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@Holy Soldier Sorry, sorry, but I'm trying not to make a generic sheet, so it might be a little longer, but no later than tomorrow. Promise.
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@Loki OdinsonThere's no hurry. Just don't take 30 days.
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Work in progress! I'll have it finished soon!!!
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We need someone to be disciple to the Dragon. I'm surprised Dragon didn't go first. But if you're going to make a Grandmaster then it would be the school for the Dragon and not the Tortoise.
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@Feisty-PantsForgot to mention you, but basically, what I said above.
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@Feisty-PantsForgot to mention you, but basically, what I said above.


Gootcha. Fixing now.
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I'll have my starting post up in a few hour's time
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I'll have my CS fully done later tonight. And a post tomorrow, if accepted.
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Almost done. Just concocting the last of her current storyline. But faaarrr too tired to write anymore. Nini.
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I will be away during christmas. So I will most likely not post during those two days. At least not IC because I will leave my laptop at home :)
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Done and done. Please see above, and let me know if I need to edit!!
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@Feisty-PantsYour character cannot be of mixed blood. We had this discussion before when an applicant tried to make a hybrid of all the races. She will either be Gon or Jin because one trait will be dominant and the other recessive. As for her draconic characteristics, there isn't a race in this game that has that so I don't know why you used it. If you want her to be beast-like, then the only race that is beast-like in appearance are the Lyn. These were the major mistakes I saw so far. I am going to keep reading.
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Work in progress! I'll have it finished soon!!!


All this CS did was disturb me. It made me wonder if you read the game because the Q&A specifically tells you that hybrids are not allowed. You were also going complete god-mode with your character. I refused a player already for doing that. If writers make their characters gods, even if they were nerfed, I can see the writers still trying to do it IC. You will have to really convince me to believe otherwise.

I made my comments on your CS in yellow. I am very strict when it comea to Advanced applications because this is Advanced. This is not casual at all.
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Well. Let me make the edits, and make her purely Gon. My apologies. ^^;;

Edits will be done as you see fit shortly tonight. I did skip over the Q n' A. Just thought it would make for an interesting dynamic.

Though whole CS making you sick seems to just be insulting for the sake of it. That's kinda unnecessary, Holy.
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Coreect me if I'm wrong, but the edits have been made.
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@Feisty-PantsI'll get to this tomorrow. It's late, and I'm going to bed.
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@Feisty-Pants...I see that you made her Gon and changed her current story. Besides those changes, you didn't change the other things I asked you to change. You should also use a spell check program and read over your work. As I said, for Advanced RP I am stricter than Casual. Because I believe that Casual and Advanced should not be blurred. I take reading comprehension and basic grammar and spelling into heavy consideration in Advanced because those basic skills are forsaken as the younger generations have shorter attention spans (and due to ESL writers lol). Read over the last two posts I wrote in response to your CS to see the corrections I asked you to make.
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@CelticSoldier Any idea when you will post again?
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@Lexicon Just letting you know that Amaya could meet Mei-Ran in the North. But, of course, whether you want them to or not, I'll leave it to your discretion.
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