@Leslie Hall @Indra @Denny

Somehow, I finished a rough concept?

Let me know how bad it is.

Alright, review times!

@Crimson Raven I have no issue with anything you've presented in your CS. You've really created a unique character and I can see why you're proud of him. His personality is to the point but still leaves much to be explored in the IC and the same can be said with his backstory. I like how his strengths and weaknesses are well defined and I can't wait to see some of his creative uses of 'Blast'.

Accepted! 2/2

Feel free to move him over to the CS tab.

@Altered Tundra Your personality was a joy to read. Asahi seems like such a prominent personality that I am looking forward to seeing how he meshes with the other characters. You've left enough of his backstory open for exploration and as Indra said, I am very curious to hear about his home town. I have nothing else to say except Praise the Sun!

Accepted! 2/2

Feel free to move him over to the CS tab.

@Mercurial Your characters backstory perfectly justifies her personality. She has legitimate reasons for hating the Librarium and I like how her exposure to their corruptness has given her a noble, almost naive, sense of right and wrong. It will definitely lead to some interesting interactions, especially with more morally gray characters like Whirlwind.

Accepted! 2/2

Feel free to move her over to the CS tab.

@Raijinslayer and @pkken, I will refrain from reviewing your CS' currently because they are unfinished and also because we have a few other people going for the Devil Slayer positions.

@Gowi It's not bad at all! The opposite in fact. There are layers to her personality that really do a good job of painting a picture of her character. The history is well written and to the point, explaining everything we need to know about her past without revealing too much. It's a yes from me!

Accepted! 1/2

Please await the verdict of one other GM.

Typical question from me: When you said

| History: |
Where do you come from? Don't reveal too much of your background.

is that a limit for the physical size of the background? Or just that we should leave holes for plot purposes further down the line?

Typical question from me: When you said
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is that a limit for the physical size of the background? Or just that we should leave holes for plot purposes further down the line?

Leave holes to be unveiled in the IC further down the path.

Thank god. I hate cutting down on stuff I've written >.<

I really appreciate the "less is more" approach for once.

@Gowi It doesn't come naturally to me. I'm working on it >_>'

Also my puppy gets his last set of vaccines on Tuesday~! I can start taking him on walks and to the dog park. I think we're also taking him to the beach soon.

@Mercurial

BTW I laughed when I read through the part where your character clonked the deacon, haha. That’s great. I feel like everyone in Cloud Chasers is the exact opposite to Sania which is good. I expect a lot of fun dynamics ahead.

I am with @Leslie Hall on this one: I have an incurable urge to write and explain everything I can think of (often pondering over the smallest of details). Sadly it can pretty easily turn into filler ^^

Perhaps I should seek medical help?

I am with @Leslie Hall on this one: I have an incurable urge to write and explain everything I can think of (often pondering over the smallest of details). Sadly it can pretty easily turn into filler ^^

Perhaps I should seek medical help?

I’m generally an advanced writer, so I feel you. It is nice not having to write walls upon walls for a CS, is all I am saying, lol.

I shall look forward to experience the bliss someday @Gowi! ^^

Also, I must say, that is a beautiful wall of text

Ay we have a Discord now guys. PM me for the link.

@Leslie HallHow many years has it been since the war of faiths?

@pkken about 4 centuries

@Leslie HallAre there a few people still practicing the sister faith or is it completely lost?

@pkken Worshippers of the Librarium's sister faiths are few and far between in Pandora. Rarer than Devil Slayers. It's more common to find larger groups that still worship the other two heroes down below in the swamplands.

We may or may not learn more about them in the story.

@Leslie HallThank you it was just about what I thought

@Leslie Hall Welp, here's the Librarium Devil Slayer, finished at last. Hope he goes well. :)

@Leslie Hall Welp, here's the Librarium Devil Slayer, finished at last. Hope he goes well. :)

Alexander Augustus [+]

Librarium Registration Card

Personality

_{Alexander is an arrogantly selfish and enigmatic powerhouse, hungry for raw power. Born in the height of liberty and royalty, he feeds off his own vain, wealth, and already existing power in his position, looking down upon those whom he sees as inferior, but while keeping an extremely tight grip in order, justice, and his own faith. He’s infamously known for being merciless to those who oppose the Librarium due to his father’s death at the hand of these “terrorists” as he calls them. This has gotten rather worse due to the corruption of the magic that has begun to slowly eat away his sanity. However, this is mostly shown either in battle or if someone simply defies his orders, bursting with anger as he properly puts them in their place. The only person he bows down to alone is to Mother Juno and the Archbishop Baraqiel and respects only those who are other fellow Librarium Hunters.}

“Sinful degenerates, know your place, for be prepared to be vanquished by the glory of Juno’s might!”

| Nａｍｅ: |

Augustus, Alexander

| Alias|Nickames|Titles: |

”Saint Augustus” ”Helios”; “Harbinger of Light”; “My Lord”

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Male

| R a n k: |

S

| Ａｇｅ: |

38

| Sector : |

The Library Hunters

| History: |

Thousands of years ago, a demon was documented to have done to unthinkable. After millennia after millennia of accounting to various demon victories against that of Mother Juno and the might of Heaven, the demon known as Vetis mysteriously betrayed his own faith and was reverted into the light, joining Heaven’s forces. It’s unclear on what tempted him to revert to this way, but it’s theorized that Vetis, who ironically was one responsible in turning away various angels from their faith, had seen the future, having seen the victory of Heaven to be inevitable and eventual. Taking the new holy name of Azriel, the ex-demon began to create his own devil slayer magic, one that would help his faction defeat all of the vicious dark forces of Hell. Yet unable to create pure holy magic due to his body being originally spawned out of Hell, he had to find a substitute, in which he chose the power of the Sun, hence the birth of the Solar Devil Slayer Magic. Giving it to one of the strongest generals in Juno’s forces, Azriel would do whatever it takes to protect the valuable magic that the designated user holds and bring a glorious victory for his new side. However, when the forces of Hell made a surprise attack on him and his magic’s user, Azeriel, being on the break of death’s door, was able to revitalize the magic from the deceased user’s body and encased it inside a golden lacrima. There he launched it far from the demons, eventually to be found by someone of worth and continue the legacy.

Thousands of years later, a boy named Alexander Augustus was born. Born in the city of Judea, his family was powerful and wealthy, his mother being a senator and his father a skilled mage for the army. He did not know exactly what magic he wielded, since it was kept in such a secret, but Alex simply did not question it. He began to follow in his father’s footsteps by joining in the army to fight with his father, going to one of the highest ranking military academies in all of Pandoria for training. After graduating, his father presented him with a special sword that he once used, being able to heat up to an intensive amount of heat and energy. Little did Alexander knew, it was a hint at what powers his father was wielding.

Yet several years later, Alexander’s father, at the age of 67, died due to an unknown illness that couldn’t be cured, killing him in his sleep. Grieving his father’s death, he sought to continue his legacy through any means necessary. However, on the day of his burial, as he was coming down the hall of a beautiful cathedral, a group of rebel mages broke into the building, looting all that the deceased warrior’s belongings and killing several people. Amongst the chaos, Alex remembered seeing one of the attackers carrying away a large glowing orb of gold. After asking his mother what it was, she finally told him the truth about his father. Surprise surprise, Alexander’s father was the wielder of the Solar Devil Slayer Magic and what he saw was the lacrima that held all of his magical power. His mother then gave him the only surviving valuable from the attack, the only thing that was saved, it being a special sword, named “The Sun Drake”, capable of heating up to intense temperatures like that of the Sun’s. His father's golden armor was also passed down to him.

Accepting the weapon and armor, while thanking his mother graciously, Alexander and a large force of his father’s legion, stormed the guild building of the attackers and brutally slaughtered them like dogs. Yet the guild leader, fearing for his life, hastily tried to absorb the lacrima on his own. Unknown to him, it backfired, as it was later discovered that it could only work through the user’s blood line, and the guild leader was roasted from the inside out, turning into ash and smoke. Claiming the lacrima, Alexander then infused with it, gaining all the magic and power that his father wielded. It was finally all his. With this spike in power, he was able to quickly rank up into becoming a Saint, hence his official title as “Saint Augustus”. Initially he was beloved by the public, both beloved by his people, and feared by his enemies, having kept peace and justice throughout the territory his faction owned. But as the years gone by, the strain and abuse his magic taken began to corrupt Alexander. He became slowly greedy, narcissistic, arrogant, and vain, looking down upon those whom he sees as below him. All the praise and worship didn’t help either, eventually having him think he was some sort of “demi-god”. While he still keeps to his beliefs to this very day, his sanity and egotistical personality slowly keeps creeping up more and more on him each day...

| Magic: |

Solar Devil Slayer Magic
Solar Devil Slayer Magic is both one of the oldest and arguably one of the most powerful of the Devil Slayer Magics, having originated thousands of years ago by an ancient ex-demon, who turned to that of Heaven due to unknown causes, and taught the ways of harnessing the power and force of the Sun. After its host user dies, the magic can only be passed down if the blood of the original user is kept in a special lacrima and injected into a user’s blood relative, like its son, daughter, etc. If injected into anyone who is not the user’s blood relative, it would burn the opponent from the inside out and revert back into its lacrima. The magic also happens to make a person look rather younger than he actually is, purifying the skin and getting rid of unwanted wrinkles and scars, making a 60 year old man look half as old and vice versa. Most of the powers are based off from here.

Spells

• Solar Aura: Solar Aura is a basic spell that makes anyone close to the user feel as if they are very close to the sun. The opponent will feel excruciating pain as if they are being burned alive when in reality they are not. Furthermore, it becomes hard to even look at the User because their eyes will trick them into thinking that User is as bright as the sun. It can blind an opponent if they look at it directly for some time as well as vanquish any auras of any shadow user.
• Solar Devil’s Beam: The user’s hands can fire an intense beam of plasma energy at his opponent for several seconds at will. A stronger variant can be issued if both hands are next to one another, making the beam slightly larger and stronger.
• Solar Devil's Fury: The user takes a deep breath and gathers solar energy in its mouth, which is then fired upon at the enemy.
• Solar Devil’s Shield: The user creates an intense field of plasma that blocks the user against most attacks. Even water and ice barely affects it, unless used in such an insanely large amount.
• Solar Devil's Flash: When this spell is initiated, a sphere of highly compressed bright sunlight imbued with a large amount of magic power rises up from her body. The User is able to use its mental energy to direct this sphere of light toward any opponent and the long it stays compressed, the more powerful it become. When the pressure is released, the sunlight will explode with very high lethality depending on how long the pressure has been building up.
• Solar Devil's Flare: The user claps its hands together and causes a large flare of solar energy to burst up from the ground beneath the opponent, launching them into the air. The flare can also constrict the opponent and flail them around, and the intense direct heat is strong enough to bypass armor plating.

Secret Arts

• Devil Slayer’s Secret Art: Supernovae: The most powerful move in a Solar Devil Slayer’s arsenal, this last resort spell forces the user to absorb all the solar energy he can muster into himself, making himself temporarily invulnerable via the solar energy surrounding him vaporizing the attacks being thrown at him, in which it jumps into the air, and unleashes the energy within a kilometer radius in a powerful blinding explosion. The explosion is so powerful that it can reduce almost anything within its radius into ash. The only draw back is simply that it can only be used when the Sun shines upon him or if he has over 50% magic. If it’s night or cloudy, the user is unable to use it or if said person tries, it has a chance of killing the user itself.

| Miscs : |

Alexander also wields a magic-infused sword named “The Sun Drake”, a sword that when active, its blade will heat up to an incredibly hot temperature, being hot enough to slice through metal. It cannot be used for any magical spells, but its heat can be turned on and off at will.

Being one of the highest ranking commanders of the Librarium, Alexander commands a Dectrium Dreadnought known as ”The Superion”, complete with forward and side light and heavy guns and even comes complete with a bottom Etherion Magic Laser, capable of ripping apart entire fleets in it’s wake, but wastes 50% of its energy with each firing. Alexander also has a private crew of around 400 men to help operate the ship, from manning the guns, to supplying ammo, and even doctors and cooks onboard. The Superion’s alternate captain, when Alexander is not commanding the ship, is Admiral Director Niel.

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Well then, this should be interesting. Looks like Asahi might've found his number one enemy of the Librarium(not counting his brother, of course). Hehehehehe

@Altered Tundra Oh shit... I just looked at your character's profile...



You know... I've seen him for like a little bit... but didn't like... look over him, though I was planning too.

Now that I see his powers... welp... lemme tell you right now this is pure coincidence.