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I don't really have any problems with your character, but it's mostly up to Messy. (Would've said something sooner, but been busy and was expecting Messy to have already)
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@Lunarlors34 Hm, approved. Add em to the char tab
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Uhhh...I thought you already accepted him
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Same here XD
I am so confused right now. My character was already in the tab XD
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Ok, that's fine. But can you please leave a review on my character, so that I know what to do with him?
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Name: Hakuryu Genikos
Age: 17
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History:

Hakuryu was the first son, along with a younger sister, of a retired military commander in the imperial army, yet a myth was spread that he is the son of the god of war, Odin, due to his natural born supernatural power of soul summoning. Never once known the face of his mother, Hakuryu was raised entirely by the kind yet strict father who was widely reowned for his significance in the resistance against the demon lord. During his childhood, Hakuryu was impressed by his father's ambition as a soldier, which was to use his grits and strengths to defeat the demon king. He was obsessed with studying his father's old records and legacies, and vowed to leave an even bigger one. He did not go to primary nor secondary school and was instead tutored at home by an old acquaintance to his father, professor Sarafin, who was a brilliant tutor at Magicana high school, who was reowned for her wide research in many fields, including ethics, medicine, politics, history, mathematic, physics, chemistry, leadership and most importantly curiosity. For the next nine years of his life, he was taught, developing a passion for pursuing knowledge, a decent understandings about the world around him, and a fairly good control over his power

Impressed by the intelligence and maturity of Hakuryu, Sarafin offered him a scholarship in the Magicana high school, where he would continue to further his powers and his understandings of it, while learning to grip on his life purposes, his ambitions that Hakuryu had discovered before. He was granted the chance to study at Magicana free of charge, but his living expenditure wasn't covered. Because of his big ego was to be independent, and the fact that his younger sister was still in needs of care from his father, he accepted the work as a school librarian and a grader to earn some extra money to buy his personal belongings.

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His most notable traits, the one that can be seen right from the first contact with him is his hard-working nature. Clinging on his lifelong goal is to do something big for mankind to look at, Hakuryu is very industrious, taking his study and job very seriously, and is prone to get irritated or even angry when people around him do not do the same. He takes his steps cautiously, never making any assumptions, prefering to analyse basing on facts and logics before making decisions. However, this trait can be abandoned when someone drives Hakuryu into a bad mood, as he is likely to be impulsive and have violent mood swing.

Born in a family with high social status, and his vision for greatness somewhat caused him to be condescending towards other students, especially for lazy ones. And that condescending trait can be more severe when he faces those who lack the vision of their own future and those who are being weak-willed, not trying hard enough, or pushing their responsibility to others, to achieve what they want. His manners and behaviors in times like that can be inconsiderate, cold and ruthless. Nevertheless, if you get on his good side, he can be friendly, fair, sympathetic and loyal, as he values the bond he has with the souls of dead soldiers in Valhalla.

He has an ambition, and works himself to achieve it. But sometimes he aims too high and too far, thus resulting in him over-exerting his stamina. This can lead to exhaustion and sometimes stress. He can also be greedy at times, due to his 'aiming-high' nature.

What your character dream is: To continue his father's will and ambition to defeat the demon lord, and create an everlasting legacy for the next generations to remember.

What kind of magic your char has: Warrior's soul summoning

A rare type of magic. Specifically, Hakuryu has the ability to access the gate of Valhalla, the realm that contains the soul of deceased warriors who fell in battle, open them and summon these souls at his side at a cost of his own energy. This thus earned him the title of 'the son of Odin', the god who rules the place. The longer the stay of the soul at Valhalla (or simply the longer the time they spent there since they died), the easier it is for him to summon. That is why he mostly summons ancient to late-medieval soldiers, as they do not require much to call from Valhalla. But still he can only call around two hundred men at best, and they are generally not as tough as normal humans. Once they are killed, the souls will dissipate and return back to Valhalla, awaiting for further calls. This allows Hakuryu to summon the same soldier as many times as he wants, but he still needs energy to do so, and it also depends on the soul's willingness to be summoned.

For personal combat, Hakuryu is able to summon a long, Greek-styled, forward curving blade. The weapon acts nothing different from a normal sword, aside from the fact that when it is broken, the weapon can be mended back, at a significant cost of the user's energy, of course. He is decent at fighting on foot, but he is best when he fights on the back of his companion, a black heavy war horse, Seraphim, named after his most respected tutor, Sarafin, which he is also capable of summoning.


Alright, you want my opinion, here it is. Parents, what happened to his mother? Did she die in childbirth or something else?? Also his powers, were they a gift from the gods or was his one parent actually a god? Does his sister also have abilities or is it just him. Is his abilities inherited(like it was a dormant gene or something). Finally, he got a scholarship because he was just that good? I think that's all I got for now.
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Ok I've edited it a little bit. His mother died after giving birth to his sister (he did not have memories of her then). And his power is his only, granted purely by chances, no genes. And the scholarship is for his potential learning capacity.

I do tend to leave things vague for the sake of development, but after thinking back and forth, it might not be necessary here
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So do I, I prefer to reveal a character's history and motivations IC.
I mean, I wrote such a simplistic history for Cody XD (Well, I suppose there isn't really much else to say about his history lol)
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Good to see ya back Noodles :D
Got my tick of approval.
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@Noodles Aprooooved
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@Lunarlors34 Think we should start soon?
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I'm ready when you are.
Though as a heads up, I might be busy with handling my current hamstring injury and work. Doesn't mean I won't be around, just means I won't be around as much as I'll like and if I'm not on for a bit you guys know why.
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This can start ~

Injuries commonly heal within 2 weeks, which is quite a short time here ~~
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I have been given a 2-4 week timeframe, but I hope to be back playing again 2-3 weeks and running again next week
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