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(Edit: Whoops, page break. On the previous page I accepted you, if you didn't see it.)

@Oxenfree For reference here's mine:

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Oh, I'm excited. Nobody does grimness and biterness like the Celtic folks.
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@Oxenfree If you're actually British then get ready to get mad at the inaccuracies in my posts. I'm American and about 80% of my knowledge of Scottish culture is from ralfystuff. The other 20% is from stereotypes.
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Hey, sorry if I'm a little late in creating my character. I had to do some research first.



Wait, so my character is the only actual Russian here?
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@Hostile All right, so there are two or three little problems I need to bring up. As with the other app, I'll give you some good with the bad.

The Good
  • Cool, cool history! I love the family heirloom, which as a trope can easily end up feeling contrived and silly (usually it's a centuries-old family sword in some crummy Fantasy setting).
  • I'm admiring the diversity in backgrounds here so far, and yours is no different. A middle-class military family serving the Soviet utopia will stand in fascinating contrast to the career criminals and other lowlifes. I can't wait to see how he feels about the collapse of the USSR.
Improvements Needed
  • No anomalies or artifacts here. This is S.T.A.L.K.E.R. without the psychic C-consciousness stuff.
  • I dunno if psychopathy is "developed." Maybe it ought to just "emerge" instead? As in, it was always laying dormant inside him, and something in the Zone has dragged it out? I dunno. I'll trust you on this one.
  • The one thing you still need to explain is why he has come to this zone, when surely there are others in Russia which would have been easier for him to infiltrate. Why come to Germany?


He's pretty good, mate, and pretty close to being accepted!
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Thabkd.. I'll change it tomorrow. It's 1230 am for me here and I need to sleep.
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@pugbutter Nah, I'm as American as any. Lots of family still in Ireland though, so that's where most of my knowledge of the culture comes from.
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@Oxenfree Good to know I probably won't offend anyone with my distinct and refined lack of culture!

Hey guys, breaking news: mathematics is not fun. So although I'll keep my promise about getting the thread up before Saturday, you should count on it being near the very end of the week. I have some homework to catch up on and a test to study for, especially on Wednesday which is my free day from work and college.
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@pugbutter ahaha, stalker. I've not played, but there's a magical version in a group I adored (the power plant with the meltdown was a magitech nuclear plant researching better methods). Granted, we don't go grimdark, and some things are playued for laughs, but it has given me a fondness for the Zone. ...I cannot say for certain that I wish to join you, but I shall consider it.

I seem to remember artifacts being a thing. Is that the case here, andif so, how do they work?
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No artifacts in this one. In the games they were created by experimentation in psychic powers gone awry, and by an entity called the "C-Consciousness," neither of which exist here. (In the book it was alien technology and in the movie it was just....magic, I guess.)

It's just mutants, bandits, radiation, and a whole lot of violent, antisocial personalities.
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@pugbutter Changed it.
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@Hostile πŸ‘ Yep, better. Accepted.
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Im late ik. Creating my char Saturday.
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)))))

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)))))

Of joinings


The thread is being written tonight; you're in luck, unlike the people who have been waiting awhile for it!
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Cool! Been working on the character off and on, so looking forward to it.
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The Player Characters are in motion. Good time to join, if Post-Apocalypse is your thing. Once again, the IC/OOC thread is here.
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