Damn it, Jim! Anywho, that's better. Never be afraid to add more, even if it feel repetitive to what other players said. We want your characters perspective. Like I would have started Red cleaning one of the nasty rooms until she heard that familiar call from Snow that gets Red's blood boiling. Her and Snow may not be on good terms. Then she marches in and plays the dutiful maid and notices the new recruit that drips on her carpets. You'll get the hang of it. Just like table top, it takes some getting used to first.

OK so its my gal that's wet and pissed off, lol ok

Yep lol and like I said, your maid can't actually join the guild so she'll have to leave or maybe take Red's spot as one of the brothel maids.

Off to a good start guys, I can all ready tell I'm going to like Devin. I like the devil may care attitude he seems to have so far. Definitely a fun scene of him on the upper floor there.

Again, Jolly, don't be afraid to get into it and treat it more as a narrative than a table top action. I know you got the creativity in you for it, that's why I left you the open door to show Eulalie's maid around the brothel. Will give you that freedom to write without interruption as I assume Eulalie and Devin will be following Ellie into the back.

I have a few things in mind, but I'm also open to suggestions for any creatures you're craving to hunt. With in reason for our skills. Taking on a Wendigo or something may be above your training for now.

EDIT: I threw up a few of the contracts to populate the Contract Board. Guild Supplies will come up next time I get a chance.

I intend for him to have a more carefree personality. Innocent and honest, despite his upbringing and recent events. However, usually I can't follow my own cses and initial ideas perfectly so they're always subject to change from my own mood and feelings at the spur of the moment. The unpredictability makes it feel almost like they have their own will.

Wonder, do you mind if I control your maid a bit to get her settled? I'll alter it if you think it doesn't match her.

If you want to do something like that, it would be simpler to do a collab. PM what you intend to do and suggest your idea, and have the other party reply their exact response and post the combined text. That way the player will still have 100% control over their own characters.

You can, Eulalie is going to be mad at having to go to a servant's room in a brothel to have clothes ironed or her hair done, but at least she'll learn to dress herself.

wonderlandalli said
You can, Eulalie is going to be mad at having to go to a servant's room in a brothel to have clothes ironed or her hair done, but at least she'll learn to dress herself.

Hahaha, oh the things she will see in the wee hours of a brothel xD

Oh um whoops. Didn't realize it was my turn. With only a couple of players it really does swing around quickly.

Azena said
Hahaha, oh the things she will see in the wee hours of a brothel xD

Yes, you do recall I said I like to torture and fuck over my characters, right? lol

Awfully short posts for advanced... :P As long as Azena's not complaining. I'm having a little difficulty getting the writing juices flowing.

#dialogueproblems

Azena said his internet is down. Should be back tomorrow morning.

Valeric said
Awfully short posts for advanced... :P As long as Azena's not complaining. I'm having a little difficulty getting the writing juices flowing.

Nope. It's Advanced because of the level of detail for the RP I'm trying to put in it and the focus on character building that I want. A couple of good paragraphs is all I ask.

I always associate overly detailed, wall of texts with advanced. This is more high casual in my book, which is what I usually go for.

Also I fit a lot of omg'ing into that one paragraph of pure dialogue lol

Also, you've heard of Spanglish, welcome to Frenchlish. Google translator is your friend.

Is there still room to join?

@Val, I am quite opposed to the wall of texts, but still have expectations in content and grammar so I decided Advanced. My normal level is High-Casual. However, you're right. That is the usual view of an Advanced RPer.

@Wonder, I noticed. No worries, we do what we can and it will be easier to get content when we get into the field. Dialog scenes are always difficult.

@Leo, there is. I'm trying to design the game to allow people to come and go fairly easily.

Eh oops I made a mistake and thought the group was meeting Merlin. My bad.

It's okay. I played it in :)