@TheMinorFallHmm, well. Orion can let Cera stay or not -- probably not, since he leaves in two hours or so. Might comment on the name not being the same as what she called it -- but I guess the fact that most of the letters are out explains the reason.
For the later section...Lya might notice that Amune is decidedly uneasy. The girl probably won't explain much of why, but you could. There's introductions to the various other folk -- particularly those that Tsitua might want Amune to work with, if he is considering trying to train her. She'd have some sort of reaction upon seeing Cain here -- and it's totally because they're kinda close in the other thread. Yay for inaccurate impressions! Probably recognition, and a sense of knowing him well, though she'd be wary about it because she can't place it, and because I'm sure kid!Amune is going to find out he's actually very dangerous at some point. Hm, you might take her to see Nunque, though right now if Amune sees him tied up she won't take it well, and someone will need to explain fast or she might try to fight her way out.
I am curious as to why nobody has asked about Jareth's presence. He wasn't exactly invited, and while he is an untrained magic user, it's not yet particularly active, nor does he seem especially useful.