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@Jotunn Draugr I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but Xiu's powers have already been claimed. My character, Penelope (most recent post in the Char tab) has Hypersensitivity and heightened reflexes/agility.

I hate to be the one to tell you, cause I really like the character.
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@Jotunn Draugr Xiu's physical reactiveness is still on the table. Your CS looks good to me so far.
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@Jotunn Draugr The only issue I can see is that the Neurotic part should probably be under personality.
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Still adding a player color and will be working out the kinks in the sheet, but could you give it a look over for me, @SecretlyDiscord? Make sure it's even okay before I put any more time into it?
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@Jotunn Draugr Xiu's physical reactiveness is still on the table. Your CS looks good to me so far.


Awesome, I'll get the formatting done, and expand the backstory. Then is it alright if I throw it up in the CS tab?
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@Jotunn Draugr The only issue I can see is that the Neurotic part should probably be under personality.


I've essentially got it under both, because it applies to both.
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@Jotunn Draugr Yup! Welcome aboard!

I'll have my IC post up today. :) And I don't have classes tomorrow! (tiny but just as turnt party)
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@JunkMail My only concern would be that Henry might be too OP for the govt. to handle. He probably would have been killed on the spot unless there was some sort of way that he could control his size (like Bruce Banner/ Hulk). I like the ability, I'm just not sure about how he would function like that all the time...
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@SecretlyDiscord

Bruh you literally have a reality warper than can pull things from different dimensions by tearing holes in space time which crosses both the gravity and time power rule.

I understand that Henry might be OP, and I will certainly work with you on that. But give me a nonvariable baseline to work with here.

I can certainly work a transformation into his character sheet. But for everyone in the future I think my issue still holds water so everyone can be judged more easily.
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@SecretlyDiscord

Bruh you literally have a reality warper than can pull things from different dimensions by tearing holes in space time which crosses both the gravity and time power rule.

I understand that Henry might be OP, and I will certainly work with you on that. But give me a nonvariable baseline to work with here.

I can certainly work a transformation into his character sheet. But for everyone in the future I think my issue still holds water so everyone can be judged more easily.


I agree that he's OP, but I wasn't aware of a spacetime warper since I haven't been reading the CSs. Which char is that? I can try to figure out a way to help balance out Henry.
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Daniyal Lohinejadian. While he certain has weaknesses that doesn't change the fact that he can pull eldrich beings from nowhere should he reaaaaaaaally concentrate.

Which I have seen many times.
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@Jotunn Draugr My character also suffers from numbness, so if they get set up to spar against each other it would be really interesting (and bloody)! We should make it happen. :B Although... Marlowe would get her ass handed to her.

Just got an IC up. Mediocre post is mediocre, but at least it's there! ;3;
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Will have a IC post up in the next few days. Bit busy though so i'll just do a short post soon or a big catch up post if you guys progress and i can't post anything
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Daniyal Lohinejadian. While he certain has weaknesses that doesn't change the fact that he can pull eldrich beings from nowhere should he reaaaaaaaally concentrate.

Which I have seen many times.


Yeah, I'd have to say that at least the methodology of that character (DL) needs to be changed. Especially if we're keeping to the original premise that these are all pure genetic mutations, in which case "eldritch power well" doesn't really fit in. If that sort of stuff is getting accepted then I might as well try to push my powerset that was rejected in the original incarnation of this rp.
However, if you don't mind waiting a day or two, I can probably reroute your character's idea into a less overtly OP and more potentially OP down the line form. Up to you and SectretlyDiscord, though.

@Witch Cat does, to be fair, have weaknesses that pretty well limit it, but my question is whether we're keeping the barred powers from the first incarnation, because there was a list and reality warping definitely falls under at least two of the banned sets. But again, really that's up to @SecretlyDiscord.
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@Jotunn Draugr My character also suffers from numbness, so if they get set up to spar against each other it would be really interesting (and bloody)! We should make it happen. :B Although... Marlowe would get her ass handed to her.

Just got an IC up. Mediocre post is mediocre, but at least it's there! ;3;


Haha absolutely! I think these two will make an outstanding rivalry.
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@SecretlyDiscord

Oh btw, are you going to put something up, to help set the scene? Like, where exactly would my character wake up in the morning?

Nvm, read over all the posts. Got mine up,
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Hi, sorry for my absence!
@JunkMail I'm sorry, I didn't mean to offend you. What I meant was that I'm not sure how the government would deal with a 10'4" lizard person. We have to consider that everyone is afraid of (and has pre-existing prejudices against) the malfunctions. I wouldn't want your character to be one of the ones to be executed is all. I think that the powers in place for your CS are good (and you certainly don't have to write down anything I say (that would turn out terribly)) I'm just concerned about how powerful Henry is to start out. If you would like, the way you had him could be something he builds up to eventually. However, as a start-up for this RP, he is too powerful (especially if we put him next to the others who are just starting with their abilities). I am trying to coordinate playability in a way that no one is able to tear through other players. We can probably work with others on the reaches of their characters' abilities (@Witch Cat plus any other concerns). If there are any suggestions you would like to make, please feel free to bring them up as I'm sure we will all be willing to hear you out (mom look to everyone). I want to have an environment where everyone is on a level playing field. I'm glad that you're being honest with me because it happens to be my first time leading anything on this site (Heaven knows this shouldn't be happening). I'm still trying to figure this whole leading thing out... That being said, please be patient with me. I hope we can work something out to please all parties.

I write too much. :/

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Of course. I'm in no rush for anything dudes/dudettes.

Also, you never offended me. I didn't mean to come off as if I was. I'm used to working with MrAllenJ, who you are all acquainted with. He and I are bros, but I'm here because me and another friend are considering joining since the whole "Mutants with actual medical conditions" is more our gig.

I'm really relaxed when it comes to phraseology. But at the same time if I see something that's not quite right I'll call it. Shoot me a group PM as ideas come to you all and I'd be happy to work them into the sheet as manageable.

Glad to see GMs willing to work with their players. I don't see it as much as I wish I did.
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@JunkMail I just wanted to make sure we were cool. Believe it or not, I don't want to get in another fight ;P. But yeah! I am very willing to work with everyone on this. I mean, you're all people too so it's only right that I treat you as such. It would be wrong to ignore you guys, that's for sure.

I'm glad to have you and look forward to writing with you!
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Yeah, Discord treats us well. So much better than all my other pimps.

Personally, I like the idea of Henry's power. Discord has a point on it being hard for the government to deal with if permanent. How would they even move him to TEF-149 like that? But if he had a transformation, or if he slowly mutated and progressed into that form throughout the story, it'd work a bit better. As for that eldritch stuff, I never even noticed that.

On the subject of character lethality, Drei could technically kill everyone in the same room as him. That said, he'd currently end up killing himself as well due to the fact that he'd be just as affected by whichever toxin he chose to produce. And to be able to produce enough to kill multiple people, it'd have to be something slow acting to ensure he didn't die right at the lethal dose for one person. Or he could opt for a powerful explosive. But he doesn't wanna die just yet.

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