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I'll be posting it on the CS tab then.


Oh, I'm not accepting anyone yet. Since it's only a small cast that I'm going for, I'll start accepting when everyone has their CS up.
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@Blu
Ah, alright then. I'll just wait for the others.
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@Hammerman Alright everything is good now. If there are any changes, implement them by tomorrow.

@Spanner @Acid Hippie Everything going well? If you need any help, let me know.


I'm kinda full of things to do now, so the process of making the sheet is going on slowly for now. I'll try to get it done by tomorrow but I'll probably be occupied during most of the next week, as I ended up accepting to help a professor with something.
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I'm kinda full of things to do now, so the process of making the sheet is going on slowly for now. I'll try to get it done by tomorrow but I'll probably be occupied during most of the next week, as I ended up accepting to help a professor with something.


If it's just things like personality and biography left, then you can post what you have completed. But yeah, it's been a week so I don't want to keep everybody waiting much longer.
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@Blu Still working on abilities and techniques, but my character is pretty much done!

I added more backstory than I originally intended, but I not only wanted to focus on his story but how he came to meet Amen and earn his role as a Vizier. I hope what I wrote is okay. Let me know if I should change/add anything.
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@Acid Hippie So the God Form. Is this his Sacred State or is this something else entirely? Preferably, I think you should label this as a sort of false Sacred State and have him not be entirely in control when using this form. A true Sacred State would be achieved later when I reveal more details about it. Is that fine with you? Other that, it's a thoroughly good read.
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@BluYeah that's fine! I just kind of put that together and wasn't trying to put together a Sacred State, as Zamonth will rely more on bronze than spells (at least in the beginning). I didn't think to mention his state of mind in the form either. I'll make sure to fit the form into the plot and make whatever changes are necessary for Sacred State.

Also food for thought, Ammit is a demon so maybe there could not be a controlled state of her power? I don't mind one way or another but the thought came to mind. It would also explain how he obtained her power without much practice in magic.
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Also food for thought, Ammit is a demon so maybe there could not be a controlled state of her power? I don't mind one way or another but the thought came to mind. It would also explain how he obtained her power without much practice in magic.


Yeah, this makes sense. His Sacred State would probably come from Khnum then if he ever obtains it.
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@BluMy thoughts exactly. And Khnum is the god of rebirth, so I figured that would be a significant event for Zamonth not only spiritually but for his magic skills.

EDIT: Because Ammit usually waits for Annubis's judgement before devouring souls, perhaps that could tie in to a way to calm or at least somewhat order Zamonth while in this form. Assuming Priestess Nebet is in the story, as she is his disciple.
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@BluMy thoughts exactly. And Khnum is the god of rebirth, so I figured that would be a significant event for Zamonth not only spiritually but for his magic skills.

EDIT: Because Ammit usually waits for Annubis's judgement before devouring souls, perhaps that could tie in to a way to calm or at least somewhat order Zamonth while in this form. Assuming Priestess Nebet is in the story, as she is his disciple.


Yeah, it could prove to be interesting story arc for Zamonth. But anyways, we'll find out who's accepted tomorrow at the earliest. I might hold off if Spanner really needs the time to complete his CS. Plus, there's one person who came to me via PM and is currently working on their CS.
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@Blu has the eye of horus been taken yet?
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@Blu has the eye of horus been taken yet?


Someone has expressed interest in it but they're unsure if they'll use it. It doesn't matter if more than one person applies it to their character. If you'd like, I can send you the info on it.
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@Blu I would like that
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Welp, in the end I managed to complete most of the character while helping in the hospital. Currently missing Bio (Mostly complete but missing the time to rewrite it in English), Techniques (That I didn't even start formulating), and a definite personality (As i didn't manage to rewrite all of the original personality after losing my notes).


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@Spanner Well, it looks like you did end up utilizing the Eye of Horus after all. Anyways, I've extended the time to tomorrow if that helps any. If it doesn't, I'll judge your CS as is and will not count things like the missing bio (although if you can PM me a brief summary of it, that would be much appreciated). Seems like Techniques are missing as well. He doesn't have any or you don't have time to write it up yet?
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@Spanner Well, it looks like you did end up utilizing the Eye of Horus after all. Anyways, I've extended the time to tomorrow if that helps any. If it doesn't, I'll judge your CS as is and will not count things like the missing bio (although if you can PM me a brief summary of it, that would be much appreciated). Seems like Techniques are missing as well. He doesn't have any or you don't have time to write it up yet?


Didn't have the time and creativity to write the techniques yet. As for the bio, I do have it sort of completed but still need to organize and rewrite it in English.
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Didn't have the time and creativity to write the techniques yet. As for the bio, I do have it sort of completed but still need to organize and rewrite it in English.


We can discuss techniques later if the character is accepted. As I said, I would appreciate a brief summary of the bio but it's not necessary if you're busy.

EDIT: We seem to have 3 more people working on sheets now.
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We can discuss techniques later if the character is accepted. As I said, I would appreciate a brief summary of the bio but it's not necessary if you're busy.

EDIT: We seem to have 3 more people working on sheets now.


I'll try to PM the summary in a while then.
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@Blu Just curious, but how many people are you planning to accept?
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@Blu Just curious, but how many people are you planning to accept?


4 people at max.
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