[OOC] Endless

[Iuniper]

I'm going to need to completely rewrite or scrap entirely a few sections of my CS. (The structure is very poor, and while much of the grammar is correct, I use a lot of indirect object structure which sounds very bad. I will need to tweak some other parts entirely because they come off as very "special snowflakey" and that is a pretty awful basis for a character. It might just be better to scrap the entire thing. ) I expect it'll be a few days before I can make an IC post. Definitely before the weekend.

[Virgil]

@Iuniper Sounds like a bit of an overreaction...but if you think you (Edit: "should") do better, then best of luck upon you!

[Iuniper]

@Iuniper Sounds like a bit of an overreaction...but if you think you (Edit: "should") do better, then best of luck upon you!

@Virgil

All in the name of okay writing! And, erm, better understandability. I will be victorious!

[Athinar]

I'll get a post up tomorrow, I'm busy running a Quest on 4chan.

[Hexaflexagon]

Ignore

[Hexaflexagon]

Ignore this.

[Virgil]

Ah-haaaa....I just realized I really, really dislike having to write long posts.

Well, I don't know about you guys, but I think that: youtu.be/pFrMLRQIT_k?t=26s

[Hexaflexagon]

@Virgil
I was actually correct the first time! I'm just really tired. There are some time issues my dear friend. Basically the end of your two sections should be flipped is the easiest way of putting it. Cause in the past (the camp) Tarkus spoke in your guys heads while in the Future(Keep) Verse is going to gather you folks up. You have it the other way round. Besides that everything looks good!

Can't deal with rebels yet if the city hasn't been captured and all.

[Virgil]

@Virgil
I was actually correct the first time! I'm just really tired. There are some time issues my dear friend. Basically the end of your two sections should be flipped is the easiest way of putting it. Cause in the past (the camp) Tarkus spoke in your guys heads while in the Future(Keep) Verse is going to gather you folks up. You have it the other way round. Besides that everything looks good!

Can't deal with rebels yet if the city hasn't been captured and all.

@Hexaflexagon

You did see the beginnings titles of each time period, yes? Or are we going by another template? If we're going by another template, then I suppose I'll flip them around...but man that is an odd way to put it.

[Hexaflexagon]

@Virgil
Nah the temple is fine.

Cause in your One Sun Post Aveless-Fall sectiom this happens. "and a sensation like rain-droplets pelting his face overcame him: Job to be done. Voice's orders. Meet at the Weeping-Gate within the Hour. Pack Light."

Tarkus talks to you lot in the before the fall section.(In the intro post the first part at the keep is in the future, the second part at the camp is in the past.)

[Virgil]

@Virgil
Nah your template is fine. It's just that.

Cause in your One Sun Post Aveless-Fall sectiom this happens. "and a sensation like rain-droplets pelting his face overcame him: Job to be done. Voice's orders. Meet at the Weeping-Gate within the Hour. Pack Light."

Tarkus talks to you lot in the before the fall section.(In the intro post the first part at the keep is in the future, the second part at the camp is in the past.)

@Hexaflexagon

Right, swapped about.

[Virgil]

And just like that, one wall falls...and 9 more are constructed in its place ~_^).

[Hexaflexagon]

@Virgil
Thanks, sorry for being a pain.

Split time is fun! It's going to get even more fun. Cause while the future/present time line flows like it's supposed to the past once is a mess filled with time-skips as its really just to serve as the "highlights" of the past. (The past part is really there tonjust set up some auxiliary background and flavor) Just pay attention to the little intro blurb in bold though and y'll should be fine!

[Heat]

I don't think I'm gonna join this RP, though it looks awesome. Best of luck with it though, you all!

[Lexicon]

So, just to be clear, Tarkus sent a mental message to our characters prior to Avless' fall, right? Because I just re-read the intro post and @Virgil's response, but they don't match up. Not trying to be a jerk. I'm just confused lol.

[Virgil]

So, just to be clear, Tarkus sent a mental message to our characters prior to Avless' fall, right? Because I just re-read the intro post and @Virgil's response, but they don't match up.

@Lexicon

How so, Lexicon?

Edit: I believe he sends it *post* Aveless-Fall; Thus, he hands Verse the papers of her squad-mates, clapping his hands to show that the telepathic commands have been sent and duly received.

[Dogematix]

I interpreted them each getting the telepathic message pre fall while Verse is giving them orders in person post fall.

[Gwynbleidd]

<Snipped quote by Lexicon>

How so, Lexicon?

Edit: I believe he sends it *post* Aveless-Fall; Thus, he hands Verse the papers of her squad-mates, clapping his hands to show that the telepathic commands have been sent and duly received.

@Virgil

I do believe Lexicon is correct in this. The order appears underneath this heading:

"1128 Titans’s Rest
30th Year of the Undying’s Reign
Legion Camp
24 Hours Prior to the Taking of Aveless"

Unless I'm completely missing something, it's prior to the fall of Aveless.

Note: I don't mean to be intrusive on the conversation or anything, there's just a high probability I'm conjuring up a CS for this.

[Lexicon]

@Dogematix and @Dark Wind are right. It's a little confusing because @Hexaflexagon put the past events post second and the present/future events post first. Either way, it's not a tremendous deal, but I wanted to make sure I had all the details right before I started working on my intro. I tend to be extremely detail oriented lol.

[neogreggory]

Just throwing something out there, because I find it a powerful resource for RP. More so with a good large group.

titanpad.com is a useful site where multiple people can work on a text document at the same time, which is useful for when multiple player characters are interacting. Sadly the site will be shutting down come May, and that is a great pity but such is life.

Anyways, just wanted to share that with the group, since I feel it would help the RP a great deal.