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@The One Might be wise to put that in a spoiler.
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@Jinxer How's that?
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I like the idea but their powers don't manifest (at all) until they enter the facility. There have been no signs, hints or even 'dormant' passive effects before this so that wouldn't quite work for Rika's back story.
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@Jinxer Rika hasn't shown any of his abilities or any hint of them. The not aging is due to a rare disease, where the body doesn't pass puberty
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Are you still accepting more people? This sounds super interesting and I'd love to join!
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That still wouldn't quite fit in with the lore of the RP. Think of the world as being as ours until this event, with no magic or powers of any kind in existence until after the start of the RP, including illnesses that can only be described as mystical in nature.

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@Jinxer That's fine but he isn't showing any symptoms or signs of his abilities? What exactly doesn't work in his history? I can fix it but right now I don't know what doesn't make sense.
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The physical ageing aspect seems unrealistic, in the context of no powers existing prior to this. Also the history of being raised by monks is a bit 'out there' for me. Although I didn't say it explicitly, the residents of the facility will have mostly led fairly normal lives up until now instead of something that feels a little mystical.

Also, could you put the CS in a hider/spoiler? The image is large and might cause issues for people using RPG on mobile devices.
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@Jinxer The aging is completly possible, I can't remember the exact name of the disease, but it is possible. I can however change his backstory so he isn't raised by monks if that is what you'd like?
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I acknowledge that it's possible but its not in keeping with the general gist of the RP, its idea and aims.

In terms of backstory, although there is no such thing as 'normal' they should have led a relatively 'normal' or 'mainstream' life. That does not mean that it should be bland and that it can't be unique. simply that it should be relevant. Other character sheets posted so far have a good grasp and show a decent variety of character backgrounds, it may be worth looking over them for examples and inspiration.
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@Jinxer Ok then no problem. I will think up another character soon then. ^^
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Will everyone have their own room in this facility or will there be roommates?
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Everyone will have individual rooms in the facility. I'll randomly assign numbers once we start.
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Sorry my computer spazzed and double posted.
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Picture link is broken. Please put it in a spoiler as well.
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Looks good. As Aquanthe said, if you pop that in a hider/spoiler then that'd be helpful.

In terms of the image, if you go to view image and then copy the URL, that should fix the link issue. Go ahead and move that to the characters tab once you've done that.
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You didn't exactly have to copy and post it once more. RPG has an edit button. I'm not sure where it is on mobile, but on a computer it is down in the bottom right corner.

Also, for the hider/spoiler, do the following:

[(REMOVE THIS)hider=My Hider]

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You'll need to remove the text I encircled in parentheses. I just put it there to stop the hider code from activating.
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My computer is currently spazzing, so sorry about all of the random things that aren't working and that are being reposted, I'll fix it.
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That's fine. Alternatively, you could just highlight the text and click the eye button next to the @ symbol and the quotation marks.
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