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One thing at a time. I'm happy that there are some new players, but one can't just jump into a 1,800 + post RP with an even older history behind it without warning. I shall have to familiarize you with the world of the dracons. As for "what year" this takes place in, it doesn't take place in a continuity similar to the real world, so the question doesn't have a decent answer. It takes place in a medieval/ancient level of technology with magic in it. Think of it a bit like ancient Egypt mixed with Rome, Greece, and the Middle Ages. And yes, the RP is PG-13 at most, as it has to be in public areas. Nothing too racy or gory.

I'll make it as fast as possible. The dracons are a bipedal (two-legged) race of humanoids which live on a desert continent. This place is part of a planet known as "Earth" to them, but the setting as a whole is tentatively called "Other Earth." I've had it in some stage of development since 2009. That's how far back the antecedents to this RP are.

A dracon stands upright much like a human (check the guy in my avatar). The males are larger than the females, both sexes have scaly skin (female skin is softer), both have tails, neither have wings, males have a more or less uniform skin tone while females have a paler underside, both of them have two horns, a snout, fangs, clawed fingers and toes (three fingers and a thumb, plus three toes and a spur), and they don't use footwear. Female dracons usually dress in a loincloth and a top, while males dress much more like humans do, minus the shoes and the like.

There is no one dracon empire, but many mid-size realms, city-states, city-based kingdoms, duchies, countries, migratory tribes, and vast areas of empty desert. The main dracon cities to keep in mind are Minbenthac (the average city), Naugoa (the rich and magical city), and Hekaga (the evil city).

You don't have to play as a dracon, but your character has to fit into the setting. It's not that hard to do, but there are some things to keep in mind. For starters, humans are not native to the dracon lands, and there are cultural differences between humans and dracons. We can go into those more later if are still interested.

Power-wise, you really should tone down the super-speed. He can still be a good martial artist and cast spells, but don't make him overpowered, for the sake of the other players. For roleplaying purposes, he should probably be 19 years old, not actually 313. And if it is possible to keep him fully human or fully anthropomorphic blue fox, that might help. The setting is already complex enough without having to remember additional sets of rules for new characters. If it can be simplified without losing anything important, simplify it. That's my motto. He has too many powers, and can easily break the plot as it is.

I can suggest an alternate version of your background to make it fit the setting better, if that helps. Fasuto can still be his name.

To help you visualize it:

This is a male dracon:



This is a female dracon:



This is a simple map of the dracon lands. They're about as large as the Sahara Desert. Like, Africa north of the tropical areas:



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So this was a Reptile-Humanoid rp? Or other animals included? Also, thank you for the information.. really.

But hey, says it was open to new players, I wanna try.

And uh, I wanna see your suggestion. (Fasuto Fokkuso means Fast Fox, anyway)

Thanks again.
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It is open, and I want to help you fit in. This can easily be made to work in one of several ways. There are a few issues, so I'll break it down in just three easy steps.

1. Tone down the powers. If Fasuto can do so many things, he will be able to solve any situation by himself. Pick a couple of powers at most, and don't introduce new ones. If I had to say what fits well, try something like a toned-down version of his speed combined with the ability to cast simple spells. He can keep martial arts and weapons skills, no problem.

2. Simplify his origin story. He may be only 19, but we also have to add details as to what a non-dracon is doing in the dracon lands. The big question is whether or not he was raised there or whether he is from another land and has the culture of that other place.

3. Pick a species and stick with it. Shapeshifting is allowed, but it would help to keep it simple. That way, other players don't have to take into account a huge number of powers that Fasuto has. Remember, he may be your character, but this is not your RP alone. If other players have a hard time keeping things straight, it makes things hard for all of us. So, he should be a human or an anthropomorphic fox. The blue hair or fur is fine.

Other than that, modern elements should be downplayed or removed. No modern clothing or devices, but something like a shirt, pants, a tunic, a hood, a cloak, robes, shorts, things like that are perfectly okay.

Now, does this clear some things up?

P.S. It is mostly dracons, but there have been some humans and other non-dracons too. You don't have to be a reptilian creature if you don't want to be. In fact, this would not be the first time a player had a fox-type character in a dracon RP. Long story.
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Yes what is your username on discord?
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I'll PM you that information.
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I PM'd you. You can add me there using the information I sent.
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On Discord, you go to the three little humanoid figures box in the upper-left hand corner which is "direct messages" and click "add friend", then type in the name and numbers I sent.
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@Aristocles i got discord. yep.

So.. I'll go research stuff.

Username's Bronze.
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You also need to tell me the four digit number after "bronze". You can PM me that info.
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#7820, sir.
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Name:Fasuto Fokkuso

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Age: 19
Gender: Male
Race: Fox
Powers:
Mimicry - Will mimic other's skills, only those he saw in first watch. He may not master it, but he knows somehow, whether magic attack or physical attack, his mimicry will do the work.
Summoning Magic - He can summon swords, bows, axes, guns, and the like. He mostly due with mimicry, he can summon living things too, but they'll be from another dimension. He often summons a queen spider called Ennave.
Blue Flames and Ice - His very own attack, blue fire is the hottest among fires, but he can make red, orange, and yellow fires. His Ice is freezing cold too, -230 F is his coldest but it drains him very quick.
Personality: He always stays in low profile, attentive on sound and and his surroundings, if he wants anything he can pick it up easily, information, dracon's feelings, and such. He reads people's body language, where their eyes go, how fast and deep they breath, their attitude, and much more. He was sneaky too, in this land, he can live.
He was also captivated to the sun and stars, he sleeps outside mostly, on the grasslands and meadows. Dracons who see him sleeping mistakenly assume there was a dead body lying there, it amuses him.
Background: Born in a far land, he was a free lancer, can be a temporary swordsman or thief. Give him a weapon and money, he'll fight. Whenever the land is scarce on jobs, he moves away to another lands, he also have quite a reputation.
He can use a bow, a dagger, a spear, a sword, an axe, a rod, a wand, and a shield. Mastered them, actually. His partner, Ennave also aids him on these jobs, either burn or freeze their enemies or wrap them in sticky and durable webs.
His next stop was these lands of Dracons, made several contracts and finishes them, his mimic'd attacks was the bvest for him, he picked some deadly moves from different masters. Mimicry is hard if you don't have the proper strenght, so he can't do much of his mimicry.
He also helps old men and ladies, also can be hired to watch a grocery stand or something, drive a caravan to a certain land, he can do it. Helping children and old people is free, =).
When he was betrayed, he kills the guy who betrayed him, to reduce the number of bad-guys in the world of course.
Likes: Dark Chocolate (rare to come by), Shiny stuff, Cats.
Dislikes: Boastful and the Rude. Stalkers and Dark Magicians who use it for the bad.

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Looks good, apart from the reference to guns. Any other changes at this point, if any, would be very minor. Now we just need to figure out how to work him into the RP and you can post with him in character. Might want to tone down the ability to mimic the magical powers of others, too.
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He can mimic those he can mimic. If it was very hard Dark Magic OP and only one guy knows it, he can't do that. He knows his limits. He cam mimic voices too.
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He can mimic those he can mimic. If it was very hard Dark Magic OP and only one guy knows it, he can't do that. He knows his limits. He cam mimic voices too.


So, he can only mimic magic and abilities which fall under the limit of what he can otherwise do with his normal powers and abilities? That's fine.
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That's pretty much it, oh, he can do a bit of unarmed fights, of course, mimic'd.
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Does he fight with his finger and toe claws too?
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He can but he won't, he doesn't play dirty. What he see on others can be mimic'd. There are some he can't like lifting an elephant or mimicing magic to freeze a lake.. he can't.
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Good to know.
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I will post soon! Been busy with work, but it is letting up a bit.
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