I wanted to have something done today but it simply cannot be done. Prepare for a 2-3 more day wait before I can be expected to have free time to post.. Sorry folks!
@Zelosse There's a continuity issue with my last post and your latest one. My post ended off with Kaz wrapped around Lorken's leg but yours said that Lorken kicked him before that could even happen. Can you change it so Lorken kicked him off after he wrapped himself around Lorken's leg?
EDIT: Alternatively, I could just mentioned that's what happened in my next post so you don't need to edit anything.
@Blu if you wrapped around his leg, how could he kick Kaz off without injuring his own leg? Can't be done. Simpler to deny the move succeeding entirely rather than saying it worked but then not really.
@Zelosse Well damn, wish you would've told me sooner that his tactic wouldn't have worked so I could have changed it back then instead of finding out now. It just seems weird that I'll have to either leave as is and not mention it at all in the next post or acknowledge that entire last part that I wrote took place in his mind or something which renders the last bit of internal monologue out of place.