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Right, I see it now -- time to restart!
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Right, I see it now -- time to restart!


I wouldn't go that far. The only bit of your post that doesn't match up is how he gets the message. You could pretty much just switch the last parts of each half and it'd work with very little editing.
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I wouldn't go that far. The only bit of your post that doesn't match up is how he gets the message. You could pretty much just switch the last parts of each half and it'd work with very little editing.


youtube.com/watch?v=azKfAfZeSpM

Besides, I've still gotta practice for that montage.
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Oh, and if anyone would like to have their character and Arthur interact in the opening post either past or present/future than simply shot me a titanpad pad link thingy, I'd like to open strong and characters engaging in some manner is a good way to start.
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Personally, I use Google Docs to collab, just an fyi.
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Character sheet's finished with all the character opinions for everybody. If I got a bit too presumptive with describing people please let me know. Maybe we could even work out some "How they met" scenes to flash back to :p
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And there it be. Tell me whatcha' think. @Hexaflexagon

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Character sheet's finished with all the character opinions for everybody. If I got a bit too presumptive with describing people please let me know. Maybe we could even work out some "How they met" scenes to flash back to :p


In general, the "opinion of others" is written adorably.
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I'll get to the opinions on others section. Could be fun if anyone wants to shoot me PMs and ideas about where/how they may have first met/saw each other. Feel like it'd be more organic that way.
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Edited Arthur's Character Sheet to reflect his thoughts on Marcus.
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@Dogematix

Oh god, that's priceless

I love it
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I'm grading homework and will probably be grading homework for the rest of the night. All reviews, questions, comments, et cetra will continue tomorrow. @Dogematix@Dark Wind Do not worry I have not forgotten you.
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Two more heads and we'll have a proper platoon!
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Edited my CS for readability since my previous CS was weirdly stream-of-consciousness and/or confusing, and the character motivations didn't make 100% sense, etc. Opinions tbd but probably won't change a lot

Poor Hexaflexagon. Good luck.
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Made my first post. The After the battle part will be a collab with @neogreggory and it will be probably posted by him.

This is my first post in any kind of advanced RP and English is not my first language so I will really appreciate if you guys could give me some criticism. I do realize think this first post was way too heavy with introspection but that was just because there's no one around for Hanir to act superior to.
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I do realize think this first post was way too heavy with introspection but that was just because there's no one around for Hanir to act superior to.


NPCs, my friend -- NPCs make the best replacement-lackeys ^_^).

Edit: Oddly fascinating -- Conquistador's choice in font-colour creates a focus-effect, persuading you to read from the top without spoiling things o_O).

....Or perhaps it's just red acting on grey...don't know for sure. Cool either way though.
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Is it a thing for each character to use a different color in IC posts? I've not seen a lot of that before. Oh yeah it is

I do realize think this first post was way too heavy with introspection but that was just because there's no one around for Hanir to act superior to.


NEVER TOO MUCH INTROSPECTION.
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Right, @Drunken Conquistador, I finished it. As for criticisms...well, either I'm way too tired, or you did a really good job. I know you won't be able to focus on your character's religious/ethical beliefs *all* of the time, but it's definitely intriguing as an introduction to 'his world'.

Three walls up so far, hey-hey! (Also, I'm liking the colour-schemes for these posts...they're perrrrty.)

Edit: Good luck with that template.
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Hey, if anyone wants to do a collab with me, just send me a PM and we can work something out. Might as well get the ball rolling, right?
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I know you won't be able to focus on your character's religious/ethical beliefs *all* of the time, but it's definitely intriguing as an introduction to 'his world'.


I figured I could use the chance to do so now that we have yet to have any meaningful interaction between characters.

As for fonts and colors, I just saw everyone else doing it
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