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Hello! I thought it would be good if I tell you that what you write is like google translation would be required. hard to read what you write. Anyway, hello to you too

Hmmm. Well, it seems Google Translator translates Hungarian better than i would have thought. For real tho, maybe you could have better posts if you just sent the whole text in your own language through the grinder ( google translate) and then copy it here. I read your post and my eyes bleed. The sentences are so sharp and edgy at times that I cut my hands on the touchscreen.

No offense, but as someone whose native language is not English, sometimes I find it hard to read things that aren't written down correctly, as my brain isn't wired to auto correct them.
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i don't write paragraph usually so @6slyboy6 it's normal if i made fault, i search Something for correct my fault don't worry ^^
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that's why i didn't write a lot but i try to do my best @6slyboy6
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but a friend found me Something for correct me don't worry @6slyboy6
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@Dioxit Dude you don't have to post so many one-liners, you could put everything you need to say in a single post. Wait are you on a cellphone ?
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no T_T @Spriggs27
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What can i do ? I write sentence one by one ? T_T @Spriggs27
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Like this ?@Spriggs27@6slyboy6 :

Rachild turn back and he look at the stranger.
He turn back and he start to search something with a suspicious look.
He found a rock and he send this on the windows
After that he run away from here with a laugh

That could be better for me because i can't use the part correctly --
And that could be less boring
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Like this ?@Spriggs27@6slyboy6 :

Rachild turn back and he look at the stranger.
He turn back and he start to search something with a suspicious look.
He found a rock and he send this on the windows
After that he run away from here with a laugh

That could be better for me because i can't use the part correctly --
And that could be less boring


Like try to use commas.

Rachild turned back to look at the stranger but decided to not be bother by him for now, he turned back to continue searching with a suspicious look on his face. He had found a rock between the hit of waste at the side of the street and sended it flying through the window, quickly he made a run for it to not get caught by the house owner.

If you use commas, but and and you can make the lines longer so that they will flow into each other.

I dunno im not english myself either though.
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@Noodles i had a cool concept for kuro. Make him fight through the night while we timeskip. He would have died multiple times by nick but in the morning he finally defeats him... No?
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@liferusher Suree, he's that kind of person, and his respawn point is at the slums c(=
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well, i can try that i think but i search more simple, it's hard for me to write in english that why i would write like this it's more simple FOR ME but if you want i can do that... @liferusher
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Why? The kitty and Zin would become besties and wreck all who dare defy Vesta! Well except themselves and Avery >.>
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@Lunarlors34 Alright now I'm considering it, Zin will give them a stay of execution to see their usefulness. I'm also wondering why Vest is living with her parents and haven't just killed them or sent them to commit Senicide on a mountain or giant piece of ice.
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Because her parents aren't that old? XD
Also if she did she would be the head of the Celestia household. As much as she brags about being the heir she doesn't really want the position.
Well assuming she wouldn't get arrested for murdering her parents of course -_-'
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Because her parents aren't that old? XD
Also if she did she would be the head of the Celestia household. As much as she brags about being the heir she doesn't really want the position.
Well assuming she wouldn't get arrested for murdering her parents, of course, -_-'


Yeah right, they are probably around 50 yrs now. They lived a long enough life, just send the two of them on a 'Vacation' Maybe Avery too, then Vesta would have fewer headaches. It's not fratricide if you send them to their deaths instead of actually killing them yourself. Plus Vesta isn't a retard she could take over the family herself.
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Nope. Try again :P They're not 50 years old.
Also she isn't the type to murder her relatives to gain power. That's a bit of a douchey move. And if she was the head of the household, she wouldn't have nearly as much time to spend with Zin. Not that she wants to spend time with Zin anyway, but Zin might want to
Plus if she's killing off headaches then Zin's gotta go as well.
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*buzzes for wrong answer*
Nope. Try again :P They're not 50 years old.
Also she isn't the type to murder her relatives to gain power. That's a bit of a douchey move. And if she was the head of the household, she wouldn't have nearly as much time to spend with Zin. Not that she wants to spend time with Zin anyway, but Zin might want to
Plus if she's killing off headaches then Zin's gotta go as well.


Then how are they ? How old were they when they had their first born ?

Who's to say Vesta isn't a douche ? Who's to say Zin wouldn't just spend time with Vesta or force Vesta to make time. Also Zin is a headache that Vesta will have to die with, over and over and over again.
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