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Yes please! Not mandatory but helpful :)
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Okay here is my CS ^.^
The writing sample is still being worked on, just need to know if she's a good fit for this story.
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I feel so bad for your character going forward, may the hounds of hell be blinded by her beauty :P I'll ACCEPT, interesting character arc lies ahead for the pure of heart :P
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Awesome thank you so much!
That was quick hahaha. I did fear she might be too goody two shoes for this world but I gave her enough depth.....I hope.

Yes this is going to be an interesting character development journey for sure :P
Really looking forward to it though.
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Precisely why I accepted her. The world is not black and white per say, and having that pure white splash in with the gray could make the party as a whole different. I also like watching the light get corrupted through experience, so there's that ;)
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Alright people. When I get home from work I will be pushing hard to finish my IC post and get the ball rolling forward on this RP! If anyone has any questions in the mean time either ask here or PM me :)
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@NariataI am interested in this idea. I'm going to read over it again. Chances are I will most likely be making an interesting new race.
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Awesome! I am digging all the creativity in this bunch!
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I wanna jump on this new race wagon. Except my idea is more of a sub-race typa thing. Is that cool?
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@Torack As a new character or as an update to your existing?
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Could I maybe make another race? It'll be the cliche orc, but I think we do need a warrior based culture, that may or may have not been created by demons, but the orcs rebelled from their masters and are now the demons worst nightmare since an average orc will probably be 7 to 8 feet tall and hate demons very much!
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Nah, I was thinking more along the lines of that this race are gonna be enemies, closely associated with the dragon that blew outta the mountain you know.
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Oooh! They sound interesting. Are they going to be a type of lizardmen?
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If you still need a writing sample, let me know. I can easily link one to you. I see these guys as Winged Lannisters.











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6'1" | 172 lbs | Wingspan - 6 feet

Balthair is handsome as expected from an Arial. He has immaculate skin and platinum-blonde hair of the texture of feathers. There are even a few feathers mixed into his silken blades. His skin dimly glows, his irises though white are lightly outlined in black halos. His complexion is snowy with gentle sheens of silver. His armor is a mixture of Lightning Stone plates and Cloud Thread [See the “Equipment” section]. A smug smile is always slightly cocked on his face and an Earthborn could tower over him, and he will still appear to be looking down. The air of arrogance is thick with this one—again, as expected. Balthair wields two weapons: his primary is a claymore named Lightning Edge, and his second are twin short swords named Cloud and Squall (get it?).



Balthair is a stereotypical Arial. He is arrogant and 100% confident in his skill and abilities. He may talk-the-talk, but he can also walk-the-walk. His arrogance makes him fearless. He puts on a good front that makes him come off as nothing but a cocky son of a bitch, but he is a champion for a reason. He will often stretch a fight to assess a formidable opponent or yield when he knows he will be defeated. Of course, he would never admit to failure, loss, or defeat. A White Knight never fails for as long as he is alive! In truth, a White Knight only fulfills his or her purpose in death to die in service to the Sky Queen. Balthair, like all Arials, sees Earthborns as inferior. This doesn’t make him too popular with allies but perhaps overtime he will learn humility. For now, Balthair aids the Earthborn because they share a common enemy and that is all. He has a cynical outlook on life. He believes that once the threat is all dealt with that the Earthborn would just go back to killing each other and he would return to the skies to serve his queen. Huh! He might not ever see them again. What’s the point of making friends?

If by now you couldn’t figure out that Balthair is a natural bastard, then maybe you and him will make the best of comrades. He is very vocal about his opinions. He will speak up if he feels a plan is stupid, stinks, and just speak his thoughts aloud whether people want to hear them or not. If ever a comrade actually manages to receive a compliment from the Arial, they should take it as an achievement for Balthair rarely compliments Earthborns.



I wrote the history when I explained the Race, but I will express some character development desires in this section. Balthair is quite the dick, but overtime, as he travels and finds himself growing closer to his team, his arrogance and cynical outlook will lighten. I would also be interested in Balthair developing a relationship with a non-Arial character. It is something unheard of to the Arials, and it would be interesting to see.



  • Lightning Stone Plate Armor The armor makes Balthair immune to lightning or alterations in the electromagnetic field. It is a necessary armor if any Arial is to safely use weapons forged from Lightning Stone. The armor is light and conducts electricity easily.
  • Cloud Thread is a material found only in Sepherine. Threads are taken from the clouds and woven on a magic loom into clothing. Cloud Thread makes the wearer feel as light as a feather, allowing the wearer to fly and fight for lengthy periods.
  • Lightning Edge is the name of Balthair's claymore. It is a claymore forged from lightning stone that is capable of throwing chains of lightning with its every swing. Upon contact with a metal weapon, the user will find themselves being electrocuted on contact. On a stormy night or day, Balthair can use Lightning Edge to cast the special ability Smite. A powerful spear of lightning will drop down from the clouds on the intended targets, juicing them with so much volts of electricity they explode.
  • Cloud and Squall are the twin short swords magnetically attached to Balthair's greaves. Like, Lightning Edge, the short swords can send small whips of lightning at an enemy. Balthair can join the two blades with a chain of lightning and whirl them like linked sickles.
  • Rain Water a skin of rain water that Balthair carries with him. Most will see him take a few sips of water, but he rarely eats or drinks. He hardly feels the urge.



  • Jetstream an attack where Balthair flies by an enemy or enemies so fast that the winds from his passing will bowl them over.
  • Light Scatter with a strong flap from his wings, Balthair will release a cloud of white feathers that will suddenly flash with a blinding light to disorient and distract an enemy or enemies.
  • Thunder Clap When Blathair is equipped with Cloud and Squall, he can clang the weapons together to have them produce a thunderous thoom, sending destructive decibels in a cone at multiple enemies.

On a stormy day or night, Balthair will often fly into the clouds to recharge his lighting stone weapons and armor. He can only do so with natural lightning. If he goes too long without a storm, then his weapons and armor will become average stone.
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Oooh! They sound interesting. Are they going to be a type of lizardmen?


They gon be a lot cooler than that!
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@Holy Soldier I think the writing sample is just to introduce your character, not to prove you're good at writing.
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I'm very interested! And after I get through the entirety of the information, I'll get to work on a character!

EDIT: Alright, I've got my character in mind and will be putting it to keyboard after I get a question answered through PM.
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While normally I am hesitant about excepting Angelic characters, but with a few adjustments it will work; besides, it gave me a wicked cool idea for something, in particular, check your messages.
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@Torack Don't wanna intrude, but instead o just "stealing" the life force how about they corrupt and transform the environment to one that resembles the demon realm? I mean that is corruption. Things dying is just decay and death.

Just an idea.
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