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Well, I hope they know that their champion is a self-entitled prick with an ego the size of a dragon (*cough*Htraknu*cough*).
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@Claw2k11 He will suffice.
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Our party is starting to look pretty full including the guys who helped start this thing. Anyone who expressed interest may apply but further apps from new people will not be accepted.


Phew. Glad I got in yesterday. ^^
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hey guys sorry im late <3







Htraknu's cultists aren't really slavers but other than that, you're good.
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<Snipped quote by PrinceOfHeaven>

Htraknu's cultists aren't really slavers but other than that, you're good.


>Orcs promised plunder and slaves from the conquered lands.

Figured this amounted to Htraknu approved slaving.
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<Snipped quote by Mardox>

>Orcs promised plunder and slaves from the conquered lands.

Figured this amounted to Htraknu approved slaving.


He does but they haven't really gotten the ball rolling there yet.
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Sorry if it's kinda poor, my creativity took a nose-dive today for whatever reason.

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Sorry if it's kinda poor, my creativity took a nose-dive today for whatever reason.



Couple issues. First of all, the dark deities of the Felridgean pantheon don't always get along (Grimnos and Afgur kinda hate each other), so Grimnos would give Arrak dragon powers as a champion of Grimnos rather than all seven of the major dark deities. Secondly, either in weaknesses or other, you should write "unspecified consequences for his blessings" as this WILL come back to bite you. This is a powerful character and there is always a price to pay for that. Other than that, there are a few problems with wording and grammar but nothing that can't be edited.
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THE PAD IS DOWN.

I REPEAT. THE PAD IS DOWN. Either that or my internet is terribad.
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THE PAD IS DOWN.

I REPEAT. THE PAD IS DOWN. Either that or my internet is terribad.


Patience. This occasionally happens. Should be fine in a bit.
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I've got to go, might BBL
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It looks good, accepted.

For those wondering why I've accepted this despite the "full" status, it's because he was in our little group beforehand.
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I'd like you to tell me about this university your guy learned magic in.
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I have hopefully improved this enough to be within acceptable parameters.

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I have hopefully improved this enough to be within acceptable parameters.



Looking good, you're in.
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I'm taking a vacation this week to New Orleans in a few days so I might be inactive for a while, though I'll still have access to browsing on my phone. Not sure if I'll be able to post.
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Due to players dropping out, I am re-opening the RP to new applicants.
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Going on a cruise, see you all in a few days.
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