's power combined with Nahash's Hope is what makes Ashevelen like Nahash so much. She enjoys talking with her. Also with Nahash's power to trick everyone is another thing that Ashevelen likes. Everyone prays for Luck when things are not as they appear.
Dormammus
Ashevelen is indifferent of Dormammus. Dormammus's worshipers are mostly using magic and wisdom to solve problems but even them need some Luck in their lives.
Ha
She doesn't have an opinion of Ha. She doesn't talk with him much.
Nahargu’ul
Ashevelen is indifferent of Nahargu’ul's creatures or him usually. They talk but if one of them would "disappear" there would be no love loss between them. They are acquaintances , not friends.
Tales
The Lucky Farmer
A long , long time ago it was said that a farmer lived alone in a field that was surrounded by forest in all directions but north.
One day as he was working the field it started to rain very hard. The farmer ran into his house as fast as he could be when he got there he saw that it was raining inside the house to. Soon a big tornado was making his way to his house from the north and he knew that he didn't have where to go. So he prayed to all the Gods he knew but none seem to answered his prayer.
When the tornado hit house he was ready to die. Everything in his house started to get risen up in the air and a big wood hit him in the head.
When he woke up , he was alive. He couldn't believe it. How would've it been possible ? As he risen from the rubble of the house , he noticed that his torso was tied with a rope that flew exactly around him and got stuck into the foundation of the house. He doesn't know how that happened but when people heard what happened , he told that exactly that and added a little " I guess I was just lucky " at the end of the story.
An Unlucky Thief
Once ago there was a thief. He was once the best thief in the world , nothing was safe from him. He was known for stealing two different Crowns that were on the head of two different human Kings. Everyone was afraid of leaving anything that could be stolen in the house when they left it.
To his fellow thieves he always told that his skill is what made him this good and when people suggested that he was lucky , he quickly started screaming that Luck is a joke and that only true skill exists.
And nothing happened to him until one night when by mistake hit someone's shoulder. That someone was a guard and soon started to follow him , calling more are more guards to catch him. As he ran away from them , his foot hit a stone on the ground and while he was falling , his dagger went out flying out of his pocket , flew thought the air and when it hit the ground he fell exactly on the edge of the knife , the knife entering his heart and killing him instantly.
The guards when they finally caught up with him and looked how he died just said one thing : " He was an unlucky son of a gun ".
Favorite Quote :
"No shot, one kill,
All luck, no skill."
@dragonmancer
@dragonmancer Thanks :)
I saw no one made a God like that and I though it was strange that no one did one already. So I did :)
Will move him when I get home.
Should others add their opinion on my God to their CS ?
@SepticGentleman A pirate is also a thief so it's yeah. They drown the same. I like your idea of how he perceives her ^_^
<Snipped quote by Ashevelendar>
We all float down here.
Warpforce, unlike mana, is pulled from the complexity that is the brain.
@Legion02 I think @Klomster is right about that. A lot of magical Gods.
I like your idea too but...My opinion is that you should either make a completely new God ( something that has nothing to do with magic ) OR change this God into something has combines Magic with Technology. Something like Hephaestus in Greek mythology if you want.