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"I was there, when Mandalore struck down Revan. I was there when he lifted him above his head and broke the greatest warrior in the galaxy over his knee. I was there, the day the Republic fell..."



The story follows the events of an alternate universe in which the Mandalorians are victorious at the battle of Malachor V, as well as a few other pivotal points of Republic victory and continue on to sack Coruscant and the seat of the Old Republic. With Revan, Malak and many other prominent Jedi slain in the battle, the remaining higher-ups within the order mount a valiant defense alogside Republic soldiers and mercenaries alike, but it was not enough. A small handful of Jedi Masters were selected to gather initiates and knights in order to retreat and form enclaves; places where the individual masters would form miniature Jedi councils and begin training a new generation of Jedi in secret.

The year, is 6 ABC. (After Battle of Coruscant) The galaxy is in ruins and almost under complete totalitarian rule of the newly established Mandalorian Empire. With every world having been left so crippled by the conflicts during the Mandalorian Wars, many species and worlds have been condemned to lives of labour under Mandalore the Ultimate. But there are some who resist, pockets of freedom fighters stand on every Mandalorian ruled world, actively waging guerilla wars on their would-be overlords, and in some places, entire planets have begun to rise up.

Enclave Outpost Valkaina:



The Valkaina system is an incredibly small cluster of 'death worlds' on the fringes of the Outer Rim and the Unknown Regions. As a direct result of this, the Jedi Enclave has managed to remain in hiding without fail since the fall of Coruscant. The largest of the planets, from which the system has taken it's name from is comparable to Onderon in terms of size, though the entirety of it's surface is a barren ice wasteland. However, deep beneath the surface, lies an ancient Sith temple. It is here, that after much debate and reworking, that Luthor decided to establish the outpost. The only sign of life on the entirety of the planet is a series of satellite arrays which allow the Jedi communication with the other enclaves.

Kaonia is the second largest planet within the system and closest to it's sun, being a tropical jungle world it was initially the first vote for almost every member of Master Antilles' council, including himself. However, upon closer examination of the many life forms that inhabited the planet, this decision was quickly rescinded. This is in large part due to every creature on the planet being highly predatory and incredibly dangerous. With low visibility and nowhere to establish a communications array, the idea became less and less agreeable the more that was discovered about the world. It was soon decided, that it would be used as a training world instead.

The rest of the system merely consists of standard zero-atmospheric moons, with three for Valkaina, and one orbiting Kaonia.

The Stalwart Fury:



The Stalwart Fury is a Thranta-class corvette with a pure white exterior. It's construction was completed shortly prior to the battle of Coruscant and was instrumental in the evacuation of the Jedi Temple. As a Republic Navy vessel, the Fury was crewed by approximately two hundred marines and sports an array of turbolasers and ion cannons; with a complement of twelve Liberator-class starfighters and four Fortitude-class assault transports. However, in place of the bombers which usually provide support to starfighters, the Fury's hangar is home to the Iron Duke, Master Antilles' personal Dynamic-class freighter.



The resistance base on Valkaina was discovered by accident by the fleeing crew of the Stalwart Fury not long after the sacking of Coruscant. As they exited their hypserspace jump, systems showed their location to be in the unknown regions; using the landing crafts and the Iron Duke to scout the local systems, the established council decided that the Valkaina system would be the first to be thoroughly searched. Upon arrival, with the options presented, Kaonia was unanimously agreed upon to be the site to begin construction of the Jedi enclave.

However, as a large majority of the surviving Republic soldiers and Jedi knights made planetfall they soon realised their mistake. They were attempting to colonise a world home to nought but highly predatory species'.

For days the soldiers and warrior monks fought their way through Acklay, giant spiders and all manner of horrible beasts. Eventually Luthor gave the order to evacuate the planet, the losses already sustained far too many for the planet to be viable. The Stalwart Fury was plotting it's course to move to another system when the Jedi master's apprentice, Maria came to him on the bridge and told of a vision she'd had of icy caves and raging snowstorms.

Because of this premonition, Luthor looked to the world of Valkaina itself, it sub-zero temperatures and arctic winds calling to him through the force. This ice world was the one from his padawan's dream. He was sure of it.

To prevent further terrible losses to the band of survivors, it was proposed that only the most elite warriors aboard the vessel would make planetfall aboard the Duke and search beneath the surface for a suitable location for a hideout. With a sound of unanimous agreeance, a team of eight was assembled, including Captain Armand Del Rio of the Republic navy.

It took only a few moments of the Jedi being upon the surface to feel the pull of the darkness towards a frozen over waterfall. Using the ship's blasters they shattered the massive ice wall and a cascade of water began to fall again. Further investigation revealed to the Jedi an ancient underground Sith pyramid buried a thousand feet below surface level, complete with a hidden hangar on the cliff face behind the external waterfall. After cautiously searching the abandoned pyramid, the search team cleared the Stalwart for landing.

The scale of the base was huge, with more than enough liveable space for the remaining hundred Republic soldiers and sixty or so Jedi. More than enough salvageable tech to trade for supplies and train future generations and this was all without mentioning the massive archive of both Jedi and Sith history. A hundred meter hall of nothing but holocrons and databanks in rows and rows and rows, a deep purple light filling the room.

As unlikely as it seemed, a fully stocked armoury with blasters, vibroblades, armour and even lightdaber parts was discovered deep on one of the bottom floors, besides numerous simulation rooms and living quarters, though conditions were far from glamorous, the Valkaina Enclave had been established, and would go on strong for many years.

Features:

-Three simulation rooms and an armoury on the lowest floor.

- Barracks/living quarters and repurposed storage rooms, which are now used as classrooms for the instructors to teach within on the second.

- Hangar and a maintenance bay on the third floor.

- Library on the fourth. (Has been since reorganised to allow the Sith holocrons and such to be locked away, accessable only with the permission of Maz or Luthor.)

- Council chambers reside at the pyramid's peak.

Five years later, and the enclave's garrison of non-force sensitives numbers three hundred and sixty four strong, protecting and being protected by over a hundred Jedi, whilst still being able to maintain comfortable living conditions for everyone. Away from Mandalorian oppression.

With the seeds of rebellion planted, and the agents of the Jedi Order tuned in to Mandalorian frequencies...now is the time to strike. What role will you play?

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Character Sheet:

Name:
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Class: (Padawan/Initiate/Knight/Master etc.) (Please note, I am not entirely opposed to a couple of masters alongside Luthor on the council. However I will ask that you PM me and request the spot before making it an integral part of your character.)

Position: (What does your character do around the enclave? Are they a pilot? An instructor of some form? Are they still in training? Are they on the council?) (For council status, please see the aforementioned rule on Jedi Masters.

Primary Strengths:

Appearance:

Weapons:

Skills/Abilities:

Background:

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Rules:

I'm not overly fond of rules beyond your standard site rules and the obvious "no meta-gaming" etc etc. Put simply, if you think what you're gonna do is gonna piss someone off, don't do it. Or at least, seek their counsel on the matter, perhaps make a collab post, message myself and I'm sure as mature people we will all be able to resolve the issue. I'm a pretty lax guy so we'll always be able to work something out.

Most of all, just have fun! It's why we're all here, isn't it?

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Lastly, apologies for (in my opinion) the incredibly poor quality of this OP. I never have, and probably never will be good at creating OOC threads. Any questions don't hesitate to ask in-thread or ask me by PM.

May the force be with you.
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Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet! :D I'll make something this afternoon most likely, since I'm about to fall asleep :P I think. If I don't then you can probably expect it a bit earlier.
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Nice :) Apologies for the length of Luthor's bio. May it be noted that I fo not expect anywhere near thay length from you guys. That character just has a lot of history to cover throughout the wars.
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@DirtyDingo A lot of history I need to catch up on :P My app is probably going to be one of the lesser quality since my knowledge on the Old Republic (and Star Wars outside of the films and games) is kinda shoddy, but I'll do some research and have a think about who I want to play :3
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@DirtyDingo A lot of history I need to catch up on :P My app is probably going to be one of the lesser quality since my knowledge on the Old Republic (and Star Wars outside of the films and games) is kinda shoddy, but I'll do some research and have a think about who I want to play :3


No worries pal! I look forward to seeing it
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@DirtyDingoWould you be opposed to me playing a non-Jedi Miralukan instructor, likely from whatever remains of the Luka Sene?
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@DirtyDingoWould you be opposed to me playing a non-Jedi Miralukan instructor, likely from whatever remains of the Luka Sene?


Provided it's written right, I would have absolutely no qualms with such a character! I love the Miralukans! Though I will ask that you PM me the CS before adding it to the character's page.
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@DirtyDingoYou got it boss!
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One for the party! Looking forward to seeing everyone's characters!
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Hope this is cool :3 If anything needs changing or reviewing just lemme know; I kinda chickened out and went with the easy route in the bio :P Stole the CS format from Azure's Gate RP (I love you, Lyla! :D)

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I like it! One detail that does however need changing is her place of origin. Valkaina is a 'death world' it's surface being entirely uninhabitable. The enclave is deep beneath the snow and ice. Other than that I'm a fan :)
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@DirtyDingo Should've clarified that wasn't necessarily the place she was born (she has no idea of that), but the place she was raised :3 Though I could always just change it or remove it.
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@DirtyDingo Should've clarified that wasn't necessarily the place she was born (she has no idea of that), but the place she was raised :3 Though I could always just change it or remove it.


Ah right, that's fine then bud. Glad to have you aboard!
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Name: Dantera
Species: Twi'lek
Gender: Female
Age: 26
Height: 5'6
Weight: 116 pounds

Class: Jedi Knight

Position: Training to control her anger against the Mandalorians which often causes others to judge her. Once in a while, she assists in teaching lightsaber combat classes.

Primary Strengths: Lightsaber Combat

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Weapons: Blue Double bladed lightsaber

Skills/Abilities: Extremely gifted at Lightsaber combat along with blaster bolt deflection but somewhat lacking in the force use department. She can create a force barrier to defend herself against low strength force attacks but she's in trouble if she comes into conflict with a strong force user.

Background: Dantera was born on Coruscant years ago before the start of the Mandalorian Wars and even at a young age, had difficulty with her anger. She would often grow frustrated when training her force abilities such as telekinesis but excelled at lightsaber combat even at a young age. After a few years, if became apparent to her that her skills resided with Lightsaber combat and she focused solely on lightsaber combat and blaster bolt deflection and she began honing her skills over the years. During the Mandalorian wars, she would often keep an eye on how Revan and Malak fared in their battles against the Mandalorians while trying to contain the anger against the Mandalorians that was surfacing more and more frequently.

It was after the Battle of Malachor Five that she realized she had waited too long and that Coruscant was most likely going to become a priority target. During Mandalore the Ultimate's attack on Coruscant, she assisted in attempting to drive the Mandalorians off. Many, many Mandalorians and Mandalorian droids fell to her double bladed lightsaber as Dantera began to give into her anger against the Mandalorians. As the day went by, more Mandalorians fell to her blades before she met up with a Weequay Jedi Master who managed to help her get off planet.

As she and a number of wounded Jedi fled, the ship they had boarded fell under attack by Mandalorians. Dantera was one of the few Jedi Knights capable of defending the wounded and she managed to kill the Mandalorian forces that boarded the ship. It was shortly after this, that she decided to save the wounded. By any means necessary.

She carved her way through the Mandalorian ship and managed to battle her way to the bridge and managed to overload the ship's weapons array and engines before she finally killed the Mandalorian commander but she called on the dark side while doing so. After re-boarding the Jedi transport, she looked down at herself and saw that her tunic was covered with Mandalorian blood and bits of shattered armor.

It was at that point, that Dantera knew she had found her purpose, the only thing that seemed right: The fall of the Mandalorians.

It's been six years since the fall of Coruscant and Dantera has continued training in the enclave while battling her anger against the Mandalorians, trying to keep it from taking control.
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I have some reservations about her history if I'm honest Chev, if her anger is truly such a problem, how has she managed to pass the Jedi trials? More to the point, I feel like her boarding the Mando ship needs a little more detail if it is to stay. Specifically, right now it comes across that she was single handedly butchering an entire Mandalorian cruiser or similarly large ship. Which would be a bit much even for the most experienced of Jedi. Remember these are Mandalorians at their peak; we aren't just dealing with droids or a rebellion. (There have been numerous accounts of Mandalorians killing Jedi in hand to hand combat. I'm sure SOMEONE on that ship would have been able to give her some serious trouble.)

For that reason, I am at this moment going to deny the character. That is not to say however I don't like Dantera, as this is simply not true. I like the inner conflict she is facing with her anger and the Jedi code. But just tone it down a little. (I have no problen with anyone being able to take on large numbers, but let's be a little realistic here guys.) On this subject, it seems to me that she may be a bit too old?

Just some C&C for you buddy.
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Furthermore, it isn't explained how she ends up on Valkaina? That would also be useful information.
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OP has been updated with details on the Valkaina system. Outpost details to follow later.
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OP has been updated with details on the Valkaina system. Outpost details to follow later.
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I should have a cs up by tomorrow
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I should have a cs up by tomorrow


Looking forward to it! By then I should have finished the additions to the OP and we should be basically ready to start with the IC. I mah wakt a couple of days as two of my IRL friends are considering joining.
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