@BlytheChi i did not know we could play them. i will get to work tonight
btw when the dragon does the whole "my patience grows thin" thing, and Allara gets hit with that magic her eyes glow slightly. She doesn't know this, and she only knows that everything gets brighter.
I didn't really know how to convey that, since it's in Allara's POV. Any ideas?
... would you mind if I stole that from you? It was well written and I get stuck in the perspective I'm writing from sometimes.
Dunno if this is intuitive, but anything I put in parenthesis are internal thoughts