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Any hints as to where you guys are finding the good pretty pics?
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Honestly, I just google imaged search.
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I use Google or deviantart most of the time xD
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Bing for me!
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@Sterling I used Google but on occasion, pixiv. You do have to fiddle with the key words you use and it's a hore to find pictures that don't look too young but do I wish you luck!
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Does this work for you?
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I'll have to take a look tomorrow. It's getting late for me and I'm not feeling quite well so I may turn in soon.
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There we go, thats that finished. Written on my phone so could be better - sorry about that.
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Any news?
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Feedback time!

Everyone looks to have gotten their first choice, woo hoo! Lucky ducks.

I'll work on my character tonight and tomorrow and we should get things rolling either Sat or Sun. I do have family coming tonight and staying for a week so they may take of some of my time.

@FernStone I didn't really need the additional paragraph about his personality, as it just adds more clutter in my mind but it's totally fine to keep it, I just didn't need folks putting in extra work when we've got an IC to divulge contextual details about how they react to situations and people.

Moving on to history! "But soon he was one of the few left without them." Assuming the city they're in is vast, he wouldn't be considered part of a 'few' without a power but the only one, so you should tweak that phrasing. And your final paragraph regarding the reunion is also unneeded since that is something I'll be explaining in my introduction post. And the awareness of having a power shouldn't be included in the CS since that will come a tad bit into the RP itself.

Other than those things needing tweaks, you're free to post in the CS tab and you're also given Air, congrats!

@Sterling No tweaks needed, you're good to go! Your girl has Fire. Feel free to post her into the CS tab at your leisure.

@Silverink You gave additional information a bit prematurely as your CS shouldn't include life after the 'second' kidnapping. The first kidnapping is fine but the CS itself should not have information about them discovering their skills (or finding fame) since it will happen in the IC itself, as opposed to before we kick things off. So the two paragraphs in his personality section can probably be deleted.

Like above, your history needs to be rewritten a bit since halfway through he gets his power but that isn't the case. He'll be taught the power in the IC so you'll have to change the half or your history. You could touch upon his first kidnapping if you'd like or you could talk more about the others in his family, since it sounds like he had a big boisterous upbringing and still felt like the black sheep of sorts.

You'll be given Beast but you can't post in the CS tab until I see the edits done on your guy. :)

@Panic Like SI, you may be better off deleting the paragraph portion of your girl's personality section. We won't talk about their circus life/powers since they won't have been informed of them yet.

Your history looks good to me, save for the last paragraph which you'll need to delete but you can touch upon it in the IC, likely your introduction post.

So with her job, you'll just put maid instead saying "before the show" etc.

And she'll be getting Greenery. So once you tweak those and run it by me again, you'll be able to post it in the CS tab.
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Just made the quick edits! Let me know if there is anything else I should do.
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Looks good to me, @Panic Go ahead and post 'er to the CS tab! (don't forget to edit the element in)
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@GenkaiWill do, making edits now!
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@Genkai makes sense personality wise, just kinda based my layout off the other two as well cause I'm always pretty worried filling out CS stuff ^^"

In terms of the history I didn't mean it that way, I meant more one of the few who was yet to develop and then the others still got powers. But yeah that wording definitely does noooottt get this across so I shall change that and delete the last paragraph of the history as well :)

I'll change my CS and post it tomorrow, probably

Edit: also sorry that was a long post just to say I'm making edits xD whoops
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@FernStone Alrighty, thanks.

@Silverink Kay, let me know when you're done.

I'm also debating whether or not I want to add another female to the mix and give her rock...or perhaps make her The Visionary. I may do that...still unsure yet.
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No problemo - also to say that I'm going away Sunday for a few days, but I'll be back after a few days so should be able to post in decent time assumimg it starts at the weekend (Though will definitely not be the first response).
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@Genkai Fixed it!
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Looks good to me, you're free to post it in the CS tab!
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@Genkai Woo! Any idea when we will be kicking off?
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When FS edits their CS and posts it, we should be good to go. I'm still working on my sheets myself but I'd like to get things rolling by Sunday at the latest. Since I have family coming in tonight, it'll be tough to know when I'll have a few hours to myself but if FS gets their done tomorrow afternoon I might be able to get the intro up then but it's tough to say.
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