Hidden 7 yrs ago 7 yrs ago Post by Stitches
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I don't want anyone to feel pressured and rushed. I feel like we can take advantage of the holiday for writing. If other people could give us updates on their progress like Mancer did, we're definitely fine with making sure to factor you guys into that post timeline.


Bullet points for the personality and history section, going to expand them soon. Still have to write the human physical description.
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I am working through the character sheet about now. Had quite a few things to settle throughout the day. I'm grappling with my idea for the talent. I had initially planned on making my character a clairvoyant but I fear that it might become too powerful in any potential battles to come. I'll spend a little more time working on the talents section to see if I can work out something better. Most of the other sections are already in place.

EDIT: I am done with Celest's character sheet. I probably need @Vowel Vagabond to endorse the "You, and" section though because the contents of that section pertains to Violet and Allard Park.
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@MancerNecro I like it! Only thing I might adjust is the Yes, and: section. It's meant to be a direct tie to everyone, a reason why we would vouch for each other and say "This person won't rat us out to the mummy."

I'd volunteer Parry as someone who might've babysat your character in the past, was approached as a magical coach, or might have used some wards to turn her powers down a bit when she was younger. Or heck, maybe she has met the lovely Dryad at some point!

Otherwise, I really like what I read there!
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Heya! Stiches' friend, i'll slap my C.S. for review here, please let me know if you need me to remove/alter anything and i'll get on it =)





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I'm also going to post my CS, I think it's done now. Enjoy!


 

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@DinoNuts Initial reaction: Wait, did I just read about bayou Swamp Fae? Hell yeah!!!

Second reaction: Oh, I can see my guy/gal/it getting blazed outta his mind and agreeing to a contract, and carrying it out just cuz they'd THINK it's binding XD

@Stitches OOC reaction: really cool! I like the idea of the changeling forgetting more as she grows older instead of the other way round. Kinda nifty!

IC reaction: "She burned the playmate carpet, chewed the ear off of three teddy bears, made herself a perfect twin to the Sanders' Ifrit and was almost taken home by them instead.

"SHE'S SO PRECIOUS! I can't wait to see her tomorrow!"

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@MancerNecro I like it! Only thing I might adjust is the Yes, and: section. It's meant to be a direct tie to everyone, a reason why we would vouch for each other and say "This person won't rat us out to the mummy."

I'd volunteer Parry as someone who might've babysat your character in the past, was approached as a magical coach, or might have used some wards to turn her powers down a bit when she was younger. Or heck, maybe she has met the lovely Dryad at some point!

Otherwise, I really like what I read there!


Ahhh okay. I will go around to rewriting that section in a little bit.

EDIT: I have changed that section. Hope everyone is okay with it. I tried to fit it within what might be reasonable of everyone's histories.
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could...

could i be the wandering jew

i have such an idea

theres also a lot of people here already though
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@MancerNecro Everything you wrote about Violet and Allard Park looks great to me.

I really liked the way you described how their friendship developed (Celest wandering in because of calming/nice energies and at first not knowing about the dryad).

Related, the "energy" of the park as something calming/nice is a great idea that I didn't really think about. It would provide a wonderful explanation for why mortals/supernaturals find the park increasingly pleasant to visit!

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Also, I really like the latest characters!

Although I'm terrified to see that we have both a eldritch tax collector and an arcane accountant!

All we need now is a lawyer... :3

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If anyone needs help establishing random connections, feel free to send me a PM, I'm friendly, promise!

Violet is a social creature and sees life as an adventure, so she's likely to wander into all manner of places.
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@Vowel Vagabond A Lawyer... or a consigliere XD
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Hello!
Noticed y'all got that small group tag up there at the top of this RP,
so I'm curious if you have filled all of your spaces or if there's room for a Utrax?
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Looks like now you need an ogre repo-man or a magic con artist. I know last time I used a human hunter with very little connections and everyone hated him, heheh.
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@HeySeuss@Aleranicus
Hello!
Noticed y'all got that small group tag up there at the top of this RP,
so I'm curious if you have filled all of your spaces or if there's room for a Utrax?


It's a matter of when character sheets are in. We only have six right now.

Looks like now you need an ogre repo-man or a magic con artist. I know last time I used a human hunter with very little connections and everyone hated him, heheh.


Welcome back! And that sounds really good, actually. The hunter was always fun too.
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Please review my character sheet!
*Finger guns*
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@DinoNuts@Stitches Characters approved.
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@UtraxAlso approved. Actually, the whole idea that the Unicorns have an aura of innocence rather than being the embodiment is a hilarious twist.
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@UtraxAlso approved. Actually, the whole idea that the Unicorns have an aura of innocence rather than being the embodiment is a hilarious twist.


Thank you!
I was trying to figure out how I could make Unicorns more interesting than just...
magic horse.
one horn.
one love.
Hahaha.
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@HeySeuss
so uh


I'm posting from work. Have no time to read the link. @HeySeuss will have say, I think.
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@HeySeuss I only just realized that all of the avatars I've seen you use are dancing gifs. Classy.
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