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Hidden 8 yrs ago Post by Polaris North
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Done.
Hidden 8 yrs ago Post by Superman
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Me and PN have a post about half way done, so we're working on our introduction. Just to keeps you guys informed and all
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I'll be posting my intro shortly.
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Post up. As usual let me know if I need to tweak anything.
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What time of the year is it, Ic?
Hidden 8 yrs ago Post by AcerRo
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I'd say late summer, early fall.
Hidden 8 yrs ago Post by Superman
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Posted. If there are any problems with it let me know. We kind of orchestrated the meeting in Buckhead.
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Due to my job I wont be able to post 'till next week. I will have my phone on me, so I'm able to access the internet. But my posting abilities will be limited to my phone. I doubt I can get a meaningful post using that tiny thing. Apologies for any inconvenience this may cause. Talk about awful timing.
Hidden 8 yrs ago → 8 yrs ago Post by AcerRo
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You're good dude. Don't worry about it.

I'm gonna wait for someone else to post before I post for Buckhead.
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@AcerRo Awe okayyy, I'll wait. I thought our post was pretty good though? Sorry it was so long.

Who else is in Buckhead again?
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@AcerRo Awe okayyy, I'll wait. I thought our post was pretty good though? Sorry it was so long.

Who else is in Buckhead again?


Just JJ, Violet, and I think Solaris' character when he gets officially accepted.

I'm working on a post, but it might be a bit. I had a really good idea back on the old thread but never wrote it down so now I'm trying to remember it.
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Okay so I'm about half way through your post and a couple of things I want to point out. I don't know if you guys have ever been shot at, but that shit is terrifying, and you never really get used to it. That's being said it's kinda hard to believe that 19 year old, who has never been in combat is calm and collected but making jokes about it as well. Also, Luna is an extremely capable body guard and Ashton is who's been shooting since he was a kid. Yet. It's implied that Ashton is a better shot.

Also, we have powers, we know it, but we don't have any control over them yet. Also the cost for using them is REALLY high right now. I really wanted the two groups to be weak and afraid. Create a since of tension and all that good stuff.

Plus I harped on Solius about being realistic and believable. So I gotta do the same with everyone else.
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Alright, that's pretty understandable. I wasn't quite sure about the extent that abilities would be, power wise compared to cost. That and the extent of who was chasing us, what resources they had, etc. I mean I guess I've been watching too many Dragon Ball episodes

We just kind of winged it, because we kind of had to start from scratch. So I can definitely edit it.

Here, I'll just cut out the fight scene for now, copy and paste it. Maybe after they get more experience I can post that at a later date.

Edit:

I took the entire fight scene out, it's now just them driving to the meeting
Hidden 8 yrs ago → 8 yrs ago Post by AcerRo
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Thank you for being understanding.

I enjoyed reading it. It was a cool scene, just too far for right now.

Down the road however, that kinda stuff if all fair game.

Seriously, thank you for working with me on this.

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I replied to your PM.
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Could you maybe take a look over that post again? There are a bunch of typos, which is fine, but especially at the end it gets confusing. I know it was a copy-paste from the old thread, but it still says "two" instead of "three" when mentioning them, and it looks like the edit to @Superman's post removed the shootout entirely, so mentioning it in the news...
Hidden 8 yrs ago → 8 yrs ago Post by AcerRo
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Shit. Thank you for catching that.

And yes for now I have to use some copy pasta till I figure out who is really here and gonna post.
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@DarkwolfX37 The shooting could still happen, I just took the details out of it. I will probably flashback to the shooting eventually, as now I more or less understand the power scale now
Hidden 8 yrs ago Post by Polaris North
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We'll keep the fear and higher cost in mind. Sorry.
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@DarkwolfX37 The shooting could still happen, I just took the details out of it. I will probably flashback to the shooting eventually, as now I more or less understand the power scale now


Okie. Just didn't see it when I skimmed the edited post so I wanted to make sure everything was consistent.
Hidden 8 yrs ago → 8 yrs ago Post by AcerRo
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I'm not so much worried about your character being to kill/ take out a target or three. She has the history and skills to back that up. Either way, no worries at all. Thank you for being cooperative.
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