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Alright, just making sure!

I can't believe we've been writing for this long!
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i know its great ^.^
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I'm legitimately so excited for when we start Part 2 of our story.

I've got new roles for you, and new characters for us.

I have an assignment for you soon. >:)
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Awesome ^.^
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Just posted! Do tell me your thoughts. I'm trying my hand at writing monologues. :P
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It was great!

Now to think up a reply
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I suck at fighting, I'm sorry.
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No need to apologize! What you're doing now is generalizing the fight-ing altogether, which is good if the fight is over in one post. However, I do admit that with an ongoing battle through multiple posts that the descriptions are a bit lacking. I'm not trying to belittle you, but I do believe you can do so much more!

You're an anime fan yourself, right? Have you ever re-watched a fight scene before? I don't know if everyone knows this - and I believe only people of a select personality do it - but when a movie, animation, or book portrays an event that's so visceral and expressive (also helps if it's authentic and realistic), I would revisit the scene or paragraph(s) again. Maybe you could give it a try, see if it helps!

I know you're an amazing writer - you write and express emotions and interactions better than I do, with a gap so high, something I need to learn for the upcoming Part we'll have. Don't let this be a discouragement!
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Whoops, I might have gotten overboard with my recent post! hahaha!

You get the picture with the second part. Help Gershwin!
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Made an edit to my entry. Make sure to read it through!
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I will!

I just...fight scenes are just quite hard, for me. I just can't seem to write about it.
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No worries! We all have our own (writing) strengths. You do you!

Also, I just had another zombie dream. This is my third, and by far my most favourite.

In my head I designed the internal architecture of this school, because I've never seen it before. I rescued this girl and teacher (who I have never met, probably some strangers' faces I remember seeing in public) from inside to out. We were all parkouring and stuff, away from fast, 28-weeks-later zombies.

There was even a helicopter evac scene. I'd never physically been in the inside of a helicopter, bht it sure looked realistic when so many of us fit in and flew to an ocean facility.

Legit, my other two zombie dreams were just as amazing.
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Lol, sounds pretty epic, although why are you dreaming of Zombies?

I'm just ddreaming of crazy clowns.
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I like zombie movies too much hahah
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Just curious, and if it makes you feel uncomfortable, please, you do not have to answer

Are you afraid, or at least affected, by clowns? What's so scary about them?

My sister is afraid of clowns, I am not, and we live in HK where circuses are rare, and TV shows about clowns are just as such. o-o
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You should name your special move! hahaha!
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I enjoy clowns. These freaks running about? They bring shame to clowns.

lol I will once I figure out what to call it
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Also, think about what Big Boss told Cody. Your character really reminds me of Batman right now, from Dark Knight Rises. Here's a discussion on the impulse of fear of death, and the philosophy and logic of it.

movies.stackexchange.com/questions/123..

Blind Prisoner: You do not fear death. You think this makes you strong. It makes you weak.
Bruce Wayne: Why?
Blind Prisoner: How can you move faster than possible, fight longer than possible
without the most powerful impulse of the spirit: the fear of death.
Bruce Wayne: I do fear death. I fear dying in here, while my city burns,
and there's no one there to save it.
Blind Prisoner: Then make the climb.
Bruce Wayne: How?
Blind Prisoner: As the child did. Without the rope. Then fear will find you again.
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hhuh.

interesting.

I shall think on that.
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:)

How much do you think you know about me? hm? :p
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