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@Roughdragon1 discord.gg/yPcSenm Just incase you haven't seen it.
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@Zelosse
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I hope we can see some wonderful posts soon!

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Blarg... Something I've been putting off these past two weeks. I'm having a lot of trouble posting with my new schedule, so I've had to drop some games from other sites. I think I might have to drop this one too. I just can't find the time to post like I used too. Sorry if this is a big inconvenience for you guys, but I don't want to hold you all back.
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@berd thats ok Berd. Real life comes first so I understand. I wish you well in the future, and if your schedule frees up you're welcome to return.
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So this Rp has a Discord as well, I didn't think you'd do something like that Zel.

Also Since I'm posting here in the ooc I'll like to say I've shown interest in this rp and will be making a Cs soon.
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Sorry but I'm gonna be taking a little longer with making my Cs right now. Sorry again.
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Over all, I say no to Aria. I dislike much of the character, the backstory and personality create a character not well equip enough for Rift adventures, she is more suited for apprenticeship at the Mages Emporium if anything.

As well as I am not keen on the spells. For one, many are unoriginal and are just Skyrim shouts in spell form, as as well as the unique spells are unoriginal in their uses.

Fenrir is the most obvious, I can't tell you how many Rps I have seen with Fenrir spells or characters. It is rather overrated and over-used. Plus the notion takes away from plans in the future for some characters.
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Well that's a shame. Fortunately I had a couple of extra ideas in case she doesn't pan out. Lemme see if I can't dig them out.
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@Zelosse

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I will continue my nature of being blunt and honest.

I rather dislike it, and it seems like a perfectly fine CS for other types of Rp, but not this one my friend. The CS is rather "Edgy" and is poorly explained. It holds a very stereotypical background for the edgy out-cast family member, just with the addition of being a Dragonic being.

I honestly feel this RPC is better suited for an Anime, rather than this RP.
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@ManoftheNorth this rp has Anime/manga in the title. So that part is redundant now.

But as far as character sheets go, Spriggs, I have to believe you can do better than this. I'm fine with the dragon hybrid monstrosity you propose to me but your backstory doesn't explai any reason at all for ending up in Apothicus or joining the adventurers guild. It lacks everything but a really fucked up passive where you eat souls.
I'd sooner take a Zin clone than this.

Read through the Beastiary in the character tab, Ursas features a lot of interesting places. If you do not like them, feel free to elaborate where your character is from in detail. We can then add it to our index.

But as it stands, your current CS is just bland.
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@Zelosse Yeah I really didn't care too much as I put out this cs, half of the fact was that it was you as one of the Co-gms and the second was I never really devoted much time to the Cs.

I'll make a second one and actually try and this time make a humanoid.
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@Zelosse @ManoftheNorth Here's another cs to reject guys. Only took me a day to create, hope it's not too edgy or too much similar to an anime. I wanted to go with an outsider coming into a new world type of sterotype.

Also if you take that as being hostile Man of the north it's mostly aimed at Zel really, and I don't mean for it to be hostile really.


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Ok. I am somewhat happy you tried to make another CS. But before I review the CS. I am going to say this: Knowing a person is the Co-Gm, doesn't give an excuse to be lazy with the CS. You and Zel could be married and I will still say no lazily made CS's.

Now, I will review the second and give my opinion of it soon.
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@ManoftheNorth I don't know you, isn't Zel the gm? Or is the power switch around here and did Zel become Co-gm. Or is my memory so shit that I forgot about meeting you in the past somewhere on this site because I don't remember ever seeing you around here man. And personally, I'd never marry Zel, I don't roll that way.
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@Zelosse Yeah I really didn't care too much as I put out this cs, half of the fact was that it was you as one of the Co-gms and the second was I never really devoted much time to the Cs.

I'll make a second one and actually try and this time make a humanoid.


Ok, first off. If you aren't referring to Zel, don't mention Zel. Secondly, you can take your leave now.
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