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Danke. Its just frustrating you know.

Not that good. I have school starting up Wensday so all that prep has fallen on my shoes today and to marrow. But I have an idea in my head for what she could do which contribute sto her appearance. That's good at least.
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So, this is another CS. Not for my character, but for the mentor of my next character concept.



Glossing over it I can tell you this. I'll allow her to be your characters trainer and to be a decent powerhouse just sitting in this world, like many others. But as you play with her don't get involved with the other characters battled as she can sway things in her favor easier than others. So keep her neutral, don't worry though there will be a time you can use her powers to have a interesting fight.

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Just a quick update on my CS so far.


So far so good. A blacksmith will make it easier for people to fix their damaged weapons, and lots more.
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I forgot your CS already being worked on. All that's needed really is an idea of what kind of Descended she will be. A commoner, or high class. A warrior or a musician. Etc. Many choices.

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I see your profile is pretty much complete. So since I have 2 completed profiles I'll work on the IC and have it up soon.
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@Rai
btw is the way my character gets her pet/companion acceptable?
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I'm happy with what I've got here if you want any changes or notice any problems, tell me so I can get to work fixing them.
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Add another ability or power. Or a spell. It can be blacksmith related like manipulating the matter to make sharper weapons. Or an enchantment spell.

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It's great.
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@Rai I keep trying things. Eventually, one will work.

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Silly question but what does Ground detection mean exactly?
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@The 42nd Gecko just curious, you put 30% in 2 bloodlines, any reasons for not using 20% extra on something else or just wanted avoid blood weakneses? :) also i think of the blood % is to let one know what powers they can have, at least that's what i understood, so that would mean the tryo 30% can give you hot blood only, 20% seraphim only give soul detection, 20% sol gives bright light resistance and 30% nayu gives night vision, that if you pick to have only the 4 power/abilities, or spells that involve said powers @Rai might need to confirm this

also i like appearance picture :D looks so shiny

@Pineappletumble i'm guessing it's something along the lines of what snake's have or earth benders (if you've seen avatar), they can feel presence of lifeforms through ground vibrations or some such, that OR you can feel where dirt is located :)))
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@Rai I keep trying things. Eventually, one will work.



The amount of different abilities of a spell counts as alternate spells. So for your orb spell to suck souls, speak to souls, siphon them for spells, and create armor & or weapons all equates to four spells. Which is your starting maximum. Perhaps get rid of two to keep the healing spell and your ability.

As I've stated before the blood % determines your level of affinity for Descended spells and abilities. With time you can branch into spells of whichever blood you have. But the time and level of mastering these spells increased the further your bloodline is. So since she is so spread apart she isn't going to be that strong starting out. But the powers can be versatile and unique.

I never mentioned it I believe. But equipment that's enchanted I'll allow if it's not usable as armor and has only one enchantment. So either she can see souls better or it enhances her spells. Pick one. But she must have the soul detection ability. Which you will need to make room for. Unless you want this item to act as your soul detection, but only through the eyes.

To create scrolls is an ability only advanced spellcasters truly have. Those who dedicate their lives to a monk like status. Learning the complicated rituals needed to make a scroll. This knowledge can be passed down through your master. But the scrolls will not produce strong spells and will be complicated to make. This can be equal to smithing, so its not really a spell. As anyone can make a scroll at a decent level of spellcasting and anyone can use these scrolls even if not the right affinity.

Your twilight step ability needs revision. You can rid of the Tyro blood to add more to seraph to become intangible momentarily. Then theres only one ability it can have. So either it gives a speed boost or momentary intangibility, it can do both. But you must rid of a spell. At 20% you can not become intangible even at a weak level.

Your overall spells/ powers equal to 7. I only allow 4. Lower it to be accepted. I do like the concept though.

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Alright, so dropping intangibility on Twilight Steps, easy, it could be a later upgrade though, right?

Helmet drops spell enhancement, and becomes her soul detection ability.

Ah, on the subject of scrolls, I was thinking that hers aren't exactly like normal. They're short duration (only until the blood dries), and because they're powered from her blood, that's why they have to match her affinities. But, thus, compared to other scrolls, they can be created more easily, on a time scale of a minute or two (seeing they only last for 10). And this would move down to abilities either way, correct?

Let's get rid of the weapon/armor, and siphon for spells then, on the souls front.

Does that remove enough abilities?
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@Kibaro Actually I wanted to avoid having to modify my appearance to match the bloodlines I picked. This time around, I picked a picture and made a character around it, so I wanted to avoid picking a heavy percent in a bloodline to match the picture.

Aka, I like the appearance picture too. :D
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Removing 2 abilities from the orbs, removing intangibility and adding a special scroll ability equates to 5. Need to remove one more.
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@Rai Aright, I'll just pick up the scroll thing later. Hum.
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Characters:
Oron: "From pain grows strength" Hard stubborn soldier man who is super unlucky losing everything he sought for, just kinda unleashing his anger for all this as a tour gide. Occasionally works for Therosi.

???: "Shall I spit out the spoon; To attack that which put it there?" Seemingly kind, actually sadistic. That's all I got.

Ashe: "A trade empire is not built upon one's dead enemies but upon their wealth." Likes money and talking, which is pretty helpful for a merchant.

Kuvira: "Alone we are strong... together we are stronger!" Ends don't justify the means straightforward soldier, likes her big puppydragon. Super arena champion and fighter for Gaia. Secretly a pretty pretty princess.

Rupal: "I-i-I can pro-obably make it." Nervous nice guy blacksmith, who travels and helps out in Gaia.

Velvet: "Constantly losing small objects? Always itching when you pass by the fireplace? Seeing flickering in the corner of your eyes during the twilight hours? Your house may be haunted! Fortunately, for the low low price of eleven coppers, I can perform an exorcism to rid you of ghostly inhabitants!" Untrustworthy soul and money stealing monk, occasionally works for Taxis.

So, I think this is the current roster of people who posted cs's?
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If the additional spell/ability/enchanted item is all that was missing he's ready to go.
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So, if I understand things correctly, if we have stuff occur near the Gaia/Vrondi border, it would be plausible for any of our characters to meet each other, aye? You've got Jungle for Oron, those Merchant guild spots just on the Gaia side of the border for Ashe, Gaia for Kuvira and Rupal, and Velvet's associated with Vrondi.
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Ashe was on way to trade with Rupal for some great oro weapononry, Oron had been hired to accompany him.
Kuvira is alerted to check on them.
They stumble across Velvet's grotto.
??? Was traveling with Ashe for company.
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